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Nir'wei
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: It's Cold Outside
City/Area: Rharne.
Notes/Warnings: It's messy.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Keeping your calm in mortal danger.
Meditation: Focusing through the pain, because it's the right thing to do.
Meditation: Holding onto the trance, even in pain.
Meditation: Blocking out all exterior distractions.
Meditation: Simplifying your thoughts.
Meditation: Letting your body do all of the thinking.
Meditation: Ignoring your body to focus on your mind.
Endurance: Losing a lot of blood, but not a lot of sweat.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Lots of internal and external bleeding.
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes, although Caedhe left.
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Getting On Top Of Things.
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Carpentry: Nailing ceramic to wood
Carpentry: Making adjustments on the go
Carpentry: Filling a hole on a surface
Carpentry: Applying in a pattern
Carpentry: Working in tandem with part of a team
Carpentry: Measuring out the correct amount of material needed for the task
Loot: 5 GN for fixing the roof
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: +1 for good deed? Or however much for completing a community task
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Genuvah
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Thread Name: Learning by Crystal Light
City/Area: Uleuda
Notes/Warnings: A bit of weirdness, but the happy fun kind. Also I didn't finish it completely so maybe less in the way of scoring for me.
Requested Rewards: 12 skill points?
Knowledge:

1. Endurance: Taking it on the chin.
2. Endurance: Sucker Punched to the floor.
3. Endurance: Bracing for Impact.
4. Intelligence: Recognising the signs of a cult.
5. Qa: sounds like nonsense
6. Qa: coded language
7. Qa: Accidentally making sense
8. Linguistics: Qa

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: A chip on his chin.
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Sing Sweet Nightingale
City/Area: The Knight’s Rest Inn and Tavern, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Unbearable amounts of singing Tunawa cuteness
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (5 posts=10 knowledges)
  • Lute: Parts of a lute
  • Lute: How to accompany a Tunawa
  • Lute: Adjusting volume to sing
  • Psychology: A duet to draw the crowd in
  • Psychology: Unusual companions make for more audience interest
  • Singing: Harmonizing with a Tunawa
  • Singing: Translating on the fly
  • Singing: Unusual duets
  • Teaching: Explaining your instrument
Non-Skill Knowledges:
  • Baya: Likes to sing
  • Baya: Can carry a tune
  • Baya: Enthusiastic future musician
Loot: Tips?
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Public performance in a tavern +3 (not quite as amazing to be a +5 Imo)
Devotion: +1 Zanik (prayer, always)
Collaboration: Yes, with Baya
Magic EXP: Nope
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Last edited by Pash Raj'oriq on Mon Aug 28, 2017 6:02 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 133
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Xander Andaris
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Thread Name: [Astedia] Home sweet home
City/Area: Astedia, Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: 6 skill knowledge for solo
Leadership: Always check in randomly on your workers
Leadership: Sometimes separating by gender can increase effectiveness
Appraisal: Examining the work ethic of your employees
Persuasion: Knowing someone's weak spot
Gardening: Removing a plant from its pot
Gardening: Planting and packing in a plant

Non skill knowledge:
The Astedia Gardens: An area for your future children
The Astedia Household: Generally good workers
The Astedia Household: Work well with the different genders separated

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Nir'wei
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Thread Name: Animal Master.
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Enormowl: Checking the wings for infection.
Animal Husbandry: Enormowl: Checking the wings for cramps and strain.
Animal Husbandry: Enormowl: Checking the legs for infection.
Animal Husbandry: Enormowl: Checking the wings for damage/clipping.
Leadership: Telling your superior that they're wrong.
Leadership: Knowing when to do when you're told.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Patrick
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Profession: Trouble
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Thread Name: Never Not In Trouble
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Just a quick link for Peg since she already reviewed it, somehow I missed submitting it for review. As far as warnings there's mild suggestive themes, very mild compared to other threads.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Related
  • Socialization: Accepting Free Drinks
  • Rhetoric: Implying To Personally By A Drink
  • Persuasion: Suggesting "Fun" Later
Generic
  • Pash: The Minstrel
  • Pash: Praises Ilaren
  • Pash: A Traveling Sailor
  • Scarlet: A Noblewoman
  • Memory: Taking Home A Noble's Daughter
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: Ilaren (Drinking in her name) +1
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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"Freedom is everything."


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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: It's Raining Ducks & Bunnies
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: As Arlo is a Dreamwalker / blessed by Jesine, he is able to learn skill knowledges in Emea (checked and confirmed by Anomaly)
Faith
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Arlo: Doesn't know who his father is.
Arlo: Has a big imagination
Arlo: His little blue fairy-thing and PB are now, horrifyingly, dating.

Loot:NA
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Arlo


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Conditions of slavery
Persuasion: Some ideas are too big to fit in a box?
Rhetoric: Nouns
Rhetoric: Onomatopoeia: an uncountable noun
Storytelling: The story of your birth
Storytelling: The people your father could be

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: Jesine: Collab dream thread (+5) Play a game of imagination (+3) Sharing dreams with others (+2) Humour another's imagination (+2) =+12
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Just Passing By
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:
Vega
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Spotting a familiar face in a new place
Fieldcraft: Identifying where to put a tent
Fieldcraft: Not putting dark coverings on tents in hot weather
Psychology: Seasickness can be in your head.
Storytelling: What has happened since last I saw you

Loot:NA
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Arlo


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: Tuna steaks
Cooking: Using hot stones appropriately for outdoor cooking
Detection: Lyova helps to spot others for you.
Etiquette: Meeting a girls' parents can be awkward.
Fieldcraft: Preparing meals quickly in a camp
Fieldcraft: Identifying where to put a tent
Storytelling: What has happened since last I saw you
Storytelling: Spooky descriptions of unusual places

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Tei'serin Nji'ryn
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Race: Sev'ryn
Profession: Herbalist and Teacher
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: [Treth] Lovers Run Amuck
City/Area: Ne'haer/Treth
Notes/Warnings: NA
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Linguistics: is the study of languages
Linguistics: language families are groups of languages that share similar characteristics
Medicine: how to make an herbal tea
Medicine: Plantain; the leaves, and the juice can be used as topical substances in poultices and lotions for treating sunburns, stings, insect bites, snakebites, poison ivy breakouts, rashes, burns, blisters, and cuts
Medicine: Plantain; heated salves applied topically to swollen joints, sore muscles, sprains, and sore feet, can ease the pain caused by these ailments
Medicine: Plantain; when made into a tea and drunk, it can help ease sore throats, and coughs, or it can be swished around the mouth to help ease mouth sores


Non Skill Knowledge


Plantain: is a clumped perennial herb which grows to roughly about 10cm in height
Plantain: is edible
Plantain: can grow in places where there is very little light

Saikuru: a beautiful herb
Saikuru: can be dangerous
Saikuru: also known as Noble's Blessing, and Farmer's Friend
Saikuru: grows to knee height on the average human
Saikuru: produces large blossoms that are sky blue in the center of the flower with darker outer petals that range in color from purple, to dark blue, to black
Saikuru: the sky blue portion of the petals glows under the light of the moon, making this distinctive flower easy to spot in the dark
Saikuru: can be found almost anywhere
Saikuru: isn't poisonous

Tei'serin: loves to read

Lazy trials can be good trials, too.
Even the tiniest detail can be important.
Being small can be an advantage at times.
Love turns people into idiots.


Ne'haer Holiday: Celebration of Love



Loot: Infinity Rings given to you by an old merchant touched by the affection you hold for your significant other. Legend says that Infinity Rings have a special charm connected to them that allows the bearers of the rings to feel the others emotions. This is only a rumor, however, some attest to the legend's truth. This item cannot be sold or given away, +2 Bonus Skill Points (though since Tei'serin doesn't have a significant other, maybe it's a gift so she can give one to the person she falls in love with someday?)
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: Positive for doing a good deed, and maybe for refusing to participate in a bad deed.
Devotion: none
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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