Thread Review
Excellent twist on a meet-and-greet thread. Aiden and Rosalie are intriguing character additions to the stage that is Etzos, with vibrant personalities touched on between their interaction with one another. Aiden seemed the a-little-too-curious young man while Rosalie kept her veneer of the polite seamstress up while giving the readers hints of just how much of a veneer that was.
The characters' respective narratives provided insight into the secrets both were keeping, and only the reader got to be aware of those overlapping connections. Kudos on the backstory work here to create this connection from the get-go. The pacing of the scenes flowed well and kept a steady clip without dragging too much or rushing ahead too fast. Use of NPCs was balanced, and enjoyable, with flavor but not overriding the interaction between Rosalie and Aiden.
It will be interesting to see where this story goes, as Rosalie works with the troupe. Aiden seems the type to pry more until something gives.
Wonderful job the both of you and enjoy your rewards!
PM me if you have any questions, issues or concerns.
Total Word Count: 4,966 words.
Review Request Link: viewtopic.php?p=135994#p135994The characters' respective narratives provided insight into the secrets both were keeping, and only the reader got to be aware of those overlapping connections. Kudos on the backstory work here to create this connection from the get-go. The pacing of the scenes flowed well and kept a steady clip without dragging too much or rushing ahead too fast. Use of NPCs was balanced, and enjoyable, with flavor but not overriding the interaction between Rosalie and Aiden.
It will be interesting to see where this story goes, as Rosalie works with the troupe. Aiden seems the type to pry more until something gives.
Wonderful job the both of you and enjoy your rewards!
PM me if you have any questions, issues or concerns.
Total Word Count: 4,966 words.
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