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Nightshade Eld
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: All She Wants to do Is Dance
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Practice Combat. This thread was assumeably abandoned by my partner a long time ago so I just finished it for the points and the potential knowledge.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades: Behedding a practice dummy
Blades: The value of "Practice, Observation, and A sharp as heck sword"
Blades: The amount of force required to cut human flesh
Blades: Effects of different speeds on the attack's outcome
Blades: Thickness, density, and yield need to be taken into account durring attacks
Blades: Where to hold a typical broadsword
Blades: Let the blade help you balance your weight and put it into your attack
Teaching: Conducting class before an unruly audience

Loot: 50gn won on a bet
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Minor for showing off blade skills and doing a little combat instruction
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: A Grand Hero
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Another abandoned thread. A little violence in this one given that it is bandit hunting
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades: Taking on multiple enemies
Blades: Lunging with a curved blade
Blades: Where to strike a broadsword to break it
Blades: Attacking weakness in the armor
Blades: Leather is easier to cut than steel
Blades: Taking off a man's arm through leather armor
Blades: The more blades in a fight, the more complicated things become
Persuasion: Convincing potential liabilities to stay behind

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small to Medium for taking care of the bandits
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Honor in the Night
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence, Etzos being trash. This thread is a self-moderated thread for my next Taithir ability of Serpents Interception. It was approved of here that I would get one new ability at the discression of a moderators's review.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Disguise: Weaking a mask
Disguise: Wearing different clothes
Intelligence: Patrol paths of city guards
Investigation: Finding sources
Investigation: Getting help to find information
Politics: Who you're with and where you go cause scandals

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Definitely, a little banged up after this one :lol:
Renown: I feel like this should be Medium or possibly even Major considering the content of the thread
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 124
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Thread Name: Moments
City/Area: Venora
Notes/Warnings: Thread abandoned.
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Faith

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Greeting a child
Caregiving: More than anything, children need love
Intelligence: Servants talk
Intelligence: How to keep a secret

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: She's maxed
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
word count: 50
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Thread Name: Friends & Teachers
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nurp
Requested Rewards:

Pepper

Knowledge:
Etiquette : Not answering questions directed to you is rude
Etiquette : A sincere apology goes a long way in mending matters
Dreamwalking : People who show up in dreams are often somehow connected in the waking world
Dreamwalking : There's no manual for dreamwalking
Dreamwalking : Trust that Miret will intervene when truly needed
Dreamwalking : Each dream walker's journey takes a different path
Dreamwalking : Emea is a vast vast realm, with a lot of complications
Research : Theories and analogies help create mental frameworks which aid in thinking
Dreamwalking : Creativity is key
Research : With some things, experimentation and exploration is the only way to learn

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Probably not.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Arlo

Knowledge:
Discipline: Not reacting
Dreamwalking: Six degrees of separation
Dreamwalking: Lemonade analogy
Dreamwalking: No manual for it.
Dreamwalking: Rules, guidelines and etiquette.
Dreamwalking: Imagination is the most important tool
Socialization: Engaging in an awkward group conversation
Storytelling: Teaching through story and example
Teaching: Giving advice

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Don't think so?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Vega

Knowledge:
Discipline: Not biting someone's head off.
Dreamwalking: Six degrees of separation
Dreamwalking: Lemonade analogy
Dreamwalking: Imagination is the most important tool
Dreamwalking: No manual for it.
Dreamwalking: Rules, guidelines and etiquette.
Socialization: Engaging in an awkward group conversation

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Don't think so.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
word count: 248
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Thread Name: Free From Fame
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: An old thread I never got around to posting up for review, it's more of a reflective piece for Night than anything else.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Perhaps a small amount since at the end of the thread she stands up for the helpless.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Leaving the Past Behind
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: An old reflective thread for Night.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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Thread Name: Trapped
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Not yes. This is part one of a long story.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Chased Awake By Shadows
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Arlo

Knowledge: (13 available)
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Starlight to guide you helps with aim
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Maintaining aim when the ground is shaking
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Aim for the soft flesh of the throat
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Swing your bow to change aim quickly
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Work in partnership with another -aim for different but related places
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Shooting true even amidst distractions
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Grab, aim, shoot
Endurance: Being knocked off your feet.
Endurance: The pain of bruised ribs
Medicine: Small wounds can have nasty stuff in them
Rhetoric: Giving news at an (in)opportune moment
Rhetoric: Stating your feelings
Storytelling: The tale of how Cassion marked you again.


Loot: Carcass of 3 x thundermaw (shared between the two of them)
Injuries/Overstepping: Badly bruised ribs. Will be in pain and uncomfortable for the next 12 trials.
Renown: No
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Vega

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Drop to dodge an attack
Acrobatics: Tumble and stand in one movement
Blade Combat (Longsword): Put strength behind a thrust by pulling your arm back.
Blade Combat (Longsword): Thrust forward and put your weight behind it
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Starlight to guide you helps with aim
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Maintaining aim when the ground is shaking
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Work in partnership with another -aim for different but related places
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Shooting true even amidst distractions
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Grab, aim, shoot is good in an emergency, but not great.
Ranged Combat (Shortbow): Continuous shots will kill even a hard to kill critter
Dancing: Utilising a dance move in combat
Dancing: Spin on the back foot
Medicine: Tending to bruised ribs.

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Don't think so.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
word count: 309
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Thread Name: Looking for Molly
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
Requested Rewards:
Zip lores (9)
Attunement: Dousing for magic
Attunement: Note: Domain Magic: Necromancy
Attunement: Note: Escape
Investigation: Looking for clues
Investigation: Retracing a rogue Necromancer’s steps
Medicine: Burn the dead during a Rhakrosian plague
Medicine: Even the most harmless things can be disease carriers
Medicine: Infectious disease can spread through a ridiculous amount of ways
Medicine: Rhakros’ lab-engineered diseases are ever-improving

Finn lores
No knowledge. He want none.
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: nu
Renown: Nah
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Attunement for Zip
word count: 104
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