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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: The ineffable
City/Area: Uthaldria
Notes/Warnings: Re-Review! I didn't get any rewards for this thread because i was away while it was reviewed. I really can't remember. This is an old thread from 2017. I wont request any rewards besides points. Why not slap me with 15 experience and get yourself 25 point bank points in return? Don't even have to read it.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: nah
Loot: nah
Injuries/Overstepping: idk
Renown: idk
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: IDK
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Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
-- Bertrand Russell
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Alpha
City/Area: Eastern gauthrel, Uthaldria, Western heights.
Notes/Warnings: Mild gore, nothing too graphic
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fridgar: Alpha
Fridgar: Lothar form is just another totem
Fridgar: Revealed Becomer
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: Nah
Magic Experience?: Nah?
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Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Her First Hunt
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Mount: Placing a mount on a horse
Ranged (Shortbow): Shooting weakened gazelle at short range
Ranged (Shortbow): Nocking an arrow
Hone: Using a sound-based trigger
Hone: Placing the rune of weakness into a runic trap
Hunting: Using a runic trap to weaken a group of gazelles

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes
word count: 78
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Rhino Poo
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None, part 1/2 of a story
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Mount: Enticing a mount with a treat
Hunting: Identifying rhino poo
Hone: Using the rune of numbing to reduce pain
Strength: Cutting through rhino hide
Dual Wield: Katana x Katana
Running: Running from a rhino

Yaralon: Good Rhino hunting spot


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes
word count: 76
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: [Treth] A New Arc
City/Area: Treth, Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: job thread, and this thread is eligible for rewards for being a holiday thread
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Cooking; Ingredient: Infused Olive Oils for fancy flavors
Medicine: how to make and store essential oils; they must be stored in dark glass bottles because the sun can damage them
Medicine: how to make and store infused oils
Medicine: essential oils are highly concentrated and are so powerful that they should never be applied directly to the skin, while infused oils are much milder, and are gentle enough to be used on bare skin.
Medicine: Carrier oils are mainly oils extracted from the nuts, seeds or kernels of plants; they are fairly neutral, so they can be used to compliment essential oils and are an excellent choice for diluting essential oils for skin and hair products such as massage oils, scrubs, salves, lotions and balms as well as herbal remedies
Medicine: uses for catnip as an herb

Non Skill Knowledges

Infused oils: herbs with natural dyes may be infused in oil for use in adding color to soaps and other body care products
Infused oils: you can infuse a mixture of herbs into an oil of your choice rather than just one type of herb; one example of this is to infuse hops flowers, lavender flowers, and chamomile flowers in jojoba oil for use as a massage oil

Nehaer Holiday: New Arc's Day
New Arc's Day: is on the 1st of Cylus

Catnip: is also called catmint, catswort, and field balm


Loot: +2 Bonus Skill Points, and Free Item: A smooth black stone which glows each New Arc's Day. It emits heat for the entirety of the trial, warming up those who celebrate in the cool Cylus weather
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Dead Love Their Talk
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This is part of a questline, awarded here, and as per the guidelines: "When you have achieved and completed one Domain, signed off by me: Amaris will be able to whisper into the mind of one person up to five sentences per trial. "

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Apologizing when you think you've been hurtful
Etiquette: Offering help to clarify something
Interrogation: Asking questions to gain information
Linguistics: Sometimes wording matters
Psychology: Fragmenting of memories

Self: You're not like other ghosts
Immortal: Vri: Has given you a difficult task
Immortal: Vri: Made you a ghost

Loot: "When you have achieved and completed one Domain, signed off by me: Amaris will be able to whisper into the mind of one person up to five sentences per trial. "
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No


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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Written in Snow
City/Area: (Where is this taken place in?)
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
Requested Rewards:
Thaddeus
Knowledge:
Endurance: conversation can distract you from the cold or pain of sore muscles
Hunting: changes in an animal's gait can change how tracks appear
Hunting: Knowing an animal's habits make tracking easier
Fieldcraft: Keeping gear together and covered to avoid damage or loss
Detection: Changes in companion's demeanor
Leadership: Helping others ease their load to make travel less tiring.
Leadership(?): Knowing when to lead, and when to follow
Navigation: Established roads are easier to follow than wandering through the woods
Navigation: Clear pathways make spotting danger ahead easier
Endurance: Walking through the cold even when you ache
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Ithecal: My leucism and facial structure make me look like a girl...
Atashi: Cannot tell gender
Atashi: Sarcastic?

Loot: Recovery of horse and belongings(not tent/bedroll though)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: No

Atashi
Knowledge:
Detection: Examining your companion for scars.
Discipline: Remaining alert and keeping watch for a potential Ambush.
Endurance: Conversation can distract you from the cold.
Endurance: Swapping arms helps to rest one side of your body and exert the other.
Investigation: Searching a cart for arrows to determine if it has been raided.
Investigation: Trying to determine someone's gender based on various aspects of their person.
Navigation: The road is the easiest method of navigating to cities.
Strength: Carrying a severed haggen-fohl head.
Strength: Lifting the haggen-fohl head into the cart.
Strength: The pain of DOMS (Delayed Onset Muscle Soreness) after exerting yourself.
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Location: Etzos: the road between Etzos and Westguard.
Thaddeus: A girl?
Thaddeus: A guy?
Thaddeus: Probably a guy.
Thaddeus: Has feminine features, but a deep voice and a guy's name so is probably a guy??
Thaddeus: Doesn't speak much.
Thaddeus: Has a scar across his neck.
Thaddeus: Travelling to Etzos but doesn't know why.
Thaddeus: Your travelling companion.
Thaddeus: Named Thaddeus.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: I spy with my fly eye
City/Area: Viden Infirmiry
Notes/Warnings: Stupid title and kinda plodding pace for the story. Maybe boring?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Meditation: Meditation by the numbers.
Meditation: Eliminating thoughts as they occur.
Meditation: Being patient enough to start the meditation over again.
Meditation: Repetitive tasks help the meditative process.
Yithnai: Carrier: Spreading disease to others.
Yithnai: Egg: Growing accustomed and resistant to cold, though the chill weakens and slows his movements.

Loot: He did his slave duties this cycle with this thread and the previous.
Injuries/Overstepping: Maybe getting sick again. Who knows.
Renown: He's about to get disappeared. Nobody will care or notice.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No, blessing exp is it
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Identity

Nzi'Fuma is going by the name Zemos until further notice

Marks

Yithnai: Nzi'Fuma has glowing green eyes.
Witchmarks and Mutations:
  • Dread Warpaint: Zemos' upper face has a darkened discoloration, like sticky tar to the touch. It resembles warpaint.
  • Flies and other insects tend to crawl over his body intermittently. Sometimes a maggot can be seen crawling over his skin.
  • He has a slight slowness to his speech, as if he struggles to keep his tongue low in his mandible.

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Yithnain Suggestions
Dialogue
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The power of sight
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings:
I intentionally overstepped heavily by activating the rune of sight while one competency lower than required. This was planned to result in my expert mutation, as described here.

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Butchering: Chopping off limbs
Hone: Using the rune of sight to see in the dark
Strength: Hoisting bits of rhino into a wagon
Endurance: Having your skin torn off from overstepping
Dual Wield: Katana x Katana: alternating strikes between weapons

Mark Knowledge: Stare Down: I’m not afraid of death either… am I afraid of anything anymore?

Loot: ~1/2 a rhino carcass
Injuries/Overstepping: Overstepping results in my expert mutation. Blindness for 1 week while she adjusts to the mutation.
Renown: 5-10 saving a man from a rhino and lion attack

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes
word count: 142
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tender Whispers
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Its kinda weird
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Gangui:
- Rabu: Mighty Tunawa
- Rabu: might be crazy enough to be Gangui’s friend

Rabu:
- Linguistics: Using symbolism to define a word.
- Linguistics: The sound of the word can be a hit to its meaning
- Animal husbandry: Don't leave your donkey alone
- Animal husbandry: Calming down a spooked donkey.
- Persuasion: Convincing someone into a healthy change scenery
- Gangui: Friend of the Tunawa
- Niv: Gangui's dead Tunawa friend.

Loot: nope
Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Renown: I don't think so.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Nope
Last edited by Rabu on Wed Jan 23, 2019 11:44 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 102
One of Rabu's Mortal Born abilities involves emean creatures called Dooglewogs doing pranks and causing misfortune for the Rabu. I roll a dice every time Rabu uses his other powers and whatever it lands on will happen in the thread he's in.
If a Grader or Mod wishes to add a misfortune as a reward that would be wonderful but please be sure that it's only temporary and isn't too disruptive or disturbing (I'm mostly going with light and silly) look on my character sheet for examples.
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