[Faldrass] Ash Be-Gone

Balthazar and allies clean up the Faldrass Resort.

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Re: Ash Be-Gone

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Balthazar

Experience: 15 no magic xp

Knowledge:

Politics - Being seen helping out is best
Intelligence - The Faldrass Resort used Slave labor prior to Arc 720
Intelligence x 3
Leadership x 4
Defiance (Dancing) - Manipulating a cloud of ash through a portal

Renown: 5

Skill Usage: Appropriate to level

Loot/Losses: none

Injuries/Conditions: none

Consequences: none

Ari'sora

Experience: 15 no magic xp.

Knowledge:

Detection x 6
Discipline x 3
Strength x 1

Renown: 5

Skill Usage: Appropriate to level.

Loot/Losses: none

Injuries/Conditions: none

Consequences: none


Comments: This was an interesting sequence. The interactions between Ari'sora and Balthazar were very open and honest. Ari'sora must trust him by now to entrust him with so much information about her past.

The fact that they found slaves at the end in Faldrass was shocking, but at the same time not too much so. It's so sad that they died in chains, and you described the grisly scene very well. I almost expected them to jump out when Ari'sora said something was wrong here.

I wonder what Balthazar thinks he could've done extra to help avert the disaster that befell Faldrass. He seemed to do a lot during the event, to the point where he overstepped immensely to the point of blacking out. I'd say he gave his all.

Great writing and enjoy the points/knowledges! Thanks.

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