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Dear Reviewer,
This thread was originally my story submission to gain Vri's mark through the Prophet Support Forum. After approval from mods, I was given permission to post this as a thread to receive points and rewards from, as I wanted some knowledges used in this story. My use of Immortals in this thread is solely based off the fact that this was intended to remain in the support forum. I have the OK to post this for points so please enjoy!
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43rd Trial of Ashan, Arc 689

The days were just beginning to warm within the Ashan season, desperately attempting to eat away the ice that Cylus had left behind. It was nightfall now, midnight actually, and beside his crib sat a woman with messy blonde curls, resting against the wooden backrest of a rocker. She was quietly sleep with a thrown blanket tucked around her limbs.

Warren looked up at the wooden ceiling, his taking interest in the beams he found there. Artistic pieces hung from the rafters, looking like decorative stained glass molded and curved around gentle metal wiring. When the sun rose and blessed the glass with its rays, it would paint the walls in hues of beautiful color that rained heaven upon the inside of the home.

However, it was nighttime now, and what little light found its way in only decorated the walls in eerie purples and blues. Warren found no fear from this though, he rolled over and crawled to the railing, using the wooden bars to hoist himself up onto wobbly legs as he looked about the open farmhouse with curious, big blue eyes. Where was the man? He wondered. Where did he go?

From the shadows, as if hearing the child, bloomed a tall, lanky figure that stepped out towards the crib with such sudden appearance, Warren’s face crinkled in dislike and he gave a small pause as a hiccup of a cry began to sound. The figure approached regardless, the cry of the baby never halting his step until he stood right before Warren. The child let go of the bars and fell back on his butt, displease by the stranger that was not the normal man that tended him! Who was this person?

The baby paused in his crying, noticing that a hand was moving down towards him and, with gentle caress, stroked the top of the boy’s soft, blonde patch of hair in soothing brushes. Warren hiccuped, being lifted from the crib till he hovered over the face of the man.

He was pale, with hair as black as shadows, and eyes as dark as the void. Warren stuffed two fingers in his mouth, hiccuping around them as his eyes fell to his mother. She continued to sleep soundlessly.

“Interesting...” The noise of a voice, coming from the man, pulled Warren’s eyes to him again and this time, the boy watched with curiosity before reaching out to him. The distance was too great between them, but that did not stop the babe. “Born of intervention...” The man spoke again, but this time, his voice sounded in whispers.

He placed the baby back in his crib, another hand smoothing the hair atop his head before he pulled away and disappeared without another word...
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76th Trial of Zi’da, Arc 698

It was strange, really, how Zi’da could be so harsh in Hyran this time of year. One would think, settled so close to the ocean, that the sunbeams would somehow reflect onto the land, and warm it up more so than what it was. This was a silly idea, Warren realized, because the snow was still thick and present and smothering.

A puff of air clouded his vision as small boots climbed on top of a rocky edge, a small cliff face greeting him as he looked down to assess the area. There were trees everywhere and if their dead branches didn’t blend in with the next, the green pines obscured his field of vision with piles of snow. The pounding of his heart thudded in his ears, singing the song of fear as he watched the sun begin to settle on the horizon. It was getting dark, and Warren was no closer to figuring out where they were than he was breaks before hand.

“Ren… I’m cold.” A small voice called from behind him, and he turned with bright blue eyes toward Altea, his younger sister. She wore a thick dress with a leather jacket over her small shoulders, but even still, her cheeks were chapped red, as were her hands, and she was shivering like a mouse.

Warren climbed down quickly, taking off the cloak his mother fashioned for him and draped it around his sister’s shoulders. He bundled her up, then pulled the hood over her head to conceal her from the cold. “There, Alte. Better?” He asked, beginning to look around them once more. She gave a small nod.

“Have you found Papa yet?” Her voice mumbled. Warren grimaced.

“No, but I think I saw smoke off in that direction.” He pointed, “We’re close, Alte.” He lied.

“My feet hurt, Ren…” Altea shivered.

Warren frowned, “Didn’t you wear your boots?” Without pause, and inappropriately, he bent and lifted the cloak and her skirts to see her feet. “Alte! Momma told you to wear your boots!”

“They hurt!” She yanked the fabric down. “And Momma says boys aren’t supposed to do that!”

Warren tossed his hands up in the air, much like his father when him and his mother would argue. Altea had worn her flats, and from the looks of it, her feet were swollen red and probably on the verge of frostbite. They needed to get someplace warm, Warren knew, but where and how? He couldn’t start a fire without his father’s tinderbox… The only thing they could hope for was to find a hole or a tree or something… something to keep warm in so they could survive the cold.

His stomach growled hungrily. Warren was becoming impatient and fearful, the concern for his meek sister setting off all sorts of primal alarms in his head. They weren’t doing good…

“Come on, Altea. I’ll carry you, but we’ve got to keep moving or else we’ll never get home.” Warren sighed, his own exhaustion blooming a headache behind his eyes, but he carried on even when his sister climbed onto his back. Picking a direction, he walked…

And walked…

And walked until the shroud of night welcomed them and his legs quivered with the last bit of strength he had left. He felt his sisters shivering stop after a while and assumed she’d warmed up a bit, but when she started to slip and slide on his back, he paused. “Altea?” He asked but was given only a small mumble. “Altea, are you sleepy?”

She sounded a noise that confirmed such suspicions. “Okay, we can stop here for the night. Come on Alte.” Warren spoke weakly and, as best he could, helped his sister from his back and into the hole of an overturned tree. It’s roots jutted above the ground, forming a canopy of leaves that protected the soil inside from the snow. Warren tucked Altea in, resting up beside her before taking a bit of the cloak he gave her and pulling it over him. It wasn’t enough… He shivered and sat up, looking around them for something more. They were too use to sleeping in cozy beds by a warm fire than nothing stuck out in the blackness of night.

Blue eyes looked to his sister, but she was already fastly asleep, so, deciding not to wake her, Warren leaned over and shoveled the pile of dead leaves over them. Once safely underneath the rot, the boy settled down and cuddled closer to his sister. She was cold… but she wasn’t shivering. That was good, right?

His eyes slid shut and while his heart still pounded in his chest, exhaustion took him from the world of the living and into the abyss of unconsciousness.

Laughter roused him by he was too faded to open his eyes, though, underneath his lids, he could make out impressions of light. Had their Papa found them? He was so tired.

“Ren! Ren, wake up!” His sister’s enthusiastic voice beckoned him. Warren sighed, he just wanted to sleep.

“Ren, get up!” He was expecting a shove but one never came. “No, Altea. Go away.”

“Ren, come on, they found us! We can go home now.” Altea tried to convince him and, with what little awareness Warren had, he forced his eyes open.

It was like a swarm of fireflies fell from the skies and circled around the pair, dancing softly in a breeze that wasn’t present. If Warren hadn’t felt so numb, so tired, his shock would have pushed him beneath the cloak and leaves. Alas, he couldn’t move, even if he wanted to. Above, at the rim of the hole they laid within, was a familiar man who stood tall, lanky but built, with hair the color of shadows. Next to him was Altea. She whipped her head around and scurried away from his field of vision, but Warren hadn’t noticed. His eyes were locked on that of the man’s. He stared at Warren, hands in the pockets of his slacks as a short sleeve tunic sat upon his shoulders. He wore nothing else. Not even shoes.

It was the dead of winter! How could he not wear shoes? Something wasn’t right here and pulling for strength, Warren only managed to turn his body onto his back. It sung with pain.

“Altea— no!” Her brother breathed, his lungs heavy. “Tea, come back!”

As requested, she tumbled back into his view with a smile on her face. “Warren, quit being lazy and get up.” Her hand reached out. “Come on, let’s go!”

“No—!”

A slender hand reached out and caught her own, the man beside her was bent at the knees so he was eye level with the girl. “No.” His voice commanded. “He cannot go.” Altea furrowed her brow and pulled her hand away. “Why not? You said we were going home.” The girl moved away.

Another figure approached— a woman, tall and curvaceous with long gray hair and eyes that glowed with the rest of her form. She leaned down and petted Altea's head, beckoning the girl’s blue eyes to her red ones. “Fear not,” The woman soothed, “Your Papa will be here to help him back home. He is tired, let him sleep a little longer.” Her hand reached down, offering to help the girl up. “It’s cold here, isn’t it..? There is a warmer place waiting for you. Your Papa will know where you have gone, and he and your mother and brother will see you in time, young one.”

A moment of hesitation lingered until Altea’s small hand reached for the woman’s blackened one. She was helped up and turned back to Warren with a somewhat quirky smile. “You’re so lazy, Warren. Why do you have to sleep so much? Geez.” She joked lightly, though there was a bit of uncertainty in her eyes. “Don’t sleep too long.”

“Alte, no—” Warren kept saying, but his voice was squeezed for air and his chest heaved. "No, no, no, no..!" He didn’t realize it, but he was sobbing. “Altea, don’t go with them..!” A broken voice called. Tears slid down his cheeks, red, chapped and frozen. The salt stung and the pain only made it worse. This was real..! "Altea..! Alltteea!" He sobbed. "Come back! Nooo!"

The fireflies around him drifted away, fading along with the glow the woman emitted. The man had paused to stay behind and watched the boy, a knowing look in his eyes before he ducked his head and dragged himself up from his bent position in front of the hole. He said nothing, letting Warren weep into the silence of the night, disappearing with the spirit of his sister and the woman that took her...
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1st Trial of Zi’da, Arc 715

A curl of smoke eased past full lips as a freshly rolled cigarette sat at the corner of said pillows, embers blazing in the dying light of the day. Nineteen arcs had passed and with every beat of time away from the memory, the pain numbed more and more.

In the afternoon hours of the following day, Warren’s father had discovered him tucked around the rigid form of his sister, and while she appeared to be sleeping much like he, Icarus knew by her pale skin that she’d passed in the night. Of course, he wasn’t strong enough to carry both children back, so he’d hefted Warren up and taken him home first. He was smart to mark his way and little time was spent collecting his daughter’s remained.

His mother had screamed, and each time Warren thinks back to the memory, that sound echos with the same hollowness as it did the first time it ripped through the air. He was lost. They were lost. Death was an all consuming void that grasped at the souls of everyone present. A parent should never have to bury their child. Never.


In the coming weeks, Warren had recovered, and while his body rebounded, his mind was left in shambles. To say he was faded was an understatement. The boy had witness something everyone around him confirmed was a hallucination brought on by the shock of losing his sister, but he knew better. He was tied to the stories his parents uttered since the days of his youth and, upon investigation, discovered the Immortal who haunted his sleep.

Vri.

It was a drawing someone depicted in a children’s book, but if his memory served him right, the image was as close to what he’d seen that night— who he’d seen. Warren read up on the fable, what the mortals knew of such a being, and came to find that he was the cursed death bringer. Vri had came that night and collected his sister right in front of Warren, but why hadn’t the God taken him too?

Did he feel blessed that he was spared? Maybe he could have traded places with Altea… He’d thought of all this and more in his time.

The truth, he came to realize, was that Death waits for no one. There was no trade of final breath to be made, only its stalling until the time came for cold caress to still a beating heart. Warren had grown cold from such loss, his mother moreso, but the tendrils of such knowledge begged for him to understand better of human error, of mistakes, of life, and death.

And he hated it. He hated Vri. He cursed the God for the destruction he wrought upon his family. But with age came understanding, numbness, and forgiveness. There was nothing more he could have done than what he had already. So, instead, he took upon himself to memorialize his sister within their sparse settlement in Hyran by petitioning a holiday in her honor. Winter Maiden’s Day was officially passed after Warren’s twenty fourth Arc and while he and his father were comfortably pleased by the announcement, his mother pulled further away.

Warren now stood over her gravestone with a bouquet of winter roses, decorated around snow dusted branches and leaves. He settled the flowers onto the dirt and patted the cold, crafted stone with the palm of his hand. Words fluttered on the tip of his tongue but were never spoke in the silence. Warren felt as though he’d said all he needed to over the arcs…

“Another Arc, Altea,” Warren spoke gently, “I hope your rest is easy…” He sighed, looking for the words, “And I hope you’re giving the Lord of Ends a much deserved kick in the ass.” He laughed.

Tapping lightly at the gravestone, Warren eased into the rather sudden, harsh Zi’da breeze and, after a pause, nodded his head lightly before turning to go. It didn’t shock him, however, when he noticed a familiar man standing a bit away from him, looking as deathly as his domain allowed. Warren said nothing but stood there, sizing the deity with wary curiosity. This was real?

The wind swept an ember onto the skin of his neck, burning with stinging pain. Yes, this was real.

“Loe and behold,” Warren breathed out rather dully, but that was only to hide the coil of fear that crawled up his spine. Was Vri here to take him away as he did with Altea? The God never responded, only stared. Stared at what though? Warren noticed it wasn’t at him and glanced behind him to the gravestone.

“Is she at peace..?” Warren asked softly, turning back. Vri’s eyes pulled up from the headstone, dark, endless voids gazing upon the mortal with frigid intensity before nodding. Warren took a sudden drag from the tobacco almost burning at his lips, as if that would ease the storm of emotions raging within his heart. He flicked the bud away and exhaled, looking down… Then up, nodding. “Thank you.”

He moved to walk away, but was stopped when alarms started to ring in his head and, sharply, his eyes fell to the spot he last saw the Immortal. He was no longer there. Warren turned forward, expecting him, but there was not a soul in sight. Finally, he chanced a glance at Altea’s grave and witnessed the God bending to collect the bouquet he had left.

“I take no honor...” Came his whispers of a voice, “In collecting the young. It is a tragedy that no being should bear the burden of…” His other palm outstretched, fingers bent with palm facing the sky, he summoned forth from the ground below vines with thorns that wrapped gracefully around the headstone and spread out in a small radius around the grave before crisp white and blue roses blossomed from the vines. The flowers looked enchanted, lightly dusted with frost, while the thorns were rounded off and harmless. Vri placed the bouquet back upon the grave.

“I know you and your family have suffered through many trials of pain because of such loss. I know of your anger… sorrow by the prayers you utter to this grave.” Expressionless, Vri regarded Warren, his sentence punctuated by those endless black eyes. It unsettled the mortal. What was even more disturbing, however, was what came from the deity next. “I am sorry.”

Warren was silent for a long while till he couldn’t keep the pain from distorting his features and he bent by the knees and hunched till his hair hid the tears in his eyes. His fists clenched and unclenched, such intense emotions surging only to find a calmness of acceptance. He let out a shaky breath, quiet tears beading down his stubbly cheeks.

The man didn’t look up when he felt a hand upon his shoulder. “Nevertheless, you have gained my favor... Use wisely, this gift and never forget…”

A gasp of air caught in the mortal’s throat as it felt his very soul was being warped and struck with of power. He bent forward on his hands and knees, gasping as his vision turned white, feeling connections laid within his mind and body while his form shuttered in response to the energy zapping down his arms and legs.

Warren wasn’t sure how long he sat there for, but when he open his blue eyes, the Immortal was gone with the only sign of his existence ever being was that of the enchanted roses and the black hands Warren sported. Clenching and unclenching his fingers, the mark slowly faded away till all that was left were black nails.
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