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[Hopetoun] Rats Live On

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Arc 721, 7th of Cylus
It was the canvas of a tent, at first. A tiny hole, barely even noticed by most of the settlers of Hopetoun. And any who did presumed it to have been a victim of transit, with the canvas having been caught against a tree branch or something similar en route from Almund to their new future.

But then it had begun to grow. Little by little, the hole had become a tiny tear, and then others had dared to reveal themselves. One of the settlers discovered a hole in her leggings where they were certain no hold had previously existed. Another swore he'd heard a scurrying sound, accompanied by the occasional squeak, outside his tent the previous night. The situation finally became impossible to ignore when someone a small amount of excrement by one of the sacks that was being used to store some of Hopetoun's grain.

Darius' only experience with anything remotely similar related rather specifically to how ineffective bunny rabbit poop was for attracting the opposite sex, and he doubted that would be of much use in the present situation, but one of the settlers, a man named Lars, was something of a nature expert. Or, rather, he was the closest the settlement had to such a thing, and so hopes were unceremoniously pinned on his broad shoulders.

Kirt, too, who was always eager to talk about animals and how excited he was to be able to farm on Faldrass, was more than willing to lend some insight on the vermin and how to deal with them. And to the other folk of Hopetoun, having Kirt talking about something other than farming was seen as a silver lining to just about any dilemma facing the settlement.

And so it was that one morning, just a few trials after arriving on Faldrass, Darius Baer, hopeful leader of a town of Hope, awoke to the sound of concerned voices outside his tent.

Katara, invisible to anyone she didn't want to be seen by, was draped across his neck, happily nuzzling against the ward she had been tasked to protect. The hawk diri was quick to move, however, when Darius stirred, and the tendrils of smoke that rose from her flaming feathers were scattered as the human stepped outside.

The cool air enveloped him, but as ever, did not impact him in the way it did to the trio of settlers who were wrapped up in their coats, scarves, and ushanka hats. Darius stepped across the fresh layer of snow towards them, and quickly realised they were by the food stocks.

"We need to do something about the rats before they bite one of us," said one.

"Yes, rats carry disease, don't they?" asked another.

"We can't risk people getting sick," affirmed the first.

The voice carried across the still air to reach Darius' ears, and as he joined the group, he could see that one of the sacks of grain had split, a small pile of the food resting in the snow. One of the settlers scooped up a handful of the spoilt seeds, and after briefly sifting through them, found small amounts of fecal matter buried within.

Darius nodded at the sight, before peering out across the ground, as if doing so might reveal where the rats had come from, but any tracks they might have left had been covered up in the latest snowfall.

"We'll deal to them," he assured the group. "We just need to figure out a plan..."
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Later the same trial, Darius was back in his tent, in the midst of a discussion of his own. Standing with him were Lars, Kirt, and Astra. Lars and Kirt were more than happy to voice their opinions, but the half-biqaj first mate of the Libertalia was, as usual, content to stand back, crossed arm across her chest, and let the others have their say.

"We need to find out how many rats there are," Lars suggested, "and then we can hunt them down."

"Poison would be better," Kirt responded. "If we can find their nest and poison it, the situation will take care of itself."

Darius nodded as he listened. He stole a glimpse at Astra, who said nothing but offered him a reassuring smile, which he returned in kind. Katara was content to busy herself by futilely attempting to pick up one of the spoilt grains that had been brought into the tent as a reminder of why they were meeting.

"We need to find them before we can do anything about them," the founder of Hopetoun stated simply. "And we don't know where that is, correct?"

Both settlers nodded in agreement.

"People seem to be finding traces of rats in the mornings," he went on. "Has anyone actually claimed to have seen one?"

Lars and Kirt looked at each other with uncertainty, and Darius realised he was probably not going to get a helpful answer to that. Lars was often involved in various scouting parties that left Hopetoun in the earliest breaks of each morning, and Kirt - with his well-meaning but incessant monologues about how farming was the greatest profession in all of Idalos - was hardly a social butterfly.

Even a glance towards Astra, who spent most of her time dealing with the crew of his ship, was enough to convince him that he didn't have enough information.

"They are coming into the settlement at night, correct?" Darius asked.

"We think so," nodded Lars. "Maybe they're not used to people, and we scare them off during the trial?"

Or they could be nocturnal," added Kirt with a shrug of his shoulders, "like hedgehogs and owls."

Darius nodded, a plan slowly formulating inside his head.

"Very well," he spoke after a brief silence, "I think we need to spy on our enemy first. Then we can act. I'm not planning to sleep tonight. Who will join me?"
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Darkness had already fallen by the time Darius, Lars, and Kirt met by the Founding Post of Hopetoun. The centre of the settlement was not the easiest location to identify, because it didn't have well-established borders of any kind, but a small post had been hammered into the ground to mark the place where Darius had stood when he had decided that the refugees had reached their new home.

Darius wore a coat, not because he needed its warmth, but because he could use it - and a black cowl he had kept since a previous mission under cover of dark - to conceal himself as much as possible. If the rats were shy of people, then it made sense to stay hidden in order to properly ascertain their intentions. Beside him were Lars and Kirt, similarly clothed, but the cold was clearly affecting them both. The sight was such that the woodworker had to resist a grin, thinking of how warm and comfortable Astra must have been on the Libertalia.

The trio hid behind behind a boulder that was only fifty paces or so from the grain supply, and it was towards the sack of spoilt seeds that they looked. Katara had decided to join them, and was stepping her way across the boulder, but the light of her flaming feathers did not reflect in the eyes of the settlers, and she had accepted Darius' wish to remain unseen by any hungry rodents.

Between the boulder and the grain supply were a pair of veil fish that had been caught earlier that trial. Darius was always reticent to let food go to waste, but they had been placed there intentionally, and the fishy bait was beginning to smell by the time anything happened.

By that time, two breaks had passed. Kirt had bitten his tongue more times than the others could remember, and the farmer was clearly champing at the bit to discuss the benefits of crop rotation or how to establish a herd of cows on the island or some other farming topic, when Lars excitedly tapped the shoulders of the two men either side of him, and six eyes looked at the fish.

In the faint moonlight, which struggled to penetrate the Cylus gloom, they could see no less than four rats sniffing the meat. They were not particularly large, but their appetites were, for they began to gorge themselves on the seafood. The rats, clearly ravenous, ate noisily, and in the stillness of the night, the three men could hear the creatures chewing on the meat.

And then, within a few bits, they were done. The fish had been reduced to nothing more than skeletons, and the rats scattered at first, offering only curious sniffs into the air before turning away and rushing off into the night.

Led by Lars, the trio attempted to follow, but Kirt and Darius were soon left behind by the much more nimble huntsman, who disappeared into the darkness. A silent wait followed, and after another couple of bits, the middle-aged man returned, a giant grin stretched across his face.

"They move fast," he whispered, "but not fast enough. I know where their nest is."
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Darius:

Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: Rats will eat anything, if they're hungry enough.
Animal Husbandry: Rats can spread disease.
Etiquette: Letting someone else have their moment.
Stealth: Finding something useful to hide behind.
Stealth: Wearing black clothing makes it harder for others to see you in the dark.
Tactics: Work together to decide on a plan.

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Wealth: -
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Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 10
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Comments: I loved the beginning of the thread, with the mysterious holes appearing in the tent and the leggings and such. If I hadn't read the title of the thread, I'd definitely be curious about where they are coming from!

The conversation between Darius and the various NPCs about the best way to deal with the rats was quite entertaining. Darius did have a point in my opinion. They need to find the rats before they can do anything about them!

I found it amusing how he was trying to be stealthy in order to hide from the rats. That was another great scene. I wonder why the rats were so hungry. Maybe there is no other decent food nearby?

That being said, I look forward to a sequel where they'll hopefully take care of their "enemy"!

At first, I wasn't entirely sure if "Animal Husbandry" is the correct skill when it comes to rats that you eventually plan on hunting rather than caring for.

It works though.

Furthermore, I couldn't see where Darius actually did the following "Leadership: Letting those under your command get some rest will earn respect.".

It's a good knowledge, and Darius definitely used the Leadership skill in this thread in my opinion, but I'm not sure where he let his companions get some rest. There was just some mention of the settlers being in their tents.

For that reason, I decided not to award it.

If I overlooked something in that regard, let me know though. Otherwise, feel free to pick a different knowledge and PM it to me so that I can edit this review.

That being said, enjoy your rewards, and let me know if you have any questions, please!
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