[Cosmology] Dithlánis & Eyrith - Twin Suns of Idalos

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[Cosmology] Dithlánis & Eyrith - Twin Suns of Idalos


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Dithlánis

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A bright, yellow star which hangs over Idalos throughout all cycles, Dithlánis is responsible for the light and warmth of day the planet experiences. The intensity of its heat changes depending upon the season, with it being strongest in Saun and having no presence in Cylus. Dithlánis is the brightest and largest object in the sky of Idalos, many million times the size of any observable moon. Despite this size-differential, Dithlánis finds itself obscured by the moon Zili during the cycle of Cylus. This is the only season in which the star's constant cycle of rising and setting is broken, leaving Idalos rapt in the darkness of its absence.

History:
Named simply for the Vauni word meaning "fire", Dithlánis has existed for nearly as long as its creator Faldrun has. There are many competing myths surrounding the origin of its creation, but all well-regarded stories are sourced from the ancestral writings of Aukari priests.

The first myth states that Dithlánis is an extension of Faldrun himself. Created by plucking his own eye out of his head and tossing it high into the air, the orb became a way for the flame-father to watch the world below him; keeping a burning gaze out for any enemies that might try to usurp the Immortal's will.

The second myth claims that Dithlánis was made in direct competition with Tried, the Immortal of the moon. In this story, Tried and Faldrun were both competing for the attention of Fei. Tried claimed he could make something to rival the stars themself, and hung the moon high in the sky to impress his creator. Faldrun saw the gods folly, and made no imitation of the far off stars, but instead forged his own fire into a star itself. Faldrun's creation dwarfed Tried's unimpressive moon, and the Immortal of Flame hung the evidence of his supremacy for all of Idalos to see.

The third myth argues that Dithlánis was not made in competition, or even out of malice, at all. Instead, it argues that Dithlánis was only ever made to be a gift to Fei, Faldrun's first and true love. The sun was to be a symbol of the passion that the Immortal bore for the Original, so that every being on the fresh-forged world might feel the warmth of their love at least once a trial.

No matter the truth of its origin, Dithlánis' ownership has always been claimed by Faldrun. Only that Immortal could ever share the truth and intent behind its creation, and given his hatred of mortals, as well as his recent death, it is unlikely that the true impetus behind its creation will ever be revealed.

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A roiling mass of darklight, Eyrith is an angry burning star of black and red coloration. Upon closer view with astronomical instruments, one can spy that Eyrith also has an irregular wobble in its orbit. This is known to be caused by the Great Barriers at the edge of the known world, but the consequences of that irregular orbit are still unknown. Eyrith is also much smaller than its sister in Dithlánis, and only visible during cycle of Saun. The addition of the star's presence in the sky during that cycle greatly increases the world temperature and the intensity of droughts, and it can even be seen dully simmering during Saun's nights. For one cycle, it hangs unchanging in the Idalos sky, never setting nor rising, and then vanishes for the remainder of the arc.

History:
The more mysterious of the twin suns, Eyrith is named after the Vauni word for "turmoil". Named so due to the great difficulties its presence causes for the environment of Idalos and the survivability of mortal species, Eyrith appears to be the manifestation of Faldrun's hate for the world. Many have speculated that the star's origin was meant to be just that, an everlasting curse on the mortal races. An unending heat meant to, one trial, consume the world in flames and leave Faldrun a monarch of ash and bone.

Some who know the flame god's history theorize that Eyrith is yet another tribute to the Original Fei, but of a darker sort. When Fei shattered, some say that Faldrun took to the sky and burned for hundreds of arcs. He burned so hot, so heartbreakingly angry at all of existence, that he burned a hole through reality itself. These theorists claim that Eyrith is not a star, but a scar. Tissue-threads of reality cauterized by Faldrun in the midst of his grief, which becomes a weeping wound every Saun.

With Faldrun's death, the mortals of Idalos may never know Eyrith's true origin. The fact that it still burns beyond its creator has yet to be determined as a blessing or a curse.

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Re: [Cosmology] Dithlánis & Eyrith - Twin Suns of Idalos

Ok - I have to say I absolutely LOVE this! It's a really nice addition to the existing lore.

Have you seen this wiki entry which explains how a pc discovered that the second sun has a strange "wobble" in its orbit - that's how the Barriers at the Edge of the World were discovered - because the wobble is caused by them.

I'm going to put this to staff to have a discussion on - I will give 1 week then I'll be back here. I hope you get other feedback in that time!

Lovely work!
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Re: [Cosmology] Dithlánis & Eyrith - Twin Suns of Idalos

I had not seen that article, thank you for pointing that out! I've included a section in the description of the star which includes the irregular orbit and its cause, but leaves the broader implications unknown (as I believe they are?). Let me know if I've misinterpreted that discovery, or if additional info on that section is required (as astrophysics is not exactly my strong suit).

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Re: [Cosmology] Dithlánis & Eyrith - Twin Suns of Idalos

Hi Russel

I'm sorry for the delay here. Lets have a look. As is always, always the case, I'm giving feedback which is as detailed and "picky" as I can. This is just so that we get the best out of this, and I want to be clear that I think this is a beautiful write up!
Russel Kandor wrote: Sun Mar 20, 2022 5:05 am Dithlánis

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A bright, yellow star which hangs over Idalos throughout all cycles, Dithlánis is responsible for the light and warmth of day the planet experiences. The intensity of its heat changes depending upon the season, with it being strongest in Saun and having no presence in Cylus. Dithlánis is the brightest and largest object in the sky of Idalos, many million times the size of any observable moon. Caught in a continual cycle of rising and setting, its presence at the horizon denotes Idalos' day and its absence the night.
1. I wonder if it's worth putting in here that this sun is obscured by the moon, Zili, during Cylus.
2. I'm not sure about the last sentence - because it does that unless it doesn't - during Cylus it can't be seen?
Russel Kandor wrote: Sun Mar 20, 2022 5:05 am History:
No matter the truth of its origin, Dithlánis' ownership has always been claimed by Faldrun. Only that Immortal could ever share the truth and intent behind its creation, and given his hatred of mortals, it is unlikely that the true impetus behind its creation will ever be revealed.
3. Is it worth noting his death here? I know you do later, but it seems relevant here.
Russel Kandor wrote: Sun Mar 20, 2022 5:05 am Eyrith
Some who know the flame god's history theorize that Eyrith is yet another tribute to the Original Fei, but of a darker sort. When Fei shattered, some say that Faldrun took to the sky and burned for hundreds of arcs. He burned so hot, so heartbreakingly angry at all of existence, that he burned a hole through reality itself. These theorists claim that Eyrith is not a star, but a scar. Tissue-threads of reality cauterized by Faldrun in the midst of his grief, which becomes a weeping wound every Saun.
4. You know - I've just had a thought. What was in the sky before Faldrun? The Originals made the Immortals. Before the Originals were dragons and all sorts. So ... if Faldrun made the suns, what was in the sky before Faldrun?
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Re: [Cosmology] Dithlánis & Eyrith - Twin Suns of Idalos

I don't really have much to say, but I do want to commend you on the immersion that these tales create. There's a depth here that is really engrossing!

Beyond a few minor notes, like suggesting "day" becomes "trial", a couple of typos irrelevant to the wider discussion, and my (perhaps mistaken) understanding that the Immortals are not gods, I think this is incredibly well-written. I especially liked "these theorists claim that Eyrith is not a star, but a scar." Beautiful!

I'm also really glad that you only went into the IC theories; myths and legends. You let it be fantasy. You didn't try to make scientific sense of it. I've seen that attempted elsewhere, with multiple suns, and it was an utter mess, haha!
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Re: [Cosmology] Dithlánis & Eyrith - Twin Suns of Idalos

I appreciate the feedback and the notes! Taking these one at a time:

Pegasus Note's:
1. I agree that's relevant, and have included a sentence noting the event.
2. Also a fair point, and have mentioned that the cycle of rising and setting is disrupted by Zili.
3. I didn't want to include that initially, as it was mentioned later in the entry, but more info/clarity on a lore-entry is always better! I've included a mention of his death in the Dithlánis section.
4. That's a really great question! With everything I've read, the current stars were created by Faldrun. That's not to say there wasn't something in the sky before the Originals or the dragons. We're working in fantasy here, so stuff doesn't always need to develop as it might've from an astronomical point of view. Could've been prior stars before Faldrun, could've been dragonflame that kept the world warm, or something else entirely! This definitely bears exploring, but I think most likely in a development submission outside of this one.

Darius:
Thanks so much for the kind words and the notes! I was trying to think from the perspective of early myths rather than hard fact, b/c we're more in the realm of epic fantasy than hard sci-fi, so I'm glad that it read to the tone I was angling for. Also figured it would a bit more fun for players if there are multiple answers that could all be true, or all be myths. I'm hoping it gives an incentive to explore the cosmology even further!
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