Review Requests 2.2.5

[Yeva]

Review Request

Thread Name: Unending Thirst
City/Area: Storm's Edge
Notes/Warnings: Not my best work, but another installment in the brew series. At this point, Yeva has witnessed and sampled the Firebrand Brew, and has begun experimentation (on herself), in regards to the properties of the alcohol. Having tested the Sweet & Sour with horrifying results, Yeva is determined to drink them all to determine the threat level this presents to the Rharnian people.
Skills Used: Research (Competent), Writing (Competent), Resistance (Untrained), Persuasion (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge

Research x3
Writing x2
Resistance x1

Non-Skill Knowledge

Rharne Festival: Beer-fest


Loot: --
Injuries/Overstepping: --
Renown: --
Wealth Points: --
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Hey, Remember The Fire Forged
City/Area: Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: None?
Yeva Skills Used: Medicine (Expert), Discipline (Comp), Detection (Comp), Psychology (Novice), Caregiving (Untrained), Socialization (Untrained), Seduction (Untrained)
Balthazar Skills Used: Attunement (Master), Intelligence (Master), Discipline (Expert), Detection (Competent), Socialization (Competent), Persuasion (Competent), Storytelling (Untrained), Seduction (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Yeva Knowledge: Detection x3
Seduction x1
Socialization x 2
Caregiving x4
Psychology: Survivor's Guilt
--
Non-Skill
Scalvoris: Faldrass
Faldrass: The Resort

Balthazar Knowledge:
Intelligence - Yeva's Diri is Baskara
Intelligence - The Order of Adunih helped with the Faldrass fallout
Discipline - Resisting an impulsive desire
Seduction x 3
Persuasion x 3
Storytelling x 3

Loot: A cute drawing for Balthazar
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: If applicable.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes, a little Attunement for Balthazar

[Praetorum]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Fine Cut
City/Area: Rharne Outskirts
Notes/Warnings: The whole thing is a description of an animal carcass being gutted
Skills Used: Hunting (Novice), Field Craft (Competent), Ranged (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Field Craft x4
Ranged x2

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: Maybe; the deer carcass is going to be sold but the actual disassembly will happen in a later thread.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Mathias Blackwood]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Smallest Flame Burns Brightest
City/Area: The Stormwastes
Notes/Warnings: Violence and language
Mathias Skills Used: Transmutation (Expert), Ranged (Expert), Hone (Novice), Detection (Competent), Endurance (Novice), Discipline (Untrained)
Praetorum Skills Used: Defiance (Master), Hone (Master), Tactics (Expert), Shield (Grandmaster), Polearm (Master)
Kasoria Skills Used: Deception (Expert), Tactics (Master), Transmutation (Expert), Blades (Master)

Requested Rewards:
Mathias Knowledge: Ranged (Short Bow) x 4
Transmutation (Shapecraft) x 3
Transmutation (Pathway) x 1
Hone: Lucis runes can be written on other people
Tactics: If something is blocking your view, remove it
Praetorum Knowledge:
Hone: Taking adjustment time into account
Taithir: Using Nobility's Endurance on a shield wall
Tactics x 3
Polearm x 3
Shield x 3
Kasoria Knowledge:
Deception: Using Dust Plumes to Hide Fieldcraft: Scouting Terrain
Hone: A Magic of Power Held in Runes
Hone: Vastly Increases Focus and Eyesight
Hone: Runes of Focus Can Speed Thinking, Both Mundane and Magical
Tactics: Using Abrogation Shields to Protect Comrades in Battle
Tactics: Maneuvering an Opponent Where You Want
Transmutation - Quality: Adamantite
Transmutation - Shapecraft: Transmuting Soil to Smother Flames

Magnim: Monstrous Midget Fire Mage
PC Praetorum: Runic Mage
Loot: Flameborn bodies
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: I Feel Pretty
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Balthazar Skills Used: Attunement (Master), Intelligence (Master), Socialization (Competent), Politics (Competent), Detection, (Competent), Etiquette (Untrained), Design (Untrained)
Faith Skills Used: Etiquette (Master), Design (Novice), Business Management (Master), Persuasion (Master)

Requested Rewards:
Balthazar Knowledge: Politics - Supporting businesses who support the people
Etiquette - Getting the proper outfit for an event
Etiquette - It is unusual for a man to wear a single color to an event
Design - Measurements are important to make comfortable clothing
Intelligence - Augustine's Boutique donates it's profits to charity
Intelligence - Faith Augustine owns a store in the Glass Quarter
Intelligence - Faith Augustine can produce unique clothing
Detection - Feeling the difference between two fabrics

Faith Knowledge: She didn't learn anything.
Loot: 2 Masterwork Quality Outfits for Balthazar, made by Faith.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None? Transaction recorded in CS ledger.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Praetorum]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: An Unusual Job
City/Area: Storm's Edge
Notes/Warnings: This is my wealth thread for Vhalar 720
Skills Used: Shield (GM), Hone (Master), Endurance (Expert), Strength (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
3x Strength
3x Endurance

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: A bunch of bruises
Renown: Maybe?
Wealth Points: No (wealth thread)
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No (this was very basic hone)

[Praetorum]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: If a tree burns in the forest...
City/Area: Mistral Wood, Rharne
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used: Defiance (Master), Leadership (Master), Tactics (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance x1
Leadership x 3
Logistics x 2


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer discretion
Renown: Yeah, probably
Wealth Points: Yes, Prae is getting paid for this.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Probably. Prae is kinda pushing it

[Elisabeth Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name:The Game is Afoot
City/Area:Rharne – Institute for Innovation
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Elisabeth

Skills Used:
Cryptography – Novice (0/250)
Linguistics – Novice (21/250)
Intelligence – Novice (0/250)
Investigation – Novice (5/250)
Research – Novice (26/250)
Detection - Novice (0/250)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Intelligence – Yeva has Cassion’s mark
Intelligence – Yeva was given a book by a dude named Friell
Intelligence – Five keys needed to crack the cipher in Yeva’s book completely. One key will be found in Rharne, on Vhalar 61, Arc 720….at Miss Austere’s School of Movement and Music
Research x3
Linguistics x3
Cryptography x1
Discipline x 3

Yeva

Skills Used:
Detection (Comp)
Cryptography (Comp)
Research (Comp)
Investigation (Untrained)
Socialization (Untrained)
Writing (Comp)
Discipline (Comp)
Linguistics (Expert)

Skill Knowledge
Linguistics x3
Cryptography x6
Detection x 3

Non-Skill Knowledge
Language: Ancient
Ancient: Rare Outside of Viden
Ancient: Patterns of Basic Grammer
Ancient: Primarily Spoken by Immortals & Eidisi

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: If applicable
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: (Yes/No) Yes
Magic Experience?: (Yes/No) No

!	Message from: Pig Boy
	Claimed

[Kirei Qe'Azour]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Custom Weapons
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This is the third of a series of threads where Kirei is seeking donations to an auction, the proceeds of which will benefit the refugees of Faldrass. She herself will not be gaining anything from this, but I am hoping to get a line of proof that I've earned the items that will be auctioned off. So the loot I am requesting will not benefit her in any way. Also, since Kirei is now tier 9, many of the things that are sold in Little Korlasir are within her tier level so the cost of the item for the donation could be covered that way if need be.
Skills Used: Detection: Novice (25/250, 1 knowledge), Persuasion: Unskilled (0/250, 1 knowledge), Research: Unskilled (0/250, 5 knowledges), Rhetoric: Unskilled (0/250, 3 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges

Seduction: is the ability to get what you want through flirting, and if needed, sexual favors
Persuasion: using more than one persuasion tactic at the same time may be necessary
Persuasion: showing how the thing you want someone to do will benefit them is a very effective technique
Persuasion: people find it harder to say no to someone they are attracted to than someone they are repulsed by so appearance is important when trying to persuade someone into something
Persuasion: bribery is an effective tool for persuading someone
Persuasion: offending someone while trying to convince them to do something for you is a very bad thing

Loot: a voucher form Little Korlasir for either a piece or armor, a weapon or a piece of jewelry; and if the latter, it can be engraved if the winner so desires, this is to be auctioned off at an event held at Cally's, the proceeds of which will go to help the refugees of Faldrass
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Possibly slight (5) for spreading word of the auction that will be held at Cally's, and for asking for donations to that auction.
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

[Xander Andaris]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: [Lake Lovalus] Light in the darkness
City/Area: Stormlands, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope just cute family time
Skills Used:
Caregiving, currently Novice (25 XP, 2 knowledge).
Discipline, currently expert (78 XP, 40 Knowledge)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
3 Caregiving Knowledge
3 Discipline Knowledge
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No