• Solo • Your Hands Only (Graded)

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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Your Hands Only (Graded)

67 Ymiden 719
When the letter arrived, I was walking down a corridor between some fine stone houses, nibbling at the damp end of a dying cigarette and watching Hazel run ahead. Wild how some couriers can just find you. How this one caught sight of me amid all the ghostly spirits of the dead and thought that’s the man I’m looking for, maybe I’ll never figure it out. Maybe I’d gotten more distinctive than I thought, even without the flagrant blemishes of magic hovering over my head or sticking out my back. Those damnable wings. Maybe they wouldn’t come back, maybe I’d get away with looking like a plain ordinary biqaj again, or maybe they’d come back eventually. I didn’t know what the wings were waiting for, though. Ether storms, some of the mages outside the city had mentioned, as if that meant something to me. Maybe it did.

Maybe, maybe, maybe.

Too many maybes for my taste. Hazel continued down the way, her steps light – too light for a girl with true gravity in her weight. I stopped to look the lanky woman in the eyes. She stared at me like I had something to give her. I didn’t. I took the bundle of letters, then tapped the last embers into ash between us. One glance at the seal which kept them bound and I knew who’d sent them.

“You headed back south?” I asked.

“Haven't planned on it,” she said in a simple professional tone. “Headed east next.”

“How’d you know it was me?”

She arched a sculpted brow, then tapped at the center of her forehead. Right. The scar. The Theocratum’s persistent mark. I glanced aside, thought to call to Hazel who’d gone out of sight but… what point would there be in that? Instead, a sigh escaped me, and I said, “Would you care to share a drink then? Before you head out again.”

The courier considered the offer as if I’d ask something a lot more scandalous than I had. Just a drink, honest. Though I couldn’t ignore that she was close to my height with the sort of eyes that made me wonder what sort of things she’d seen in her life, paired with a set of chapped lips that deserved to be made soft. Sun-kissed skin and a foreign look about her that reminded me of someone, but I couldn’t place my thumb on the reminder. Ah, but that was neither here nor there. What was it with me and getting so distracted by carnality? It made no good sense and I liked to think myself above that sort of nonsense… even if I didn’t find myself keeping to that thought much.

Suppose I just didn’t have a lot of good sense in me.

She accepted the offer, easy enough, and we made good time from wherever the fuck I’d been - to a place she was staying known as Inn for Dinner. It wasn’t too far off and I’d set up a couple rooms there myself upon arrival. I was getting the hang of this loop of a city, or least I wanted to believe I was.

She swapped a name for herself once we sat down: Gigi, the sort of name that made me cough to mask a laugh.

Gigi said, “It’s short for something.”

I waited, but she never said what something was. Instead, we got a bottle of wine to share and I took to opening the bundle of letters that’d come from Ashvane Estate. There were a great number of them: all from various dates, left behind to pile up when the fall of Emea had taken away my previous courier: Mister Kiwi.

The momentary reminder of the dead dreamwalker caused me to feel a greater need to drink something stronger than wine. I wouldn’t though. Wine would do fine, more than fine. It would do. I tapped my fingers against one of the envelopes. Around us, the inn was mostly quiet. People were drinking, eating, trying to forget about what lurked outside the city and inside their own undreaming minds. No one seemed keen to bother each other, keeping to themselves, and leaving once done with whatever had brought them to the main area. A few wore masks over their faces, as if that would do the job of keeping the illnesses away – or maybe they just didn’t want anyone identifying them.

“Were you going to open one of those?” asked Gigi. She sipped from the goblet with a casual sideways lean to her posture.

“Later,” I said. I set it on the stack, then looked her over. “How’d you come to be the one sent this way? You don’t look like most couriers.”

“Tia did say you had sharp eyes,” said the woman.

“Tia?”

“Lucretia,” she clarified. “She’s my aunt.”

“Oh!” The mention of the mage who’d remained in Quacia offered a certain happiness. Out of all the people in the southern city, it was Lucretia and Watcher I missed the most. “You’re related. No wonder you look so familiar.”

Taller though, I thought to myself. I couldn’t help but compare the totem I had of Lucretia, the petite thing that wasn’t anywhere near the height of her niece, but they had similar copper to the tone of their skin. Now I saw features here and there, recognizable in a vague sense of familial blood. Now, it was obvious.

We talked of Quacia, and I set the letters aside for later – like I’d said – and we talked about Lucretia, we talked of Rynmere of which Gigi was from, of the plague that’d torn through her home. She’d gotten stuck on the outside of the quarantine, or so she said, there was a glimmer in her eyes that suggested otherwise but I didn’t bother to delve into whatever was left unsaid.

The bottle of wine had gone dry fast enough. I gathered the letters and asked if she wanted to join in a space away from… well, I couldn’t say crowds with a straight face, so I went with out of the way. She was generous and accepted anyway.

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A second bottle and behind the locked door of her room, we got to talking about things that weren’t polite to talk about in general society. I let her drink most of the second and she proved her claim of her homeland. Ryn blood seemed to me to be half-blood, half-wine with the way they drank the berry juice. I had to get my own resolve up to the task though, before I eventually visited. I had a way to go still, my head already felt dizzy and my thoughts drifted, freed from my usual sober logic.

Against the wall, I struck another smoke and started to go through the letters. Gigi had taken to an unusual sort of dance in the main space of her room. Her partner was the bottle of wine and soon, my cigarette when she stole it from my lips while I looked for a letter-opener. I let her have it. She could smoke all she wanted of mine; I owed her for getting those letters all the way from Quacia to Etzos, safe and unopened.

Gigi loaned me a switchblade she’d been keeping in her boot. After I settled on the bed, I used it to cut open the first of many letters. While she swayed and frolicked, smoke drifted around her until a cloud of tobacco lingered heavy in the room. I’d already started another stick up, the embers flared bright in the candlelit space. Her giggles matched an uneven song, contorted by spats of humming between lyrics, as she made her own music to dance to.

And I read. Letter after letter, my head pounded with the varied information. Most of it were things I couldn’t respond to, most of it delayed too late to make a difference: notices from the guilds, arrangements made from those in the Gleam who I’d left without explanation of my departure, even a couple letters from islanders seeking my aid, then…

“You look too old, like my grandpapa, reading those with a frown,” said Gigi. She moved aside a few of the opened letters and set a hand beside my lap to steady her wavering balance. Her long curly hair hung down around her oval face. The young woman grinned. “Come dance with me, will you?”

“Can’t,” I said and lifted another unopened envelope. “Besides if I spin around as much as you, I’ll make myself sick.”

She scoffed. Gigi grabbed the letter from my hand, then lifted to stand out of my reach. The woman tore it open. She held the letter out from her, an exaggerated motion and then paused. Her eyes widened. “This is from a Baron Venora!”

“Yes,” I said and stood. Swiftly I took the letter back from her. “And I’d like to read it, thank you. Why don’t you go find us something more to drink?”

While she did so, I read through the letter. It was the next in the line of the two letters from my previous correspondence with Oliver, or Baron Venora was the formal way to refer to him. It'd been delayed, written a while ago, but I had it now. That he’d written to me at all, earlier on, had been good fortune for me and desperate grace on his part. Of all the letters I’d gone through so far, this was one that I set aside. I’d have to write a response soon… once all the wine had gotten out of my system and I could think about words in the way that a noble expected.

Gigi returned with a bottle of something stronger than wine.

I set it aside and said, “Why don’t you show me a few of those steps you were doing before? What’d you call it again?”

“A waltz.”
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Knowledge:
Dancing: The Waltz
Discipline: Reading letters while someone dances in front of you.
Intelligence - Contact: Gigi, Rynmere citizen and niece of Lucretia.
Intelligence: Having a Location for Private Correspondence to Safely Gather.
Resistance: Increasing alcohol tolerance.
Resistance: Method of intake: Inhalation.

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Notes:
Well, this was a fun little piece. I liked how you shaded it with enough moments - the drinking, the ruminations, the call to dance - to paint the scene vividly, and ended it not abruptly, but organically. The story was a little sparse on descriptions of Etzos, not for the sake of just ALWAYS letting the reader know that it's a shithouse now, but the sheer, barely-surviving nature of it permeates everything now. Then again, you did mention the ghosts...

Nice work. Hopefully we'll see more of Gigi

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