Mathias:
Knowledge:
Thrown (Ether-bolt) x 4
Discipline x 3
Stealth x 3
Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: Minor Overstepping: Pain in Mathias' right arm.
Renown: 10
Magic XP: Yes, for Transmutation.
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15
Kasoria:
Knowledge:
Ranged Weapon: Short Bow x6
Abrogation x2
Tactics 2
Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 10
Magic XP: Yes, for Abrogation.
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15
The review request contained the wrong link, but I found the correct thread anyway by going through your posts.
The description of Mathias’ and Kasoria’s practicing was detailed and easy to read. I thought that this thread was going to be just that – a thread about two men practicing their combat skills – so the monsters’ appearance was unexpected.
You made the monsters sound rather scary, and you didn’t forget to include the volunteers and their reactions. Both things were great in my opinion. The fight was quite exciting, and I also enjoyed the conversation between Mathias and Kasoria at the end of the thread.
Enjoy your rewards!
Knowledge:
Thrown (Ether-bolt) x 4
Discipline x 3
Stealth x 3
Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: Minor Overstepping: Pain in Mathias' right arm.
Renown: 10
Magic XP: Yes, for Transmutation.
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15
Kasoria:
Knowledge:
Ranged Weapon: Short Bow x6
Abrogation x2
Tactics 2
Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 10
Magic XP: Yes, for Abrogation.
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15
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Comments: What an interesting title for a thread! That immediately caught my attention!The review request contained the wrong link, but I found the correct thread anyway by going through your posts.
The description of Mathias’ and Kasoria’s practicing was detailed and easy to read. I thought that this thread was going to be just that – a thread about two men practicing their combat skills – so the monsters’ appearance was unexpected.
You made the monsters sound rather scary, and you didn’t forget to include the volunteers and their reactions. Both things were great in my opinion. The fight was quite exciting, and I also enjoyed the conversation between Mathias and Kasoria at the end of the thread.
Enjoy your rewards!