Name Erin
Race: Human
DoB: 37th Saun, 691
Title: Blue Cloaked member of the Order of Adunih
Skills: Animal Husbandry: Competent, Caregiving: Competent, Detection: Competent, Discipline: Competent, Field Craft: Expert, Gardening: Expert, Medicine: Expert, Psychology: Competent, Research: Competent, Strength: Competent, Teaching: Competent
Both of Erin's parents are members of the Order, so Erin has a lot to live up to, and she feels the pressure of needing to live up to her parents' expectations. She has a passion for herbalism that often puts her at odds with Korin, but fear of her parents' disapproval keeps her in line most of the time. Erin is quite skilled at growing and gathering herbs and making herbal remedies because she learned a lot from her mother before she even joined the Order. But in accordance to Korin's wishes, she only studies the subject further in her free time. She will happily teach what she knows to others though because she knows that her parents would approve of her sharing that knowledge even if Korin does not. But like her continued studies in herbalism, she will only teach what she knows to others in her free time out of deference to Korin.
Her drive to be the best healer she can be rivals Korin's own because the need for her parents' approval has been combined with Korin's demand for perfection.
Credit: Seira Shiryu
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Re: Erin
Heya Seira,
So there's an issue with this submission, in that the Order doesn't encourage training of civilians outside the Order. Korin isn't the ranking cloak in Rharne or even in the Earth Quarter and would have no authority over Erin even as her mentor. So please rewrite with that in mind. Thanks.
So there's an issue with this submission, in that the Order doesn't encourage training of civilians outside the Order. Korin isn't the ranking cloak in Rharne or even in the Earth Quarter and would have no authority over Erin even as her mentor. So please rewrite with that in mind. Thanks.
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