Review Requests 2.2.5

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Jasper
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Dance of Hooves
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: This was an abandoned collab. I just tried to finish it off.
Skills Used: Mount (Competent), Meditation (Expert), Dancing (None), Animal Handling (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Mount: Land Riding a Sleipnir
Mount: When traveling by land Hooves hit the ground
Mount: Adjusting for Different muscle movements when traveling by land
Mount: Preparing for when the sleipnir starts running
Animal Handling: Paying attention for warning signs the animal gives.
Animal Handling: Showing affection back when it has been given by the animal.
Meditation: Dancing with the wind spirits.
Endurance: Walking out Soreness after riding.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: sore from riding
Renown: None
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: Was but abandoned by the other pc.
Magic Experience?: No
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Vega Dweeb
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: ~~~~ Rule #3: Don't Dehydrate~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Vega

Knowledge:
Logistics: Planning for worst case scenarios
Logistics: Use mundane resources for survival.
Logistics: Ensuring that you are always prepared requires time and planning
Teaching: Humour can be acceptable when teaching.
Teaching: Answering questions in different ways.
Teaching: Give people lists of what to do in which order.

Skills Used:
Teaching (Competent)
Leadership (GM)
Fieldcraft (GM)
Psychology (GM)
Logistics (Novice)

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: Yes please, if appropriate
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience?: No
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Fence In Need of Mending
City/Area: Scalvoris, Faldrass, Haven
Notes/Warnings: This is Balthazar trying to remove the Civil Friction effect from Haven the same way that he caused it, with a speech, in response to Kura's letter. I believe the thread has most relevant links. No knowledge requested.
Skills Used: Leadership (GM), Psychology (Expert), Persuasion (Competent), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Logistics (Expert), Politics (Competent), Socialization (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None.

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
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Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

New Thread!!
Time for a new thread:

here we go!

This thread is being locked. Peer reviewers please finish up the reviews in this thread before starting reviews in the new one. Thank you!
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