Birthday (Graded)

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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1 Ymiden, 719 AV
Northeast Housing Quarter
6th Break

The Outer Perimeter, free from the limitations that city walls enacted on a space, had developed haphazardly over the centuries. While the circular layout was still maintained for its cartographical aesthetics, no official oversight had ever been given by the government in regards to layout or design. Neighborhoods were erected without consideration on how it would fit in the larger scheme of things, creating a hodgepodge maze of streets and alleys, each with defining features that balked at the concept of uniformity. To the average citizen who had a home to return to at the end of each trial, they probably paid it little mind; it was little more than the character of their locality. To someone like Fur, however, it made the world of difference. Perhaps even life and death.

He had found this particular nook a fortnight ago, nestled between two abandoned buildings. An alley ran between the structures with a protruding roof providing partial coverage overhead. At one point, it was probably the most common route from the home to the business beside it, but now no one walked its length save for Fur. The alley floor was caked dirt with the highest point in the center of the alley, creating a run-off in two directions for precipiation that made its way into the space. It was, in a way, an island on which the young Ithecal rested, hopeful that no passerby would spot and try to conquer. Thus far, he had been lucky, but he did not take that for granted.

Fur opened his eyes, letting them adjust to the shade for a few brief trills before he sat up. His back was stiff from sleeping on the ground, but he had long grown used to the aches. Nothing a bit of stretching wouldn’t ease. He spread his legs into the v-shape, bending forward to press his hands palms down on the empty space between them. Hold the middle for ten trills, then to the left foot, and then to the right. He repeated the cycle twice more before sitting straight up again. The tension was still there, but he could already feel the cracks.

He loosened the muscles in his arms and shoulders next, rolling them forward a dozen times in a windmill rotation and then backwards another dozen. Then, grabbing each arm by the elbow, he pulled the limb across his chest, feeling the tendons creak and stretch. The hold was repeated behind his head afterwards, forcing his appendanges into a multitude of positions. It always paid to be limber, he had learned. Plus, he had learned that his routine took his mind off the gnawing in his stomach that he usually awoke to. Some trials, it was the only reprieve he would get for the entire day.

A few bits later, after Fur had finished up his sets, he flipped over onto his knees and rolled the bedding up into its usual wad. Then, finding his feet, he ran his hands across the exterior wall to his left, groping for something unseen in the dim lighting. Fur had discovered a noticeable indent in the structure when he had first moved in, large enough to stow his more important items away when he was out for the day. He could probably get by with carrying his belongings with him where ever he went, but he was afraid some of it would make him a target. Better to stash it and hope it was unmolested when he returned. Thus far, it had worked.

Fur shoved the bedding into the crevice alongside his backpack, which was filled with his armor, his second set of clothing, and his hygeine products. Four of his knives were there as well, while the fit was tucked in the waist band on his pants. His shield formed the base of the pile, while his most prized possession sat behind it all, out of sight. Very rarely did Fur bring it out, and to-trial was not one of those occasions.

To him, there was nothing special about the trial at all, despite what some people would say otherwise.

Fur checked one last time that everything was properly stowed before glancing overhead. He didn’t usually like waking up this early, but he couldn’t justify sleeping in either, not when he hadn’t worked a job the night prior. Begging was more of an early bird business, sadly. He sighed and turned away, making his way to the alley exit, hopeful that he would return later to find that nothing had changed.

Or perhaps, that everything had.
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The Kettle, Black
14th Break

Fur hovered on the outermost edge of the perimeter ring, shaded by an alcove overhead, watching the crowd in the empty space beyond. They didn’t seem to mind the heat, neither from the fire at their feet or the ones hanging in the sky; the promise of a hot meal superseded any other discomfort they might’ve felt. He could smell the food from where he lingered and it ate away at his caution. He knew he needed to walk over, knew that he deserved it. He could withstand the stares long enough to get a meal into him. It would be the only one he got, most like.

A large chunk of people broke away from the clump, bowls in hand, so Fur finally made his move. He walked purposefully across the grass, avoiding eye contact with any one individual. He had learned that the average Etzori was more wary of him then he of them, but that didn’t make it any easier. In a way, it made it even harder. It was harder to find a faster encouragement to draw a blade than fear. Fur was still small than most adults, but they knew he was only going to get bigger; better to cut down the threat before it grew. Thankfully, Rowan and Maylan dissuaded violence unless outright provoked, so the hidden knives remained where they were.

The proprietors also happened to know him, as well, which made things a bit smoother. “Its been a while!” Maylan exclaimed, glancing up from the stew pot she had been working over. “I’d say you’ve grown since we last saw you.”

It was jarring to Fur to be treated like the child he was, but that was May’s way. Everyone who walked through her tent flaps were a part of the family. “Growing every trial,” Fur replied, scooping up one of the empty bowls at the front. The wood felt smooth between his fingers, as he stepped up opposite the woman. “Rowan around?”

“Rowan!” she shouted over her shoulder, “He’s out skinning game,” she added with a smile, collecting the bowl from Fur. She reached for the ladle in the stew pot, drawing a protest from the Ithecal, but she ignored him. “Honey, you think I’ve forgotten what trial it is? Your parents would bring you here for a bowl of my stew, not for the broth. I’d be dishonoring their memory to change it now.”

“A treat, Fur,” Rowan added, stepping through the back slit, a bloodied rag in his hands. “On the house.”

Fur shook his head, fishing in his pocket for the nels he had begged for earlier in the day. He had earned just enough to earn the stew, but he had been hoping to save some. Rowan shook his head, staying the Itethecal’s frantic motion with a hand on his shoulder. “I insist.” May passed the bowl back to him, spoon already settling in the bottom, and Fur finally relented. The meat floating at the top had convinced him; it had been too long since he had eaten meat.

“Thanks,” Fur said, eyes fixed on the food. He turned to sit at one of the far tables, but Rowan squeezed his shoulder to stop him.

“Got a table and an extra stool outside. I’d love the company.” Seeing no way he could refuse, given the hospitality the couple had shown him already, Fur followed him outside. The stool was on the far end of the butcher’s table, where a half dozen hares sat in various stages of dressing. Rowan returned to the task while Fur worked on his stew. The stench of feces and bloody organs wasn’t enough to ruin his appetite.

After a bit or two of silence, Rowan spoke up. “Staying out of trouble, Fur?”

Fur paused, spoon halfway to his lips, before shrugging. “Best as I can, given the circumstances. I’m trying to get by with what people are willing to give me.”

“Some of my regulars have spoke of an Ithecal running with neighborhood gangs. That you, kid?”

Fur raised a hand in defense, shaking his head. “Not what it sounds like, Row. Just an odd job here and there when the locals are feeling less generous towards beggars. Spotter, sometimes a bit of crossing. But I haven’t joined any of them. I swear.”

That was a half-truth. Fur had not joined any of the groups he had run with in the past arc, but he had done more than just grunt work. The smell of the rabbits didn’t bother him, because he knew what a man smelled like. Thankfully, Rowan was satisfied with the answer Fur had given him, and didn’t press for further details. “Still, Fur, it’s a dangerous game you’re playing. Yeah, sometimes you can stick your hand in the flames and not get burned, but keep going back to it and eventually you will. I don’t wanna see you get hurt—” Rowan stopped short as he watched Fur unconsciously run his fingers across a scar on his forearm. “Hurt more than you have been, already.”

Fur realized what he was doing and pulled his hand away. “I’m being cautious, Row. Most people ignore me, anyway. I won’t get caught up in anywhere unless I want to be there.”

Rowan gestured with a free hand to the space around them. “What about here, then? I’d love to have a second pair of hands setting traps and snares for me, and May loves having you around the tent. I’ll teach you to hunt and forage, both of which are skills that’ll help you when you get older. You wouldn’t have to go it alone.”

Fur stared at the man who was overflowing with generosity, with a promise that was almost too good to pass up, and he could only think about the people he called “parent.” He would never forget what had happened to them; moreso, he wouldn’t dare wish it on anyone else. “I appreciate the offer, Row, but I have to say no. Maybe one trial, but not this one.” Fur tipped the bowl’s last few contents into his mouth and set it down in front of him while he stood up. “Tell May that this was her best one yet. And thank you, Rowan.”

Rowan turned to watch the Ithecal leave around the back of the tent, heading back towards the city. He had figured the offer would be turned down, at least in the moment, but it was out there now. The fisherman didn’t catch the carp the moment the bait hit the water. No, he waited for the fish to come to him, of its own accord. Fur would come around, eventually, if the city didn’t swallow him up first. Row prayed that that wouldn’t happen.
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Northeast Housing Quarter
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Fur could only wander following his abrupt exit from The Kettle, Black, his mind racing and his body too tense to sit still. He often got this way when he pushed people away. It was the reverberations the hand felt after it slammed a door shut, the final memories of the view from the other side fading away. The child hated when he had to do it, shove the hopes down dredged up by another’s generosity. Better that they never offered at all; it allowed him to forget what it was like. Family. A place to call home. Hope. People, they pitied him for the scars he bore, not realizing that they were in fact open wounds instead. Wounds ripped open anew when they offered drastic change. They didn’t realize that sitting still was the best course of action. How could they? Their idea of a solution was presented from their privileged perspective; they gave the gift they would want, not the gift necessary.

The child just wanted to be left alone.

Left to his hardships and to the devices he was so delicately crafting to overcome them. Despite the common belief, Fur was not sitting idling by. No, with each passing trial, he was learning. Life was wasted only by stagnation, not by prosperity or poverty. As long as he was growing, the Ithecal would not dare call it aimless. And while he could admit that it probably wasn’t fair that he had been forced to learn these lessons so early on, dwelling on the things out of his control would only hinder him. Rowan had meant well, but he didn’t have the right to make those sort of judgements on Fur’s behalf.

Still, the offer had been made, and the child’s resolve had been cracked. So he walked, kicking up dirt and dust that filled into those crevices like mortar between brick. Holding him together. Because he was a product of the streets, not of the past that Rowan was trapped in when he looked upon the Ithecal. The Fur he had once known died amidst the chaos that stoles his parents away from him. At least, his soul; the body was left, an empty husk for a time but eventually filled by the piss and the blood that pooled in the alleys. He couldn’t leave it, not in the way Rowan had intended. To do so would be the greatest disrespect. Fur wouldn’t run from his new place in the world. The only worthy escape would come on the path that he blazed himself.

So he walked, and walked until the chance at freedom was suppressed. Not forgotten. Simply nullified.

It was still several breaks before dusk when Fur decided to turn in for the evening. The extra exertion had worn him out, and he wanted to be safely back in his alley when the drowsiness set in. Etzos at night was a dangerous place for the weary man. The child did stay vigilant, though, on his return trek through the neighborhood, checking for tails and glancing into the more shadowy areas for those who might do him harm. Thankfully, it seemed alone, and the Ithecal was ready to drop his guard as he stepped into the mouth of his alley.

Only to find someone else already there.

Fur froze. The figure, who had been sitting with his back against the wall, stared back him with a mix of shock and indignation, a flask of some sorts pressed against his lips. It probably wasn’t often that the vagrant was faced with an Ithecal, especially in such tight quarters. Still, the man was considerably larger than Fur, so what little fear he felt in the first trills quickly faded, replaced with annoyance. In his mind, he had already won out. “Oye, fuck off!” he shouted, hoping to intimidate the shorter adversary. “Find another rock to crawl under, ya lizard.”

Fur quickly scanned the alleyway, looking for his gear. It didn’t look like the stranger had found it yet. If the child fled, though, there was a chance that he would find it eventually. Or someone had already been by and taken it, but Fur couldn’t verify that possibility either, not without going through the man. That was quickly becoming the only option, much to the Ithecal’s displeasure. “No, I think I’m gonna stay. I was squatting here since before the last time you were sober, so if its in anyone’s best interest to move on, it would be yours.” Fur tried his own hand at intimidation, though it seemed to have little effect.

“The scaly cunt got a bit of a mouth ‘tween those lips,” the man replied, flashing a set of rotten teeth as he staggered to his feet. He reached into the pocket of his tattered overcoat, drawing a dagger. “No bite, though, I’d wager.” The drunk stumbled forward, pointing the blade at Fur’s chest. “Last chance to run before I gut—“

Fur didn’t give the man the chance to finish his statement as he launched into the offense. Swatting the dagger-wielding arm up with a forearm, the Ithecal went below with his right elbow, aiming for the ribs. The drunk sidestepped, though, and Fur struck only air as he passed by. Before the drunk could stab Fur between the shoulder blades, though, he flicked his tail out, sweeping the man’s legs out from underneath him. He landed hard on his backside, but the force of impact didn’t break his grip on the blade, so Fur hovered out of reach. No need to get stabbed because he was being hasty.

The drunk found his feet again and, with a loud bellow that echoed off the alley walls, he barreled towards the Ithecal. Fur trying sidestepping him in similar fashion, but a glancing blow from his opponent’s shoulder staggered him. A horizontal slash was thrown, aimed for his throat, but Fur fell back into the wall to avoid it. Then, with a grunt, he threw a stomping kick against the man’s knee, hoping to buckle him. Fur heard something crack, but the leg didn’t give way. The drunk cursed and stabbed the dagger straight forward, aimed for the heart—

--Only for Fur to catch him by the wrist with one arm, adrenaline fueling him. Then, with his free hand, he pried the dagger free from its grip, shifting the grab to attempt a counter stab—

--The drunk stopped Fur in his tracks, though, with a stiff left hook to the jaw. Stars danced in his periphery as he dropped the dagger to the alley floor. In his transition to the Ithecal’s back, the vagrant kicked it out reach.

Fur felt suffocated by the alcohol stench even before the drunk locked in the chokehold. After a trill of panic, the Ithecal’s survival instinct kicked in. He reached his hands out behind him, seeking out some of the softer tissue in the drunk’s face. The grip tightened around his neck, but Fur found deep within him the fortitude to hold onto consciousness long enough to find a handhold on the edge of the man’s orbital bone. Then, hooking his finger, Fur began to dig deeper into the man’s socket, feeling warm blood pour over his finger as he desperately gouged.

The man’s screams were deafening, but Fur did not relent.

Not until the hold loosened enough for the Ithecal to worm down and bite into the forearm of the drunk. Fur felt the fangs sink into his flesh, releasing the venom into the bloodstream. The drunk stiffened as paralysis spread through his body, but the child was beyond the point of simply trusting the toxin, as strong as it was. He spun, arm extended, to deliver a spinning backfist to topple the man. Fur tried to meet him on the way down with a knee to the side of the head, but he hadn’t fully recovered from the choke and misjudged the strike. Still, the drunk hit the pavement, unconscious, so that was what mattered. Fur fell into a seated position a trill later, utterly drained.

He took a good bit or two to just catch his breath and to let his heart beat slow down. He could feel the adrenaline fading, replaced with the aches. His throat still felt tight, as if phantom arms were still pressed against it, and his jaw throbbed. He open and closed it a few times, judging that nothing felt broken or dislodged. He was lucky. That could’ve end far worse than it did.

Then, Fur looked down at the bloodstains on his hand, before shifting his focus to the drunk’s mangled eye. It was in moments like that where the child felt the most feral. To think that an action so gruesome was within him, poised and waiting at his finger tips, frightened him. He had come across men in the past who had given into those instincts, and Fur did not want to do the same. Trials like this, though, didn’t make resisting it any easier.

Fur knew he needed to move; he couldn’t stay in this alley, not after that. Any further delay was leaving him vulnerable. What if the drunk had friends nearby? How would they react when they found him knocked out and an Ithecal hovering over his body? Time was of the essence.

Thankfully, Fur’s gear was in its original spot, unmolested and easily loaded. He slung the backpack over his shoulders. His buckler shield was strapped to the outside, like a turtle shell, and his War Pick was attached to the loop on the side. The bedroll went on top and was tied down last. All done. In less than a bit, Fur was ready to depart. Efficient. Sad.

The child stepped around the drunk as he went to scoop up the man’s dagger. That would fetch him a dinner, at least, after he had made his way out of the quarter. Buy me a trial or two, maybe. That was the way of the beggar. Trial to trial, scraping by. In the few breaks before dark, he could be a few quarters over. Maybe as far as the south side. Been a while since he had been on that half of the town. All he needed to do was start heading east.

But he hesitated.

Fur looked down at the drunk, watch his chest rise and fall. He had seen the Ithecal’s face, and wasn’t likely to forget it. Not after what he did to him. It was likely that he was a nobody, had no one in his life who could seek him out. But Fur couldn’t run the risk, couldn’t walk away when there was a sliver of a chance that he would be hunted. So he took one step. Then another. Each slow stride bringing him closer to the drunk until finally he loomed over him. He considered the dagger in his hand for a moment before shaking his head. Better he used something heavier.

The war pick felt heavy his hands; he still hadn’t grown used to using it. Still, it wasn’t likely that an unconscious foe would evade him. Spreading his legs and gripping the weapon with both hands, spiked side angled towards the drunk. Then, a deep breath. Fur had watched road crews break stone in similar fashion with pickaxes. Fur steeled himself, and swung—

--driving the spike through the skull, down until it broke through the other side and scraped against dirt. Blood and brain matter splattered Fur and the walls while the body convulsed for few trills. Then, silence.

Fur wrenched the weapon free, staring at the gore. He felt it calling to him a second time, but he shoved the thoughts down once more. Not to-trial. Using the corpse’s clothing as a wipe rag, the Ithecal cleaned himself and the pick off as best he could before returning it to its place on the backpack. The child didn’t glance back again as he shouldered the pack and exited the alley. That, that was the gift of surviving.

And what a trial to be reminded of such a gift.

The trial that Fur turned ten.
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The guy was a bum; Carley Boy knew it the first time he'd met him. A drunk and a brawler and a thief. It was the latter that irked him the most. Not that he hadn't slipped an item or two into his own pocket from time to time while on duty. Those incidents were always easily rationalized for him though. Villains, traitors and nutcases, forfeiting their right to ownership by virtue of their crimes, betrayals and extreme behavior.

No, with Glubey, his girlfriend's uncle, the only family she had left, it was pure malicious exploitation of her good nature. She was generous and Glubey drank it away when it should have been going to this or that needful use. Why she kept forgiving and trusting the old bastard Carley would never understand. But he was always on maneuvers with his "Shield"; and was never around to prevent it. But his arm of the Etzori military was stationed at the home garrison this season, and he meant to enjoy it.

It was not so easy to get passed the lingering resentment he still felt for his consistent setback in rank. it seemed like he would be a 'mark' his entire life. And all over that Housing Quarter incident. His justification flooded through his soul for the uncounted hundredth time. 'Who was I to question the morality of a direct order? Undermining the stability of the army was a matter of Etzori security, and traitors had been everywhere. It was all for the greater good. he was following orders. Sure there were probably a lot of innocent deaths, but if the threat had been left to fester, it would have resulted in far more of them.'

His mind no longer bothered to run the full gamut of spins required to sleep at night. It finally ended with the usual recognition that many of the victims hadn't really even been people. 'A bunch of blue-skins and lizards!'

Of course, Glubey, of all people, had been the first to launch into a morally indignant tirade at the time. For all he knew Glubey had started this whole 'Carley Boy' nickname. His real name was Orden Carleby, and he hated being called 'Carley Boy'. And now he had to find the old prick. His girlfriend wanted her uncle brought home safe, and had tasked him to do it. 'The insufferable irony!' He knew he'd find him passed out in some alley in the NE quarter.

And he did, though it was not one of Glubey's usual haunts. The old fool had probably been to drunk to tell which alley he was crawling into. As Carleby approached, it was fortunate that the clothes were recognizable enough. The last several steps were taken in nauseated shock. There was no way the face would ever be even 50% recognizable now. Orden wasn't bothered that the old fart was dead, though the means were a bit extreme. No, his girlfriend was going to go berserk and would blame him for it.

Carleby cursed, wishing unending punishment on whoever had done this. Then a thought struck him, something he could use to keep the frost from forming permanently between himself and his girl. He knew alot about weapons. And the damage done here could only have been done by a warpick. That would narrow down the list of perpetrators considerably. He'd come up with some cause for having initially misconnected with the old bastard, and then claim he was taking on the investigation personally.

And in fact, that was not far from the pure truth. It shouldn't be that difficult to track down users of warpicks in this city.
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Deliciously Gruesome.

Not everyday I get to read about a lizard kid mauling a drunkard, and someone trying to repair their teetering reputation by hunting the brat down.

I've nothing I can contest with, and I look forward the devilry you both get up to.

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