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Enlightened Minds [Doran]

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Alistair


Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5 (solo)
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:

Lysorian Lotus: native to Ne'haer
Lysorian Lotus: edible leaves with quite a distinguished flavour (like broccolli)
Lysorian Lotus: can be used as an aphrodisiac when properly managed
Lysorian Lotus: refinement process lost to time
Doran: Not a noble
Doran: Has an aura about him.
Doran: Born in Ne'haer
Doran: A professor, not a doctor
Doran: Believes that, to improve the future one must be familiar with the past.
Doran: Worked as an apothecary


Loot:
NA
Fame:
+1 (kind invitation)
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana
Doran


Points!:

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 5/ 5
Structure: 5/ 5
Knowledge:

Alistair Venora: A Noble
Alistair Venora: Claims to be about as sexual as a stone pillar
Alistair Venora: Claims to be a renowned medical professional
Alistair Venora: Invited you to visit his home
Psychology: A difference between drive and attraction
Chemistry: Doses and amounts: Caution is best
Chemistry: Safety first
Chemistry: Boil leaves to soften them before extracting the essence.
Detection: Smells can be deceiving
Lysorian Lotus: native to Ne'haer
Lysorian Lotus: edible leaves with quite a distinguished flavour ~ broccolli
Lysorian Lotus: can be used as an aphrodisiac when properly managed
Lysorian Lotus: refinement process lost to time

Loot:
NA
Fame:
NA
Magic:
These points may NOT be used for arcana

Overview:

General comments. What an interesting pair! They seem like they're going to really get along together - hope to see more of them in the future!
Story Good - no worries!
Structure No worries - all good!

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