Journey Begins

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Re: Journey Begins


The horse started to slow after it had its fill of running free. It had come to a slow trot by the time Luvi finally caught up to it. She had wanted it to come to a full stop but it showed no signs of wanting to stop even when she called out to it and tried to pull on its saddle. She ended up having to leap onto it as it ran, ultimately wrapping her hands around its neck.

Putting herself in the saddle while the horse was in motion was impossible. This had all gone a lot differently in her head. She ended up having to let go of the horse and tumble onto the ground.

“Damned horse,” she muttered as she dusted herself off. She took off again and this time, thankfully, the horse came to a stop when she put a rune of weakness on its side, allowing her to grab and yank on its reins.

Despite not wanting to wear herself out, she had done just that. She still had the option of using magic, but she was physically beat. She’d run for miles, much longer than she’d ever run in one go outside of a training setting. She was surprised she’d been able to go for so long. She thought of riding the horse back to the group, but she didn’t think this horse was going to let her ride it after what they’d just gone through. She’d slowly walk it back and be thankful that her own horse was better trained.

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The group of soldiers and travelers found themselves waiting by the roadside, their wagon now repaired and ready to continue the journey. Goku watched where Luvi had disappeared, chasing after the runaway horse.

The group settled in, taking the opportunity to rest and hydrate. Some soldiers chatted among themselves, while others took the time to inspect their gear or share a few light-hearted jokes to pass the time.

The group finally saw a small figure approaching. Luvi, with the runaway horse in tow, was making her way back to the group. A collective sigh of relief spread among the soldiers as she got closer, and Goku allowed a small smile to cross his face.

"See? I told you she'd be fine," he said, mostly to himself but loud enough for the others to hear.

When Luvi rejoined the group, a few soldiers stepped forward to take the horse and secure it properly this time.

"Good work," Goku said. "Now we can finally get moving again."

As they prepared to set off, one of the soldiers pointed towards the horizon, where a small town could be seen in the distance. "Look over there," one said. "There's a town not too far off. We could reach it before nightfall and sleep in proper beds tonight."

The idea was met with enthusiastic agreement. The prospect of a warm meal and a comfortable bed was a welcome change from the usual campsites and hard ground. Goku felt a sense of relief wash over him at the thought of not having to sleep under the stars again, at least for one night.


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Thread: Journey Begins
City/Area: The Imperial Regions
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Endurance -> Master

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Luvi's explorations of her new magic are intriguing to write about, although I somehow doubt using a few porthole portals or such will result in overstepping. Maybe if you do them too many in succession, but otherwise I guess you're being careful here in how much you can accomplish at novice magic. That is sensible.

The travel thread overall was a good premise for some low-key grinding. I appreciate that you introduced some difficulty in along the way, with the wagon needing repairs and so on. And the soldiers thinking Luvi was possibly a little crazy.

Good job!

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  • Rupturing: Phasing portals cannot pass objects through them
  • Rupturing: Weapons can cut open portals
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Hmm, I would've included some engineering skill as being used here, in fixing the wagon and its axle. Otherwise good work keeping spirits up among the ttroops.

Goku really is a boon addition to the troop, even if he doesn't have rank or position in the army, I'm sure they appreciate the help and healing.

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