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Freya's wound grows worse.

119th of Vhalar 716

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119th Trial of Vhalar, Arc 716
The 7th Break


“Infection has spread into the wound and poisoned the blood. There is little we can do for her in the way of common medicine.” A tall man stated. He was pale, dark haired, and particularly clean for the kind of place the band found themselves in. Glasses sat on the bridge of his nose and quite glaringly out of all his features was the slave mark on the side of his neck. His behavior, however, was far from one.
“In the way of common medicine?” Haraji repeated, his voice tingled with disbelief, “Do you mean to suggest something else other than medicine?”
“Well, there are certain drugs we've been manipulating mixtures with that may help improve her condition, but unless something drastic takes place, it will only improve the quality or her life, not the quantity.” The news seemed to obviously upset the Biqaj smuggler as he began to pace about the floor of the clinic with a distant expression.
“You said she was aboard a ship for... Twenty trials?” The slave continued.
“Roughly.” Caed answered.
“Spending twenty trials aboard a filthy ship is no place for a kind of wound she has. You cleaned and packed it? How many times has she broken fever?”
“Twice, I think...” Haraji stopped pacing, “What drastic measures do you mean?”
The slave was silent for a long while before the implication finally clicked within the smuggler's mind and he shook his head, “No. You find another way but I can assure you, she would rather die than become a lab rat or creature you people are notorious for making.”
Caed sighed, “Accusations will get us no where.”
“I take no offense, but this is the most I can offer for her condition. She's facing withdrawal from the Panorium Powder, dehydration, fever, infection... I'm surprised she's still alive, even more so that she's still moving her arm. The nerve damage alone from the cauterization should have stunted that... Nevertheless, death will greet her sooner if she decides to do nothing.”
“Well then,” Caed muttered, “Here's hoping fever killed her stubbornness.”
“No.”
Freya laid upon a thinly stuffed mattress that was held up by a less than adequate wooden frame. Her skin was ghostly pale with purple bags under her black eyes and hands that shook of their own will. The biqaj woman was sweating profusely and breathing rather hard as she shut her eyes and shook her head, “I won't...”
Haraji tossed a hand through his hair and scowled, “Why, because it's Rhakros? You're dying Freya. They can't do anything more for you.”
“I will not...” She sucked in a breath and shook, trying to ease the ache of her body,”... become... some lab rat.”
“Freya, this isn't about being a lab rat, it's about treatment. Let them try to help and if they can't, we'll find some other way.” Caed tried to reason with her but only anger flashed across her face.
“Help? There isn't any help here— there is only death! I will not... allow you... to hand me to them like some puppet to be... worked over!” Breathing harder, her head plopped against the lumpy pillow. “Get out...”
She could feel her voice waiver as she spoke the words, but Freya was too weak to correct herself. At a time like this, she wished she'd bled out on the deck. Maybe this is what Wendell intended for her all along: to die a slow and miserable death.
“Alright Freya, but we'll be back by nightfall... You need to consider your options until then.”
There was no point to the man's words. Freya already made up her mind. She'd rather die a lonesome death than become something she wasn't. She would never allow herself to be reduced to anything less than who she was and if that meant death... then so be it.
Once the sound of the door signaled it shut and their boots thudded away, Freya rolled over and sank into the mattress. Tears welled up in her eyes and thin fingers reached out for something— anything. She found the pillow and curled into it, drowning its soft comfort in sorrow.
It was because of the fever, Freya told herself.

It was just the fever...
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The 11th Break

Breaks passed and while she'd cried out her fear and sorrows in peace, the only company Freya had now was pain. Utterly slow, tormenting pain that throbbed in her shoulder like a sick, cold fire... Cold fire? The biqaj heaved and sat up but such a mistake sent her back to the bed as the room spun. She needed to throw up.
Freya reached for the bucket by the side of her bed and expelled the water from her system. The sound she made must have carried because the same slave from earlier entered her room. Or maybe he'd been there all along and she just never took notice. One hand pushed her back to the bed while the other pressed cool tips to her forehead.
“You're getting worse.”
“Oh really...” She retorted and when he went to pull his hand away, she snatched his wrist and pressed it back. The slave paused as she sighed, “It's too hot in here.”
“You have a fever.” He responded again, his voice lacking any emotion and for that, Freya released his wrist almost as if it burned. Looking up, she studied him for a moment before finally asking the obvious question in the room. “You know, you don't act like a slave.”
He remained quiet which only drove her further to question his existence and the role he played in Rhakros, “Doesn't your Master beat you for such behavior? I've only ever seen a slave act as you do when they've lived in Ne'haer for a time.”
“If you don't need anything, I'll take my leave.” The slave responded in kind but Freya was desperate for relief. She grasped at his robes, being the only thing she could grab as he turned away.
“No, wait..! The pain... it's driving me mad. Please, I'll pay anything.” Her voice begged meekly, “The powder... Just more powder... I can't take this.”
Turning back to her, the slave shook his head, “The powder will not help you now. You've used too much, don't you see?” His hand plucked her's from the robes and he laid it back on her stomach and watched as it shook. “You've built up a tolerance for the drug by using it excessively to treat your symptoms. Now it's just killing you faster—”
“Then something else!” She cried out. “If I'm dying then get me something else! What good are you if you can't help the sick!”
His expression remained neutral but Freya was sure she saw his eyes darken as he left the room. Her behavior was wild, appalling, childish... There were options here to save her, to prevent Vri's cold embrace, but the woman couldn't bring herself to make the decision. There was always a catch to everything in life, especially in Rhakros. She could be signing a new death wish just by asking for help beyond medical practice.
The slave returned and offered her a cold liquid, “What is this?”
“Something to help sooth the pain.”
Eyeing him, Freya pushed it away, “You drink it first.”
That same dark look overtook his emerald eyes as he rose the drink to his lips and took a sip, then offered it back. Freya seized it, peeked at the liquid, then tossed it back with a hiss following. “What the sard was that?”
“Something to sooth the pain.” The slave repeated, taking up the cup. “It is a blend of medicinal plants found within the jungle. It's not as powerful as the Panorium Powder, but it will... Take your mind off of things.”
With that, he exited the room, leaving Freya to ponder his words.
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The 13th Break

Did the day mean to drag on? Or did she sleep through it and it was the 21st? Or was it the 20th? Had she disappeared in a void only to return to an unfamiliar time? What time was it? Where was she?
Freya cracked her lids open, black eyes searching the room around her but she felt so heavy, so lost, she could hardly make out what was what, where it was, or why it was there. Fighting the haze, she opened her eyes wider to take in the room. It was hued in gray tones, and a noise carried against the glass of the window that suggested it was raining but Freya assumed it was the sky falling.
She dragged the small blanket up over her head and sucked in a breath. So cold... It felt as if Cylus lived within her flesh. What she wouldn't give to be an exploding freak of an Aukari right now... But her head throbbed and the noise the clouds were making, tapping on the window as they did, were causing her to bubble up with... with... something.
Easing from the covers, Freya rolled over and groaned softly when she noticed she was melting into the mattress. In reality, she'd sweat so much, the woman was basically laying in a pool of water. Her mind thought otherwise and she let out a startled gasp, ripping the blanket from her body to see her legs melting into the mattress. She was stuck.
“No!” Her voice quivered. “No..! No!”
Sliding her hands over her legs, she felt wetness and pulled her palms back up under her eyes to look upon them. Melted goop clung there, looking like flesh but looking like water too and she let out a soft scream. Then someone came into the room and crazed black eyes looked up to find a woman. She looked oddly familiar and instantly, Freya held her hands to the woman.
“I'm melting..!”
The woman grasped her hands and peered down at them, turning them over before stepping to the side table to retrieve a cloth. “You're not melting.” She said but her voice sounded funny.
Freya watched as the brunette cleaned the goop off her hands, then her legs, and finally, her neck, cheeks, and forehead. After she was finished, she moved to stand Freya up.
“No, I'm stuck— my legs melted, I can't move...”
“Your legs aren't melted. I took care of that, see?”
With ease, the woman lifted Freya from the bed and placed her in the chair adjacent to it. But how? How did her legs become unstuck?
“You've done something to my mind...” The biqaj accused, shaking where she sat as if the room was Viden itself. The woman only smiled and went about changing the sheets. Freya watched her as steadily as she could and the more she looked at the woman, the more she looked like Freya.
“M-Mother..?” At the spoken title, the woman paused and looked up. She seemed taken back, but her eyes started to change colors and the curve of her jaw, her lips... everything reminded Freya of herself. “Weren't you... didn't you die?”
Pausing in her task, the woman seemed completely puzzled. Why did she have such an expression? Wasn't she glad to see her daughter after all these years?
“Where were you?” Freya broke, “I've yearned for you so much and you were hiding in Rhakros..? Why did you lie to me? Why did you abandon me?!... Wasn't I worth something to you? Or were you so disgraced by my existence, you left me alone just like the rest of them!”
“Stop.” That one strange word silenced the biqaj as her mother hurriedly finished making the bed. Approaching the sick smuggler again, she just about tossed her back to the sheets and turned to leave.
“No, Mother, please... Please don't go, I don't want you to leave me again.”
“I'm not your mother.” She responded before stepping from the room.
Freya couldn't help but sink further into the darkness... It was so welcoming.
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The 15th Break

Freya lifted heavy lids open to stare at a blob of something she couldn't quite get into focus. Her body felt like a rock and hummed with pain so intensely, she felt numb from it. Or maybe she was so tired now, she couldn't recognize the pain anymore. In the back of her mind, a little voice told her she was in danger. That death was just around the bend and she was allowing herself to give into it so pitifully... but what other choice did she have? She didn't want to find out what they'd do to her here. By the fates, they may just turn her into something so horrendous that Caed and Haraji would have to leave her behind. Freya would be forever stuck as something not herself, praying for death she could easily find in this moment...
Black eyes slowly focused on the outline of a body. Her mind tried to piece together the woman from earlier but, after some strain and thought, the slave came into view. He was in the chair next to her bed, peering into an old book with fixed interest. Freya watched him because he didn't seem to realize she was awake yet and for the life of her, she couldn't help but think of Wendell. What would happen to him once she passed? He could take care of himself, that she knew. But would he try to erase her from his memories? Cut away the tattoo that bound him to her and leave in its place a scarring mark that could only suggest a piece of the story? What of the others? Of Valkan and Caed and Haraji? She'd miss reminiscing with Valkan and that smile he wore when he'd think something humorous and completely inappropriate. Would he return home to Ne'haer? Could he? Would he forget her after he found home with another, whoever that may be.
Freya sighed softly, pulling to her the eyes of the slave.
“You're awake.” He said quite obviously, but Freya kept quiet which seemed to perplex him, “Are you alive in there?”
“Maybe.” She answered quietly. “Maybe I deserve this.”
Lifting a brow, the slave closed the book and settled in his chair, “Deserve what?”
“To die.” Silence grew between them.
“And why is it you think that?”
Freya didn't offer quick response. She simply laid there, staring at him as if he had all the answers. “I murdered a woman to protect someone I barely knew..”
“Murder is a hefty crime.” He agreed. Groaning softly, the woman used all of her strength to turn over and once she was comfortable, she found herself gasping for air.
“Yeah, well... She had it coming. No one kidnaps and marks another a slave aboard my ship... The only regret I have... is that I didn't do it sooner.”
The slave's expression changed, but his mask quickly fell into place before Freya could properly register the emotions. He spoke lightly, “You murdered to protect a slave?”
“Well... Yes.”
“Why?”
Another pause gave way to dozens of thoughts spilling into her mind before she chose the best one. “Because it was the right thing to do.”
“He didn't ask to be kidnapped and I didn't want him aboard my ship... More mouths to feed. If I could... I would have returned him home but I couldn't. We're on a time schedule, well... they are. I'm... I'm...” Freya couldn't bring herself to finish what she meant to say.
However, the slave was curiously confused, “If you protected a slave then why do you deserve to die by it?”
She smiled lightly, “He's... different. He's the most infuriating person I've met in my life but... I don't want to return him. Not to his home, not to his friends and family, not to his woman, not to anyone or anything. I won't... even though I said I would...”
“And that's reason enough for death?”
Freya shrugged softly. “When you've been alone for as long as I have... and you force an innocent to be near you, with you... To force them to want you. That in itself is so... sickening... but I don't want to stay away and I don't want to stop... Even though I should.”
From the crack of the door poked the head of a mysteriously beautiful blonde woman. She eyed the slave and with a tilt of her head, beckoned him from the room. Turning back to Freya, he left the book on the side table and stood. “Get some rest.” He told before leaving her once more.
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The 19th Break

The current changed, of that she was sure, but she couldn’t find stride in the waves that persisted. They met her footfalls on the shores of the beach, it’s sand warm and light unlike what she was use to back in Ne’haer. The Saun sun was dazzling too, almost blinding, but aside from the gentle sea breeze and the brush of leaves against the wind that caressed them so, everything was quiet.
Somewhere in the back of her mind, Freya knew she shouldn’t be here. Another part begged to differ. The one that whispered from tired history that she should remain here at all costs because, well, why not? Why leave? Freya paused in her stride and turned toward the sea. Not even the sound of seagulls greeted her, it was only the crashing of the waves upon the shore.
Her golden eyes gazed out onto the ocean and somewhere within her soul, she knew this was her time. Whatever judgement befell her from the Fates, this was her place now. Freya couldn’t go back.
Those same eyes turned toward the path she had taken and watching as her footprints were slowly washed away by the waves. Somehow, it calmed her only until the horizon stared back at her again and she broke. Sinking to her knees, Freya folded in on herself with a sob, the waves pulling at her brown locks as they brushed against the water.
How was it that, even in death, she was all alone?
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Knowledge:
Endurance: Overcoming fever
Endurance: Prolonged pain
Resistance: A high tolerance for Panorium Powder
Tactics: Never drink first
Wendell: Cursed you?
Wendell: Can take care of himself
Wendell: The most infuriating man that ever existed
Wendell: You lied to him
Wendell: Will never be returned home
Medicine: Common symptoms of fever
Deception: Some lies are powerful

Loot: n.a
Injuries: n.a
Fame: -2 Lying
Magic: n.a
Devotion: n.a

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 0/5
Structure: 5/5

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I think I only noticed one mistake and it was so minor it didn't matter. This story was truly enthralling. I only wish it had been ten times longer. You write Freya as this tough chick clashing with a part of herself that wants to reach out and not be alone anymore, and it is very believable. This is a great chapter in the book of Freya, I hope I get to read and grade more in future. Enjoy the rewards.
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