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Arnabari or Arnabar-we?

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Qit'ria awoke, on her side, little Caz'aria in her arms, bound up in a blanket given to her by her dad, who she could still hear snoring across the house. She allowed herself to smile, rubbing her nose through her baby's downy feathers. Nearly everything felt right in the world. She didn't care what the others thought about her being a mage, or looking like a beast out of a nightmare, this moment was pure happiness for the huntress. She continued to rub her nose through the feathers, taking in her child's scent. It would be one she knew she could never forget.

She felt Caza stirring, and she rolled her over. She was 11 trials old at this point, such a small and fragile thing. She had cried exactly one time since she'd been born, and that was because her father had forced it out through a pin poke, to check that she could breathe well. She could. Looking down at the little one, she watched as her eyes flutted open, revealing her father's eyes. Those dark crimson eyes, in their almond shapes, looked back at her. Qit'ria was sure that Caza could see her, even though her dad said that most couldn't see more than blurs for the first season or so. But Caza's eyes were locked onto Qit'ria's, and she was certain she could see just fine. A strong, beautiful baby.

Qit'ria pressed her lips to the baby's forehead, and gave her a squeeze. Qit'ria sat up, supporting her head with her hand, and let her begin trying to find her nipple to feed. Her father had told her it was better to let the baby find it on its own, rather than helping it. Once Caza latched on, Qit'ria began running her hand through her daughter's feathers. As she did so, she studied the change to her nails, triggered by her Sparks latest outburst, as it vied for control of her body and soul. They were an orange-brown hue, and while the shape resembled sharpened fingernails, she knew them to be smaller versions of the gasping skitterer's spines.

It seemed that in its tantrum, her spark had left pieces of each creature she'd bonded with upon her self. It was a strange feeling, a sacrifice for the power she'd gained, a cost for not being strong enough to control her spark. At least now that Caza was born, she could transform more freely. It was liberating. That first night after Caza was born, she remembered being curled up around her daughter as her massive grizzly bear self. It had allowed her to heal herself after the birth, something new that came with change in her spark. Between the healing and the birth, she'd been exhausted for trials, but she healthy and spry now, and began to feel that itch. To get out into the wilds and run, to hunt something.

Once Caza was finished feeding and burped, Qit'ria checked her baby wrap. She stood up, and carried her daughter to the one table in the hut, and quickly cleaned and changed her. She looked at the necklace dangling down her daughter's front, and picked up the knuckle bone at the end of the leather chain. She teased it toward Caza, and the little girl began to suckle on it, with the leather stopper on the end there to keep her from swallowing it down.

She carried Caza over to her sleeping father, and nudged him with her foot. "Yeye." He grunted but didn't wake. She nudged him again, a bit harder, and her startled awake. "Watch her for me, Yeye. I'm going to go hunt. I'll be back by midtrial or earlier." Her father grunted and accepted the child, holding her as delicately as a flower, sitting up. He grunted again, giving his acknowledgement. Qit dressed, grabbed her hunting equipment, and set out of the hut.

Being Saun meant that it never got truly dark here, but it was still early. She was going to head south, hunt in Makubwa Lori, where her mother had trained her. She never had a proper chance to hunt there as a girl, little more than small birds, mammals, and reptiles. But she was a proper huntress now. Time to prove it, in her homeland. Javelins on her back, hunting pack slung over a shoulder, the huntress marched on, seeing that a few people were already up and setting about for their worktrial. Some stared at her, some didn't notice her at all. She didn't care. She knew she'd been changed and couldn't change it back, so she was trying to accept her new self for what she truly was; a monster. With her bigger eyes, her bear fangs, her nails, she wasn't horribly different, but most certainly not normal.

She didn't bother to snarl at any of them though. Let them stare. There was no needing to hide who or what she was any longer. She was a becomer, and it was likely that many people knew it, in Desnind at least. She was a proud mother of her spark, of her child, of her totems, and was stronger than any of these judgmental types that had nothing better to do than worry about others. Her father still loved her unconditionally, despite everything that had happened, her child loved her. What more did she really need?
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Noah was already up and enjoying the day, seated beside an area where the river pooled into a shallow pond. It was a place where fish and small amphibian creatures called home. Oh! And the turtles! She couldn't forget them! Some of the children from the village had followed her out to the small pond and were chasing frogs and attempting to catch some of the fish. She smiled as one of the boys celebrated at his newly caught fish and tossed it into a woven bucket. Needless to say, if the boy was trying to catch enough for his family's dinner... He would need a few dozen more, but she wasn't going to shatter his happiness.

While she wasn't currently hunting, she kept her longbow and quiver with her. In fact, it was always with her. Just in case she came along some small game in the forests, such as a rabbit. Extra food was always welcome, not because there was any shortage from the forests. But because almost everyone had a large family, most still growing. Births were almost a daily event. While joyful, it also meant extra food for the new mothers. It was an important job providing for the people she had adopted as her own, but looking at the happy and healthy children around her made it all worth while.

A young girl tapped Noah on the shoulder, presenting a fish and slowly saying 'fish' in her native tongue, "Flish? Ah... Fish?" Once the Avriel spoke it correctly the girl made a motion to Noah. They had learned that she spoke a language all her own, and as they taught her theirs, they wanted to know hers. "Oh, fish. F-i-s-h. Fish." She gestured to the children, telling them to try the word. It turned into a large group yelling fish in Lorien. The children laughed and continued playing beside and in the shallow pond. Time stood still sitting there among the children.

Some time had passed slowly until a boy called Noah to a woman he had seen. He put his fingers to his mouth making sharp teeth, then he growled. A bear... woman? It took a moment before the dove realized who they spoke of. She reassured the children and went to greet the only woman who had these features, the woman who had just birthed the Avian baby. A corvid avian at that.

Sure enough there stood the new mother, "Mama! Hello! Feel well? All okay? Baby good?" In all honesty, Noah was a bit shocked she wasn't still resting and regaining strength.

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No matter how hard Qit'ria tried to ignore the meanness of the children, to make herself believe it didn't get to her, it did. Because she had that nagging fear in the back of her mind that Caz'aria would feel the same way. Her child was so beautiful, the greatest creation on Idalos. And Qit no longer looked to be herself. Caza's eyesight wasn't developed enough yet to know what faces looked like, but it wouldn't be much longer. Would she see Qit'ria's face and cry? Be afraid? Would she grow up teasing her about it?

Qit'ria was mulling these over when she heard a familiar voice calling to her. She turned, and saw one of her newer friends. Noah. The white Avriel that helped her to give birth. Qit'ria smiled softly at the woman. While they weren't especially close, Noah would always and forever be considered family in Qit's mind. And that afforded all the pleasantries and protections associated with such. Qit'ria began to walk over to the woman, as the children continued to giggle, and point, and make faces, before running off.

Qit'ria got in close, clasping Noah's forearm in the traditional Sev'ryn greeting, but one Qit'ria only used for people who were friends or family. She gave it a good shake, while staring Noah in the eyes. In Common, "Hello Snow Crow. Feel much good. All good. Blackbird much good, much strong." Qit'ria stepped back a bit and flexed her bicep and laughed, "I strong too. Heal good." She didn't mention that it had been her magic that had healed her so rapidly, "How you? Do good?"

Qit'ria liked the woman, though she'd thought her to be a bit too soft at times. Strange, considering the other Avriel she'd met had no such weaknesses. Maybe she could help with that. Maybe Noah hadn't ever had a proper teacher. And this was the first time she'd go hunting since the birth. "I go hunt. You come with. We share food. Share kill. What weapon you use? Bow? Spear?"

Qit'ria was already excited and enthusiastic about the hunt, "Go get weapon. Meet at east edge forest, half break."

With that, Qit'ria turned heel, heading for the forest she'd originally been planning to go to. They'd have to hunt something easier with an amateur, but that was fine. Deer cooked just as nicely as anything else. And there were so many types of deer in these forests. It didn't take Qit long to reach the forest's edge, and she leaned up against a tree. She was inspecting each of the spears she'd brought, checking the tips for chips and the shafts for cracks. She would wait until the time she'd stated, and if Noah showed up as she hoped, they'd get on with the hunt. If not, she'd go it alone.





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Name Pretty Quitty

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Knowledge:
Caregiving: Cuddle and squeeze babies
Caregiving: Letting a baby latch on its own
Caregiving: Check diapers before leaving the house
Caregiving: Giving sucking toys for babies
Detection: The sound of Yeye's snores
Detection: Caz'aria's scent
Leadership: Picking easier targets for weaker subordinates
Socializing: Inviting a friend on a hunt

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Damn shame this didn't go anywhere, consider the promising start, but it was worth it just to see that tenderness in Qit towards her child. And it never felt forced or out of place, either. You show a real skill for depicting a savage, borderline-inhuman character, who cares about her child and loves her dearly, and that's fine because hey, why shouldn't that be the case? There's no need for a "but" here: she's not a monster BUT she cares for her kid, like that's an exception. She's a monster and she is a mother. The two are not mutually exclusive. Great job with that concept.

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