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30th of Cylus 717

Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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30th Cylus, 717
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Of all the professions the Mortalborn could imagine in his life, it surprised him quite a lot to have now become a shepherd. Whenever he thought about such employment, he took into consideration his appetite problems, and always concluded whatever animals he was to protect he’d devour. However, this was no longer, apparently, and thus a great sense of vague satisfaction flooded the otherwise empty heart of the teacher. Of course, his job description was somewhat different than that of a shepherd, yet his responsibilities were quite similar. Guide unintelligent creatures, teach them to do some things, use them for what they are worth, and repeat until satisfied. The simplicity of the world was astonishing sometimes.
“Come on, children!” announced the teacher, clapping his hands for his herd. “We don’t want to be late!”
“Yes, mister Ynush!” replied some of them, jumping, laughing and playing as loudly as children often did.
Despite their status as lesser beings, Paplo felt some affection for these little orphans; or at least, he pretended to feel it. Sometimes, he sympathized with them as he thought of their backstory. Orphaned by war, disease, or life itself, these children had nobody to guide them in life. Were it not for Etzos, whenever these youths grew up, they would have no purpose. Thinking about it, Paplo imagined that being a closed-minded soldier was the best future these children could ever receive. Their other future would lead to prostitution, and most likely into Kovic’s maws if he was feeling like a night stroll.
“Let’s turn here, class,” he said as his herd reached the Garrison Alley ramp, almost at their destination. The children advanced carefully, but loudly, to the point of drawing the eyes of many Marks – name given to regular foot soldiers.
The children flooded the Mark’s Training Ward’s entrance soon after, to the point of blocking the exit for the soldiers that wished to exit the training facilities. This was corrected by Paplo quite quickly, shushing and micromanaging their distribution. Afterwards, Paplo would head towards the nearest Mark.
“Good morning,” he’d say with his soft and modulated voice. “Could you please notify Mastermark Lodred that we’ve arrived?”
“Who’s arrived?” asked the soldier, who wondered if he wanted to sip from his water skin; or liquor skin, in his case.
“Oh, we’re from the Prime Sanitarium’s temporary classes. We’re having a fieldtrip today,” replied Paplo.

The Mark turned around and disappeared somewhere within the Ward, to which Paplo continued managing his students, mostly by separating those that went along with eachother to avoid chatter. He wondered then if these orphans were sexually active already; they were eight, after all. Despite his past not being quite clear to him, even Paplo guessed he was sexually active at, at least, half of their age.
“Attention!” announced a voice belonging to a tall and extremely muscular individual, blessed with a mighty moustache and a stiff squared face. He was addressing the children, despite it being somewhat hard to guess. “Stand firm, soldiers!”
The children obeyed, yet the term of standing firm escaped them. Most of them simply stared up towards the Mastermark, or perhaps towards the moustache. The second was more likely. Paplo stared too, almost in love with the individual. The size of his arms, the image of the thick torso below the chainmail and the girth of his legs were enough to seduce him; Paplo wanted to eat him.
“My, what fierce warriors I see!” said the Mastermark. “The Immortals better pack up and leave before they come across you. Let me hear you roar!”
After the Mastermark growled as an example, the whole group of children followed suit, roaring like cats even if they barely qualified as mice. Paplo growled too, amused.
“That’s what I call a battle-roar! Good morning, everyone. I’m Mastermark Lodred, and today I’ll initiate you into the noble art of warfare. Are you all ready?”
General uproar and excitement communicated a clear yes.
“Good! Before we get into combat, I must see if your teacher,” Brotton looked towards Paplo, “has taught you about Etzos. Now, who does Etzos hate?”
“The Immortals and their mindless puppets!” replied the children, in unison. Their education was quite correct.
“Correct! And what do we do if we discover one of their puppets?”
“Report them to the guard!”
“Very good!” Lodred chuckled. “Etzos is the City of Stones, but also of freedom, and we will not allow those cunning Immortals, or their puppets, to compromise our way of life. That is why citizen cooperation is so important; we all work, together, for the betterment of our children’s future. In this case, for your future. I see your teacher has taught you well.”
The formality was appreciated by Paplo, who simply smirked and nodded in a thankful manner.
“Now, you must all be aware that something else is threatening the Etzori way of life. Can someone tell me what that is?”
“Rhakros!” replied the students. Their tone was clearly angrier; most of them were orphaned in the conflict with the southern city.
“Rhakros and their treacherous spies. What does a good citizen do in times like these?”
“Keep our eyes open!”
“Keep our eyes open, indeed. And what do we do if we see something suspicious?”
“We report it to the city guard!”
“Excellent,” replied the Mastermark
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Paplo remained on the side, watching and listening to the lesson. He would’ve liked to have been the one credited with the merit of his student’s education, but it was not his work; an Etzori employee came by the Sanitarium’s hallway every so often, preaching their beliefs to the gullible students and putting those words and ideals into their minds – and perhaps into Paplo’s mind, too.

If he only knew what an Immortal was, or what Rhakros looked like, he would have less trouble understanding it all. All in due time, perhaps.
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There was a lot to learn from this Mastermark individual; even Paplo had learned a great deal about the Etzori lifestyle, especially about the army. For him, any individual that carried a sword or matching armor was a soldier, but that was not the truth. Now, he knew a Mark was a foot soldier, a Highmark was their superior, and that a Mastermark was their superior in consequence, responsible for the ‘Block’, which was the name of the unit. It was obvious there existed some sort of organization in the army, but he wouldn’t have guessed this sort of organization. All this information would be put to good use, sometime, which was his general attitude towards education in general; everything would have its use in due time.

The Mastermark had now called his Highmark, and had instructed those under his command to arm the children for some practical education. As imagined, the children were very excited; as they donned those oversized mails, the smelly helmets that barely allowed them to see, or carried the old broadswords used for training, they laughed and jested with their friends. Some were even brave enough to swing those broadswords around, almost flying after each swing, haphazardly threatening to partially decapitate their school. One would think they’d give them wooden swords or sticks rather than real swords, but this seemed to be the Etzori lifestyle. The Mastermark had excused himself to the side, and Paplo had followed suit.
“So what’s your name?” asked the Mastermark, glancing towards Paplo.
“Oh, apologies. I’m Paplo Ynush,” replied the Mortalborn, offering a light bow of his head towards the soldier.
“A pleasure,” he replied. “I feel like I’ve seen you before. Have we met?”
“I doubt it; I have a good memory for faces,” he chuckled.
“Huh…”

A Mark was currently trying to instruct the children into the right way to hold a sword’s handle, which some of the children ignored. They seemed more concerned about roleplaying and giggling rather than paying attention.
“Mister Brotton?”
“Hmm?” The Mastermark laid his eyes on Paplo once again, the light from the day shining on his pale flesh, showing that thin layer of greasy coating in the details of his features. A greasy skin always made Paplo hungry.
“I was wondering if you could ever make some time to teach me a few things about swords.”
“You?” Lodred inspected Paplo from top to bottom. “You look like you could handle a great-sword. Hah!”
Paplo was unsure if this was a sexual remark. Lodred was a man, after all. “I’ve handled one or two in my days, but I’m not entirely satisfied with my skill level.”
“Are you in the Militia?”
“Not quite. A neighborhood watch of sorts. Our tavernkeeper buys us dinner if we keep the premises safe every few nights. He lends us some swords we never get to use, but I’d like to make sure I can use it if necessary—excuse me for a moment.”
Paplo now went towards two students, which were completely unfocused in what the disgruntled Mark was trying to preach. He slapped them both across the back of the head. “Please pay attention to the instructor. He won’t be around to help you if the Rhakrosi come to finish the job.” The message went through quite well, as one of the two boys was already wiping a lonely tear from his face. Shortly after, Paplo returned next to Brotton.
“I’m sorry about that,” he apologized.
“No need. Discipline is something mandatory in the youths. It’s better to cry while they are young rather than when Rhakros strikes.”
“I agree.” He really didn’t.
A few moments of silence came through.
“Which inn are you staying in?”
“The Second-Story Inn. It’s right by t—“
“I know where it is. Are you doing a round around the perimeter tonight?”
“Not personally, but there is a group heading out every night. I could join them. Why?”
“I’d like to come along. I miss the simplicity of not having the Braxton barking down my ear every time I take a step. Sometimes I wish I would’ve stayed a Highmark. Hah!”
Paplo laughed. Now, he was certain the Mastermark wanted his greatsword handled, and that excited him; not in the form of arousal represented by an erection, but by the increase of body temperature, the salivation, and the agitated breathing. It’d be a challenge to wait for the night.
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That was fun, enjoy the rewards.


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Story: 5/5
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Knowledge:
Leadership: Passively leading through suggestion
Persuation: An effective method of leadership
Research: Passively learning through observation
Teaching: Enforcing discipline through physical abuse
Teaching: Similar to sheep herding
Teaching: Practical education is a lot more fun

Loot: None.
Injuries: None.
Fame: General good deeds +2
Devotion: None.
Magic: these points may NOT be used for Arcana.

Comment: Wow, that thread was good! Very good attention to detail and the story felt natural. Damn, I need to review more of your threads, this one left me hungry! ;) Enjoy the rewards.
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