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Cylus 2, Arc 723

Cylus was by far the coldest season in Rharne. Everything was covered by a blanket of snow, and the city was shrouded in perpetual darkness. There was no appeal to and little point in being outside. Life largely took place indoors as the world held its breath for thirty trials. Cylus was a time of gatherings around the fireplace, in somebody’s home or in a nearby tavern. It was a time for hot tea and hot chocolate, anything to fill you with a bit of warmth. It was a time of stories – and rumors. As there was little to do outside, people started to get bored. Gossip ran rampant when there was little else to do.

It was not long before Tristan’s grandmother Ebony Venora who had been one of the most powerful people in the kingdom of Rynmere once upon a time, returned from a visit to one of her friends that lived in the neighbourhood. Tristan was just sitting in a comfortable armchair in the living room, a book on the flora of Rharne in his lap, when the old woman walked in, still dressed in a warm fur coat, a sign that there was something that she really needed to say to him.

“Grandson”, she told him in a stern tone of voice that caused him to immediately close his book, put it away and focus his entire attention on her, just like he had done when he had been a boy. “When did you plan on finally telling me that that cat of yours is a Becomer in disguise? I do not approve of a strange man pretending to be a more or less innocent animal, living with us and potentially spying on us”, she continued and proceeded to cross her arms over her chest as she patiently waited for Tristan to explain this most problematic and highly improper matter, preferably in a way that made sense.

Tristan’s eyebrows rose and rose until they nearly made contact with his hairline as he listened to his grandmother. At first, he looked at her with a mixture of curiosity and concern, but curiosity and concern soon made way to utter disbelief and confusion. He didn’t let those feelings get the better of him though, but managed to school his face into a neutral expression and gestured for his grandmother to take a seat next to him. She refused though.

Tristan inclined his head in acceptance and told her in a firm, but nonetheless very respectful tone of voice as was appropriate when you were speaking with one of your elders, “Mistral is definitely not a Becomer. I’m pretty sure I told you the story about my meeting with the cat people in the Misty Miasma before. Besides, I doubt that any Becomer would voluntarily spend seven arcs as a cat. Where did you hear that rumor though?” he wanted to know and looked at his grandmother expectantly.

“From my dear friend, of course. She saw her cat play with your cat. Several other cat owners in the quarter say the same thing. As for Mistral voluntarily spending seven arcs as a cat, he didn’t do so voluntarily. He is a totem-locked Becomer and a Mortalborn of Aelig. I know that not every rumor is true, and I’m not the kind of woman that believes everything people tell her”, she continued, switching to a more diplomatic tone of voice lest Tristan thought that her mental faculties had decreased, and she had finally grown a bit senile.

“But rumors often contain a kernel of truth and don’t just appear out of thin air. What I heard was concerning enough that I considered it to be a good idea to talk to you immediately. I would very much like you to explain this matter to me. Rumors can turn out to be dangerous, if you don’t know their origin and can’t control them, as you know. You may also be able to use them to your advantage though as we discussed when people assumed that you are Syroa’s son.”

“The story?”
she asked, her tone of voice now completely calm as she finally took off her coat and sat down, with poise and elegance, as a noblewoman from Rynmere should. She didn’t wonder why so many rumors surrounded her grandson. He was an extraordinary young man. It was just that those rumors were always a bit too strange for her taste.
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From the Rharne Rumour Mill:

A rumor persists among cat-lovers in the Glass Quarter that Tristan's cat Mistral is actually a totem locked mortalborn mage, who is the son of Aelig.
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“You remember that Faith Augustin used to be my slave once, I assume?” Tristan asked. He managed not to get too emotional, but by the Fates and the Immortals and everything that was good and holy, he didn’t understand how he could ever have thought that slavery was acceptable. He’d treated Faith like a person rather than just one of his possessions, and he’d freed her when she had said that she wanted to be free, but that didn’t make it any better. He’d always think that things should have been different.

He didn’t focus on that now though because the past was the past and couldn’t be changed, but explained when his grandmother nodded in order to let him know that she remembered, “I was in love with her, but I didn’t realize it until it was too late, until she had chosen another man. The Immortals had a tendency to mess with us almost from the beginning, Aelig and Syroa in particular. Aelig visited Faith disguised as me one trial. I hope you don’t mind if I don’t go into detail about it. I just thought that it would never become public knowledge.”

“Maybe it hasn’t become public knowledge”,
he decided and took a deep breath while his grandmother simply watched him and furrowed her brow as if she were deep in thought. Back in Rynmere, his loving his slave would have caused a huge scandal, and his grandmother would almost certainly have given him a stern talking-to, but they were in Rharne now. In a way, both Tristan and his grandmother still considered themselves to be a part of Rynmere’s government and wanted to represent their people, but they were free from the constraints of nobility at the same time – or at least freer than they used to be.

Ebony might not have been entirely happy with Tristan’s revelation, but she kept her thoughts to herself. She only furrowed her brow very lightly as she gestured for him to continue.

“I made a sculpture of Aelig with some built-in special effects once, to conquer my fears, among other things, and I lost it in the streets of Scalvoris Town. It caused quite a ruckus. People definitely noticed that. I also invented a cat-speech potion, as you probably know. Back in Melrath, I looked for test subjects that were willing to try and talk to Mistral. People that don’t have all the information might think that a talking cat is secretly a Becomer, and what more, Mistral is a rather chaotic cat. One of Aelig’s domains was Chaos. I’m not at all sure where the Mortalborn bit comes from though”, Tristan admitted and shrugged his shoulders.

“As you said, people used to think I was Syroa’s son though. Maybe they still think so. Maybe they simply think that Mortalborn come in pairs or groups, and where one Mortalborn is, there have to be more?” he guessed and looked at his grandmother questioningly. It was as good an explanation as any other in his opinion. Who had come up with that story though?

“Who could have come up with this story though?” Ebony asked as if she’d been reading Tristan’s mind. The young man didn’t know if she’d already formulated a possible hypothesis, but anyway, she was looking at him expectantly, calmly, sternly and not without curiosity. She was waiting for him to say something, but he didn’t know how to start yet.
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“One of your friends?” Tristan guessed. When his grandmother gestured for him to continue, he elaborated, “A lot of your friends are refugees from Rynmere as well. They probably know that I have a cat. They have more reason than anybody else to keep track of my activities. The two of us are, as far as I know, the highest-ranking members of Rynmere’s former government that are still alive and free. People love to gossip. Someone hears an interesting story from someone else and passes it on to their friend, twisting it in the process, most likely by accident – unless we want to imply that one of your friends has malicious intentions?” he asked, looked at his grandmother and raised an eyebrow questioningly.

“Most likely not”, Ebony Venora firmly decided after she had given the matter some thought. “Some of my friends love to gossip, but they know better than to spread outrageous rumours about my family – at least I hope so. Besides, they know me too well to believe such things. No, it has to be an acquaintance of my friends – a cat lover, for who else would pay such close attention to your cat? Furthermore, it is likely someone who heard about your activities in Melrath and on Scalvoris. Maybe they were there and are in Scalvoris now”, she continued and furrowed her brow.

“No, they were probably there. Some of your accomplishments were quite extraordinary, but you are not quite at the level of an international celebrity like Faith Augustin yet”, Ebony Venora decided in a firm and calm tone of voice and met Tristan’s gaze. She was not trying to belittle him by implying that someone from Rharne was unlikely to know what he had done in Melrath a couple of arcs earlier; she was merely stating a fact. Being aware of exactly how famous you were was very important.

“Aelig was one of the darker Immortals, so, perhaps they spread the rumor to cause harm, although it is strange enough to be unlikely to permanently tarnish your reputation. Maybe, the story got twisted over the course of time as you said”, she conceded and continued, “Now, there are two ways we can deal with this situation. We can try to find out who exactly started the rumor – or we can play with it a bit, use it to our advantage and hopefully increase your fame in the process. You could tell everybody about your wonderful magical cat, advertise your cat-speech potion again or write a story about magical cats, for example – although I would not create any new rumours about the Immortals and their offspring, even though the Immortal in question is dead.”

That could backfire horribly”,
she said in a dry tone of voice before she looked directly at Tristan and asked him, in a tone of voice that was still remarkably calm and polite and with a little smile on her face, “Now, how many people know that you were in love with your slave who is one of the most famous people in the world nowadays, and is that the reason why Ayla who really is Syroa’s daughter resembles her?”
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I really do enjoy a thread that includes other PCs. Not just because it might have your own name in it, but because it shows how our stories weave and resonate into the history of the world we're writing into existence. Your back and forth here was a great example of that, and Ebony was written very well, t'boot! And, of course, ending in something of a cliffhanger, too...

Can't think of much else to say, this was a pretty uneventful story. But it served its purpose and you wrote it well. Truly a raconteur will Tristan be!
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