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Charlotte Vale
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Thread Name: Night In: Defiance
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
SKILL
Discipline: Staving off exhaustion
Discipline: Combating the effects of coffee
Intelligence: Gathering data on an enemy
Intelligence: Preparing for a mission
Research: Reading the proper text
Research: Making connections

NON SKILL

Domain Magic: Defiance: Elemental magic
Domain Magic: Defiance: Connection with the elements
Domain Magic: Defiance: Can name Kin elements
Domain Magic: Defiance: Revelation ( The Exemplar )
Domain Magic: Defiance: Overstepping consequences
Domain Magic: Defiance: Witchbrands

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Kasoria
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Thread Name: I. Dogs
City/Area: Outside Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and Violence

First of... five, I think! Was going to be four but then I decided to split them up a little and grind like the cheeky wee shite I am. Hope you enjoy, more coming soon!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Blades (Gladius): Best Used Alongside a Shield
Blades (Gladius): Designed PRIMARILY to Thrust and Stab
Deduction: Recognizing Knowledge One Would Most Likely Learn in the Army
Discipline: Not Being a Hero and Staying In Cover
Tactics: Use The Wounded to Lure Out Fresh Victims
Tactics: Countering Ranged Weapons With Your Own


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPCs Andre and Elbert: Caravan Guards, Sellswords
NPC Bartrok: Pudgy, Pugnacious Merchant and Investor
Eztos: Southern Land Trade Route to Rhakros


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Common Speech | Thoughts | Ith'ession Speech | Speech of Others
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Doran Cooney
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Thread Name: It's Just a Hand in the Bush
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Very skimable
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Carrying Heavy Things in Sweltering Heat
Endurance: Breaking Up a Difficult Job with Breaks
Endurance: Lifting Heavy Objects With a Recovering Leg
Endurance: Carrying Heavy Things Through a Crowd Without Dropping Them
Strength: Helping Another Person Carry Something Too Heavy for One
Strength: Gaining Speed While Carrying Something Heavy With the End in Sight
Loot: OOC the plants are part of the house's furnishings which were part of the rent
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Alistair
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Review Requests 2.1.5

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Thread Name: Letting Go
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Another old thread. Trying to clear these out, lol.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Alistair
None

Andraska
None

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
word count: 43
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Alistair
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Thread Name: She of Shimmering Eyes
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Another old thread. This one had a bounty attached, at least, lol.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Alistair
Hunting: Using darkness against your prey
Hunting: Drawing the attention of prey with lights
Hunting: Luring in a foe, then outmaneuvering them
Hunting: Watch where you sit
Resistance: Nature is filled with natural intoxicants

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: NA
Collaboration: I mean, I would love it, but... I don't know if a PH counts. lol
Magic EXP: No
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Thread Name: Ending
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Knowledge:
None

Loot: Sale of business all dealt with in ledger.

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Max already
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Nope
word count: 36
Life, Death and the In-Between .
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Arlo Creede
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Thread Name: Fiddling and Horsing Around
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Scars show up more around tanned skin
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Matching your play to the movements of an animal
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Catching front notes and back notes
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Volume adjustment
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Crafting emotion in your play can be more difficult when playing quietly
Musical Instrument: Piano: Basically, a harp in a case

Loot: N/A

Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: YNo
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
Arlo
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Trick riding
Acrobatics: Pulling yourself up to standing on a moving animal
Animal Training: Training is easier if the horse doesn't have excess energy
Animal Training: Small steps in progress is better than spooking the animal.
Mount: Horse: Standing on your horse
Mount: Horse: Using your body to steer
Mount: Horse: Moving with your horse can be counter intuitive
Mount: Horse: Ensuring that you are balanced before increasing speed


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
word count: 175
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Tio Silver
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Thread Name: What Lies Below
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Mentions of sex near the end.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Qit'ria
Acrobatics: Rolling at the bottom of a jump down
Sculpting: Shave wood slowly with a chisel
Sculpting: Adding a rope tie-hole to a javelin
Detection: Watching shadows for unnatural movement
Dancing: Hopping while shimmying your hips
Dancing: Flapping your arms
Dancing: Leaping twirl
Dancing: Shaking your rump
Stealth: Adjusting torch light to not affect your own shadows
Stealth: Never turning directly toward someone you're following
Stealth: Staying close, but not too close, to someone you're following
Stealth: Avoiding windows
Strength: Prying up a heavy grate with a lever

Non Skill Knowledge
Taelis Selver (Tio Silver): Funny man with weak arms
Taelis Selver (Tio Silver): Agreement to not speak of clumsy accidents
Taelis Selver (Tio Silver): Will always agree to a ridiculous dance
Taelis Selver (Tio Silver): Able to undress unbelievably fast
Taelis Selver (Tio Silver): Welcome to my home of Sweetwine Forest
Scalvoris Location - Immortals Tongue: Dancing Man's shrine to Ashan
Scalvoris Location - Immortals Tongue: Unknown Shrine where people watch others have sex and throw nels at them
Perisprinkle: Dancer and worshiper of Ashan

Tio Silver
Dancing: The Ashan Dance
Dancing: Clap your hands
Dancing: Flap your arms
Dancing: Wiggle your butt
Dancing: Have a good time
Deception: Pretending to be an Eidisi
Deception: Pretending to be a scholar
Disguise: Changing clothes super quickly
Disguise: Dressing like a scholar
Disguise: Dressing like a hippie
Intelligence: Spying on unsuspecting worshippers
Seafaring: Getting a lift to an island


Loot:
Qit'ria
-1 gold nel
+1 woodcarving chisel

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: (Yes/No)
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Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Inali
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Magic Found in Nature
City/Area: Ne'haer (forest)
Notes/Warnings: None

Requested Rewards:
Inali
Knowledge:
Skills:
Blood Tie: Pulls Audrae’s favored southeast
Cartography: Creating a reference map
Deception: Using words to draw attention away from gestures
Survival: Differences in poisonous mushrooms within Ne’haer
Botany: Types and descriptions of tunawa head flora
Leadership: Demanding obedience in a crisis
Stealth: Using decoys to deceive and mislead an enemy
Intimidation: Using two weapons to terrify a small creature
Negotiation: Splitting up difficult tasks

Misc knowledge:
Maknahocan: A rare plant used by the Order of Adunih
Maknahocan: Thin, white fuzz covered leaves
Tunawa: Use birds as mounts
Tree Talk: Difficult to mimic chirps act as greetings
Lisirra: Dislikes Tunawa


Loot: +65 gn (Bounty from the order -5gn from fruit/supplies)

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: 5 maybe? For helping the Ne'haer Order of Adunih with a bounty
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: None
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Inali
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Mounting Tensions
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Minor violence/racism

Requested Rewards:
Inali
Knowledge:
Skills:
Discipline: Withstanding extreme hunger
Discipline: Choosing a difficult path over an easy one
Strength: Weathering kicks to the ribs
Rhetoric: Arguing for free will by way of consequence
Politics: Mortal laws should be used for mortals
Psychology: How the mind of a racist works

Misc knowledge:
Doran: Hero of Etzos
Doran: Complicated man who hates Xiur

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: None
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