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Alistair and Fridgar

7th of Ashan 717

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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[Mature] "I'm gonna punch it"

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A one-for-one match? He shrugged. "Such great resources expended," he pointed out. "Your dealings with me are distinct from the arrangements you make with Talia. I'm sure she will allow you a one-for-one exchange, on certain conditions. Favorable to both the Coven and to yourself, I'm sure. I can, in fact, promise that if she finds your terms acceptable - she would be willing to offer you this number to defend the southern frontier." He nodded.

The Coven had been growing, slowly, for some time. Whilst Vuda surely meant to thin them out for the sake of reducing their cult-like influence on their members, Alistair imagined that the opposite could take effect; more of his mages could join their fold. The Coven would surely send their most charismatic, and those who projected power. They would seek to entice these other mages with that power.

It was all a game, but one that the Sae'a'fei - Talia - would play with Vuda, without Alistair's involvement. He didn't care; he would play a courier for their terms, and in exchange, gain Fridgar's freedom. The mage was content, particularly in seeing the gnarled creature of a man remove the ring from his fingers. Alistair stepped forward and placed the artifact within his palm. Before wearing it, he would present it to Talia for inspection, to judge the safety of the ring. She was an exceptional dustforger and ensorceller, and he imagined she would be able to ascertain any nefarious properties. It would be in her best interest to do so, as well, considering the Rupturer's position as the negotiator between these parties.

His minions stood back and moved into a statue-like, disciplined position, with their arms at each side and their weapons stowed. There was no longer any conflict that called for their services, and their inaction was a sign of the agreement they'd forged.

"A useful gift," he told Vuda. "If this allows me to assert influence over the wearer of the other ring, then... I can use this, indeed. But I am a nobleman of a great and powerful family, and I pay my dues. You say you have too many enemies, creature -- if you ever wish of me to dispose some of them, I will do so. The Coven will provide you the means of my contact." He nodded. It was a show of good faith of his own, and it was a necessary one. The man had Fridgar. None of this was worth it if his love was harmed.

"Now, may I see my love returned to me?" he asked, opening his palm and staring at the ring.
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[Mature] "I'm gonna punch it"

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Come and get your Loot!

(There's plenty more where that came from)


ALISTAIR:
Rewards:

  • Story: +5
  • Collaboration: +10
  • Structure: +5

These points CAN be used for magic

Knowledges:

  • Abrogation: Shackle: To Hold a King Croc's Tail in Place
  • Blades: Always the Jugular to Finish a Fight
  • Field Craft: The Magnificent Flying Furball of the West
  • Field Craft: You Have to go into the Wild to Really Learn
  • Fridgar: Not Big on Listening to Advice
  • Gangui: Tried to Help
  • Intimidation: Threats of Magic
  • King Crocodiles: Found in Southwood River by Etzos
  • King Crocodiles: Move Quietly, Hiss Loudly
  • King Crocodiles: Natural Armor Stymies Normal Weapons
  • NPC: Etzos' Chief Adviser, Karnos Vuda
  • Necromancy: Corpse Molding to Reinforce Bones for Hitting Armored Targets
  • Necromancy: Wither: Can Rot Natural Armor
  • Negotiation: Coming to Terms With Fridgar at Stake
  • PC: Gangui: Armored Soldier on Horseback
  • Rupturing: "Nailing" a Crocodile Down
  • Vuda: Abrogator, Rupturer and Sovereign Mage
  • Vuda: Relies on His Many Wells to Avoid Overstepping
  • Vuda: Won't Back Down, But He Will Deal

Loot:

Dominant Ring of Empathy


Loss:

Nothing to speak of


Injuries:

Just a step into Moderate OS.
Exhaustion, Distorted Vision, rest up...lol


Fame: -10

Several Acts of Magic.
Probably rumored around town by Gangui.


Devotion:

Nahh...none of that


Comments:

Not trying to rub salt in it. Gotta go with the rp perspective here.
I genuinely think rumors would hit town about this.

Per your use of the new Visitant revelation: While the general understanding is that a PC should fail the first few times they try a new magic, the new Visitant revelation should properly be considered a retroactive replacement to the previous revelation; and therefore must be held to be something Alistair would have already had experience with. So I did not call him on successfully doing it the first time.
(But I DID decide to Overstep you a bit. :P )

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FRIDGAR:
Rewards:

  • Story: +5
  • Collaboration: +10
  • Structure: +5

These points CAN be used for magic

Knowledges:

  • Becoming: Chrysalis Has to Force out Foreign Matter from a Wound
  • Field Craft: A Kick in the Snout May Delay an Animal's Attack
  • Field Craft: A King Croc's Maw Seems to be Everywhere
  • Field Craft: Don't Punch a King Croc's Swinging Tail
  • Gangui: Tried to Help
  • King Crocodiles: Found in Southwood River by Etzos
  • King Crocodiles: Move Quietly, Hiss Loudly
  • King Crocodiles: Natural Armor Stymies Normal Weapons
  • NPC: Etzos' Chief Adviser, Karnos Vuda
  • Politics: Focus on Knighthood is an Unpleasant Reminder
  • PC: Gangui: Armored Soldier on Horseback
  • Palenon: Three Sheets: Allows Quick Dismissal of Distractions
  • Vuda: Considered You To Owe Him a Life Debt
  • Vuda: Rupturer and More
  • Vuda: Tried to Control You With Ring of Empathy

Loot:

A fun spin-off with Capt. Segrille


Loss:

a King Croc Totem. :(
But I see you got one in a different thread to make up for it. :D


Injuries:

Your leg is weak. Chrysalis has not fully restored it.
It is the phrase: "His leg healed, leaving plenty of scars in wake of what was missing muscle." that I refer to.
Something to consider while you and Segrille beat each others' brains out. :lol:


Fame: -10

Same reason as I gave Alistair.
(Same disclaimer too.)


Devotion:

Nahh...didn't hear any praises for Ilaren in this one.


Comments:

I have to admit, I am not up on the dynamics of this "weak spark" you mention.
But you limited your magic use after the one Chrysalis, so I did not hit you with any OS.
I have trouble sometimes finding cause to award knowledge for things done in rage and instinct. Especially when they are things Frid has done so often. It is hard to figure that there's much "knowledge" gleaned from it.

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GANGUI:
Rewards:

  • Story: +5
  • Collaboration: +10
  • Structure: +5

Knowledges:

  • Acrobatics: Balancing Sword Strikes While on a Mount
  • Alistair: Arrogant and Ungrateful
  • Discipline: Standing Your Ground to Show Support
  • Etiquette: Help Those Who Appear in Need
  • Field Craft: Armor Makes Cold Weather Warmer
  • Field Craft: It's Easier to Notice Scents With no City Nearby
  • Fridgar: Follows Alistair's Lead
  • King Crocodiles: Found in Southwood River by Etzos
  • King Crocodiles: Move Quietly, Hiss Loudly
  • King Crocodiles: Natural Armor Stymies Normal Weapons
  • Mount: Horse: Be Aware of Changes in Soil Composition
  • NPC: Etzos' Chief Adviser, Karnos Vuda
  • PC: Alistair: Powerful Mage
  • PC: Fridgar: Freakishly Strong Lotharro Brute
  • Intimidation: Wrong Place, Wrong Time
  • Rupturing: The Tearing Sound of a Portal Opening
  • Rupturing: Witnessing the "Nail" Ability
  • Sesser: Experiencing the Power of the "Ever Alluring"
  • Vuda: Gave You the Help You Needed

Loot:

Nothing to speak of


Loss:

Got away basically unscathed.


Injuries:

A very sore knee. Keep off it for a few days.


Fame: +5

The story will get you several free ales.


Devotion:

Nope, none of that.


Comments:

I'm sorry that this ended up having hard feelings connected to it.
It was a lot of fun for me, but I have no idea how clear anyone may or may not have been about the original intentions of this or that plot line or goal. I don't really think a 6-day delay is that big a deal, nor do I think anyone needed to drop public notes about who they think is meta-gaming or not. That can be done through PMs or the Advocates. I think there was some merit to both sides' complaints. And I've had all the talks I needed with everyone about my own, so I hope you guys will be content to just avoid each other for awhile. :o
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