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Etzos, ‘The City of Stones’ is a fortress against the encroachment of Immortal domination of Idalos. Founded on the backs of mortals driven to seek their own destiny independent of the Immortals, the city has carved itself out of the very rock of the land. Scourged by terrible wars of extermination, they've begun to grow again, and with an eye toward expansion, optimism is on the rise.

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It worked perfectly well. All attention had been redirected away from Woe and onto Llyr. Sure, the mage had to take his sister’s form and be completely naked… but these were the things he was willing to do for someone that he considered almost-sort-of-kinda-like-a-friend or something to that nature. He wasn’t entirely sure, and he didn’t bother to define it. But Woe and Llyr had been at Rhakros together, they’d faced death together in more than one way, they’d abandoned Oberan together, and they’d traveled the Untold together. Llyr was more than willing to be literally exposed in body to a whole caravan of strangers if it meant it would help Woe… even if he still needed to inquire about what the doctor in Viden had told him about the Webspinner. That was a conversation that could wait and happen in private between the two of them. Besides, it wasn’t like he hadn’t already suspected far earlier, given Woe’s affinity with spiders. But it was another thing to hear it confirmed from someone he’d only just met and who didn’t know that Llyr even knew Woe.

So, Llyr - in the totemic body of Kiara – placed her hands on her hips, stared down at Corin, and waited for an answer. She couldn’t waver now. Her gaze tracked the artifact, keenly aware of the faint suffocation it emanated from the geometric shape. It vaguely reminded her of the ring she utilized now and then, to help sever the effect of her sparks, and she recognized the faint sensation of what it’d felt like to travel through the Etzori territory over the course of Ymiden – far from her magic and left to the whim of mundane survival. She probably would have died or worse if it hadn’t been for the Raggedy Man at her side, and she still hadn’t forgotten that the Abrogant had recovered his connection to his spark before her.

“I am a magister, yes,” she interjected when the other woman mentioned that she seemed like a mage. Her voice softened though, in a somewhat forced patience like speaking with a child. Slight murmurs came from a couple up ahead. They stopped when a third Etzori hissed at the two to hush whatever they were mumbling about.

Llyr crossed her arms in front of her chest, though not to cover herself, but only to continue with an expression of patience while the woman kept determined. Her eyes remained icy blue, not changing color, while she focused on what Corin said and why she might’ve said it.

Her left eyebrow arched at the almost frantic conclusion. The woman truly wanted attention on her, wanted to spread the news, the information to sincerely be shared with anyone who would listen, and Llyr felt a sort of pity. She glanced to check on Woe – only to find he’d slipped away from sight – then returned her attention to Corin.

“Ma’am, trust me, I feel for your struggles,” said Llyr in an almost purr-like quality of voice with the posh accent. Her wings fluttered, and she stepped off the wagon. She landed lightly on her bare feet, next to Corin, and held out a hand with the open palm faced upward. Her other hand rested gently above her heart while she spoke like a formal orator. “I was at Rhakros. I witnessed Lisirra’s mad brutal ambitions for myself. I also observed many of Sintra’s spiders die for our cause. They died alongside Etzori alike, they scouted, and they fought like all the rest. Now you might not consider spiders any more living than you do ghosts, but I won’t forget the sacrifices made on those trials to help our army to victory.”

“Yet I do not intend to dismiss your concerns, Miss…?” she paused here to gather a name from the other woman. Whether denied or provided one, she continued, “I understand the danger of allowing someone such as Sintra into the proud city of Etzos, especially at such a tenuous and vulnerable time. Yet with so much of the population slaughtered by Lisirra, it would be foolish to not have some awareness that things might need to temporarily change to help efforts to rebuild. For there is still Syroa around, likely eager to take advantage, and so many other Immortals who won’t be so… gentle in their involvement. It is one thing to have pride, and another to allow for extinction of a city on the mere matter of principle. Is survival not of utmost importance, not for you and I, as we have our lives to make our choices, but what of the children who have yet to live their’s? Would you make the choice for them to die by principle as martyrs too?”

“Philosophy aside,” said Llyr without tiring, and in a light-hearted voice that carried over the caravan so those eavesdropping could clearly hear. “If you do not wish to carry this artifact that you know very little about, as you have said, then allow me to ease your burden. I will travel ahead and ma’am, I promise you that this will be treated with adequate gravity. I shall hand it personally to the Tower in the Citadel with the utmost discretion...”

“…as some of you who are smart might already realize,” Llyr raised her voice in a stern announcement to the caravan, “…that something like this requires discretion not slovenly obtrusiveness.”

“The cube, please, if you will.” Llyr held her hand up, in front of Corin, and gave her the option to hand the artifact over nice and quietly. The blue of her eyes shifted colors and warmed into a red hue.
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The condescension almost dripped off the woman's soft voice, as if the woman was Corin's mother.

She fought to keep her face still, managing to keep the anger down and hidden. Who did this woman think she was to speak to Corin that way, mage or no.

The seeming unending tirade of words were quick out of the woman's mouth. Her words flower with aristocratic elegance, rankling at Corin's ears and causing her hairs to rise. This one was already bought and paid for by Sintra. She fiddled at her pack while she waited for the woman to halt long enough for Corin to respond, pulling free a few small vials and palming them. Self defense was always a good idea, especially given her past experience with Webspinners.

".The cube, please, if you will.” The woman said.

"Whoa, now, I don't appreciate ye putting words inna my mouth. I ain't said nuttin about treating spiders like that, and I sure as the Seven ain't saying that good folk didnt die and give their lives in Rhakros. But what I am sayin is that she planned the whole thing. She caused the blasted Ether storms, and she gave Lisirra hints beforehand so the bitch was ready to attack us. You didn't find it strange that she was on us before we could ready a defense?"

She drew in a breath, struggling to remember what else the woman had said.

"Aye, our survival is the most important- but if we were to turn towards Sintra and start worshipping her, have we really survived? I didn't come and fight here against one 'Morty, only to turn around and hug another close. Yer posing a hypothetical question and makin us seem that it's a forgone situation. 'Sides, I ain't making a choice fer anyone. I'm telling ye folk the truth of things so ye can make yer own choice. Don't want that bitch fooling good folk."

She did her best to keep the mirth from her face at the last suggestion, but shook her head nonetheless. Despite the woman's hint that the discussion should be handled with discretion, Corin's voice remained loud enough for everyone.

"Aye, if I thought I could trust ye further than I could throw ye, I'd give it up and be happy for it. But ye already made her position clear, and ye ain't even had the good grace to look at the proof I've got. Give me one good reason why I should give it to ye instead of figuring it out meself, and I'd be happy to do so. She sighed and shook her head.

"We've had enough of closed doors and secret meetings. People deserve to know the truth of the situation, not having their lives and rules traded away without their knowledge. Something like this requires knowledgeable and informed citizenry, not unscrupulous and venal politicians making decisions for us."

The last sentence was said in an incredible imitation of the woman's accent, damn near pitch perfect. Corin's mouth twisted as she said it and showed her distaste for the woman in front of her.

"So no, I won't be giving ye the artefact to make it disappear. If he say ye've got that much influence, ye can get together a big group of them and I'll show ye all the information at once, in front of enough Etzori that ye can't kill me right afterwards.

Two of the vials had slipped into her pocket, the third was held, hidden in her palm, ready to help her escape if the mage proved physically hostile.
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Llyr smiled. It was a thin, humorless smile. Her red eyes glowed as they narrowed. The halo above her head flickered. She offered patience, however, in that she allowed the other woman to say her piece as she had gotten the chance as well. But this woman, who refused to give her name still, didn’t seem to understand that Llyr wasn’t interested in a debate.

After Corin had said all she had to say, Llyr waited a pause.

“Are you finished?” she inquired lightly, with the same condescending tone of a mother speaking to an unruly tot. Except her smile vanished. The next words she spoke were on equal ground, no condescension but a low, dire tone instead:

“I find your cooperation lacking.”

A few trills. She didn’t say anything more. Then Llyr inhaled deeply, clapped her hands together once, and said in their very public conversation, “Well, if you insist on making trouble, then I suppose that is your free choice. I don’t expect many people appreciate the harassment of your continual conspiracies when you clearly have no interest in seeking actual resolution on such loudly announced concerns. I can’t imagine why you wouldn’t want the Tower to examine such evidence immediately unless you believe yourself superior to all others in who has the best interests for Etzos. I suppose, given what you say, we should make you Chief Advisor, since you are able to arbitrate who can be trusted and who can't be?”

“Alas, what can one do with those who are so paranoid?” She turned away and spoke to the sky itself in a sort of casual lamentation. “They will find no one they trust and claim themselves to be the sole holders of truth while their insane beliefs threaten everyone and everything around them. Hm, sounds familiar...”

“At least, I do hope you are merely paranoid and not seeking to create trouble for the sake of some con.” She turned her attention back to Corin and lowered her tone to a conversational cadence without a hint of anger or otherwise within her pleasant soprano voice. “These things can be manufactured, after all. Do you truly believe that an Immortal of manipulation would be so blatant as to put webs on her artifact? You might as well have gone to a costumer and asked them to create something for a theater production of what people would expect from Sintra!”

Llyr shrugged, then glanced over Corin from head to toe. She appeared to be gauging the other woman, or perhaps simply remembering what she looked like. Then she said in an even quieter voice to the woman, almost turning meek in sharp contrast to her attitude at the start. “Pity… I would have liked to have helped you, ma'am, but I can tell now from simply looking at that expression on your face… winning trust from someone with a mind like your’s would be a lost cause.”

“Yet if you genuinely seek a good reason, and aren't only saying that, let it be that I can actually make sure this evidence reaches where it needs to be to make a difference. Before you announce yourself to the wrong sort, if you aren't already being tracked and followed, that is... and thus putting me and all these people in that very same danger.”

“Would it not suit that who you speak of to let you run free, so that all who believe your words will also be found in their camaraderie to what accusations you spew. You can come along with me, ma'am, and perhaps I might be able to help. But I’d like to examine the object myself first to make sure it wouldn’t cause any kind of… unintended effects upon arrival to the inner perimeter. Please, do not take this as an insult but have you not considered that you might be a mere, ignorant carrier for a final Lisirran attack? This belongs in the hands of someone who is familiar with the arcane. Someone like me.”
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Corin shook her head as the woman replied. She could tell by several quick glances around that the others weren't nearly as moved by her impassioned pleas as she had hoped they would be. Woe had been relatively easy to use as a strawman to argue against, but this woman, whoever she was, wasn't nearly as easy.

"I find your cooperation lacking," the woman said, and Corin snorted once, maintaining eye contact. She had learned something from her interaction with the ragged man beneath Etzos last cycle, and she kept her eyes locked onto the naked woman's.

At last the woman sighed, obviously reading Corin's determination to keep a hold of the cube.

She had a hard time following the woman's argument, though it was clearly well said and put together. Her words were simply far more aristocratic than Corin was used to.

She prepared to defend herself against the accusation of paranoia, but paused as she thought about it.

No, the woman was right. Corin was extremely paranoid.


It had served her well enough in the past, and she saw little reason to stop the habit now. Until Sintra was dealt with, everyone was the enemy.

"Aye, and if I wanted anything perhaps you could believe it a con. I don't know the inner workings of her magic, and this cube is exactly as I was given it." She glanced at the cube clutches in her hand and had to admit that it did look a tad suspicious when viewed from a more...cynical light.


"I'll admit I was not the one to recover the cube from Sintra, but I did break into her operative's house in Bolstrum and steal these letters there, " she continued, gesturing to the letters still piled where Woe had been.

She drew nearer, subconsciously, as the woman's voice dropped in volume. She sounded almost... genuine as she spoke of helping Corin. Coring glanced around, most of those nearby craning to try and overhear or so far away they had obviously though it better to give up the gossip in order to avoid a mage of Etzos.

She sighed as she considered the woman's questions, dropping the loud and brash act she had been using before. "Aye, I have thought of it. But if an agent of Lisirra was able to infiltrate where I was when I got this... they'd'ved no troubles entering the inner ring with it either. The person who gave it had no reason to lie and every reason to assist me. But yes, yer right. I could be followed, but if they can follow me this far then we'd have no chance anyway."

She gave a bit if a sad smile at this, shaking her head. The biqaj couldn't know, but between the form changes, the mirror dust cloak, and the magical earing she had stolen, she was pretty damn sure no one could follow her unless there was some magic way. Even that, Amber would've noticed someone following them.

"Come on down from there then, perhaps put on a cloak, and I'll let you see the device." Corin paused and thought for a moment about Mal, and his totems.

In a voice that allowed no one else to overhear, she continued, "Though I'll need some assurances you won't turn into a bird and fly away on me with the cube. Perhaps you could give me a few of your totems to ensure you won't run off with it, leaving me high and dry."

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Corin had seemed to calm down somewhat, proving that she was capable of actual conversation and not just wild exclamations to get attention with. However, Llyr kept alert. She hadn’t been lying when she mentioned the mind of the other woman. She could recognize paranoia quite well and she recognized it in this woman with ease. Funny then, how certain the other woman was that her paranoia lined up with her conspiracies, with a rather swift defense as to why it couldn’t be another plausible conspiracy that Llyr suggested.

The biqaj considered the offer to see the device, with her own suspicion to observe on her youthful features.

"...Perhaps you could give me a few of your totems to ensure you won’t run off with it, leaving me high and dry."

“…” Llyr stared incredulously at the woman for a few trills. Then she laughed. High-pitched, piercing, and sincere laughter met Corin’s request. She laughed at the other woman, and laughed some more, so much that tears gathered in eyes of orange color, and she wrapped her arms around her bare midriff while she curled over from the power of her laughter.

“You…” she gasped in an attempt to break through the laughter. From the general unease that drifted through those brave enough to linger nearby the women, such unrestrained laughter from a mage didn’t seem like a good thing. A couple more people hurriedly gained more distance from them.

Then her laughter stopped.

So abruptly that it still rang in the ears of those around them, as if echoed on the wind.

Llyr glared at Corin and her upper lip curled when she hissed, “Who the fuck d’ you think you are? Fuckin’ claiming you know nothing of arcana then askin’ me somet’ing like ‘at. Give you my totems?!”

Her accent had plummeted from the Citadel posh intonation to a rather raspy accent of the Oh’ Pee. It wasn’t a mimic of Corin, but rather of someone that Corin knew from last cycle, beneath Etzos.

“You ain’t got a leg to stand on, and ‘fore you reach the city proper, by luck of the draw, you get someone tryin’ help yeh wit’ the Citadel, and you show yerself to be a right fool. Can’t even see past yer own nose for want of ‘inking yeh know better. Well, I think yer a liar. From start to end.”

Llyr shook her head. The ends of her long blond hair flipped about. She scoffed, Assurances. Get. fucked. I don’t need a damn bird to fly if I wanted to steal that trinket of your's, yeh daft bitch.”

She stepped away from the other woman. Her wings outstretched, as if in preparation to fly as she was, but in the next trill… Llyr simply wasn’t there anymore.

The mage had vanished.

. . . . .

Llyr wanted that damn cube. To hold, to possess the trinket for herself, to place the artifact in a proper display case behind a thin sheet of glass where she could look at it in the morning or evening light and touch it whenever she desired.

She reappeared in Idalos, bits later, next to Woe. The young mage didn’t say a word to him as he barely even noticed her. He was far too busy moping to notice that she’d appeared slightly to the side and behind him. She pivoted instead, lifted the earth under her feet with a small burst of shapecraft to help smooth her path as she sprinted back to Etzos, then through the streets to where she’d hidden her clothes earlier. A couple people caught sight, but they weren’t about to get involved with some naked winged woman… any fair-minded Etzori knew that was trouble best left forgotten.

Once transformed into her male figure, in a gradual process over many bits, the young mage hurriedly dressed. There wouldn't be much time left now, if the woman even remained with the caravan at all. He left the abandoned shell of a home, strode to the gate, and promptly spoke to the same guard who’d checked his papers when he’d left: “There’s a caravan coming through the gates soon. Among it, there is a woman who seeks to cause trouble within the city. She carries potentially dangerous items on her person and is possibly a mage. All you have to do is ask the other people who it is, if she doesn't make herself obvious, provided she doesn't try to hide herself somehow. I suggest a thorough check of the entire caravan… and no, I didn’t retrieve any wells totrial.”

He headed into the Commercial Ring, canvas bag slung over his shoulder. Llyr sped-walked directly toward the place he knew might give him the best chance to get that cube in his hands and would also receive him the quickest: Mister Tagley in the Office of the Citizen’s Committee.

Mister Tagley would know what should be done about whatever was going on, and if not, the elderly gentleman could relay the information to High Marshall Pahrn. There was simply no possible way that Tagley was a Webspinner, after all… and even if he was… wouldn’t it be better to help those who’d be running the city when given the chance?

For all Llyr’s short life, he knew that no matter the destruction or sentiments in the squalor below, the ruling elite kept their grasp. They remained, more or less, unlike peasants. Uprisings never worked, not truly, only in tiny spurts of pent-up frustration that couldn't sustain pressure. Not even the Heaps of Quacia had managed anything more than getting a single trial to celebrate their failed riots. If he had to choose, if it came down to it, Llyr knew which side of the perimeter he wanted to settle on.

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The accent was unmistakable, and the mannerisms seemed too close to be coincidence. Even if it was a mere chance, she couldn't risk it.

The woman disappeared before her, the naked biqaj vanishing as if she had never been there, and Corin stared stupidly at the space where the mage had been for far too long. Flashes of torches on dark stone walls, the looming presence of the other man, hulking and pitiless. The feeling of relief as he had saved her, souring into a greater fear as he had proven his own willingness to take her life. The feel of his magic as it had coiled around her wrist, shackling her.

Her heart was still in her chest, and she noted with a start that she hadn't even been breathing. Damn.

The walls of the city were coming into focus now, more than a mere speck on the horizon. Corin cursed low and inventively, both at her own luck and at the fates that seemed to conspire against her. She was sure now that the woman would have disappeared with the artefact - not entirely sure if she was already an agent of Sintra, or just an opportunist who saw their chance.

"Show's over folks, I'm afraid. Ent no convincing some folk, 'parently. Shame, but what can ye do?" She said, pitching her voice louder now. She heard her own waver of fear and cursed herself again. "Her disappearin is my cue to leave you good folk, as I've no doubt there'll be a welcoming party for me."

Smiling, Corin walked back towards the rear of the caravan and touched her forehead in a salute, before darting off the road and into a small stand of trees. There she touched her cloak to the ground, letting it work and shift into a mottled brown colour. She rose, and Nightshade stood in her place. The avriel was recognizable enough, she hoped, that she could enter the city without question. Last time she had been in Etzos Night had built an impressive reputation for herself and she hoped to use that now.

The road was quiet behind the caravan, visible only as a small blur nearly a kilometer ahead. Nightshade shifted her pack on her shoulders and strode forward, her heart still thumping erratically and her mind entirely occupied.

This was going to be harder than she had thought.
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As I have already said guys, brilliant writing. It’s a pleasure to review it. I especially loved the descriptions of Llyr as a lovely write cat. The parts where Llyr shows herself as a mage is interesting too. The interaction between the PCs was splendid. Woe is always an interesting personality, now also affected by magic. And Vluharquih, your PC is outstanding, there’s something deeply alien with her and your writing of her is no less than awesome. So, thanks for a good read and hope you all enjoy your well-deserved rewards.

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Disguise: Sending away those who would otherwise give away your disguise
Disguise: Muddying your accent
Disguise: Different faces sit in different social circles
Disguise: Mimicking a posh Tower accent
Disguise: Using a face people trust to slip past notice
Acting: Stage whisper
Discipline: Resisting the commands of those in authority
Discipline: Keeping your calm when people challenge you
Discipline: Keeping fear out of your voice
Rhetoric: Aruging a point you believe in
Rhetoric: Revolutionary talk is difficult with an officer nearby
Rhetoric: Arguing the finer points of life vs slavery

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Knowledge:
Detection: Critical failure to notice the naked woman behind you
Deception: Pretending to have given up on Sintra.
Politics: Sintra is hated mightily by some in Etzos
Politics: Etzos is embroiled in controversy, split between anti-Immortals and those sympathetic to 'Sintra'.
Politics: Commoners and Well-to-do citizens are divided by class.
Politics: People admire those who fought in the wars.
Stealth: Sneaking over when a distraction appears.
Stealth: Sneaking away from a wagon to mope around a grave.

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Magic Experience?: Yes

Llyr

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Intimidation: Refusal to identify oneself.
Intimidation: Speaking with an air of authority.
Intimidation: The Raggedy Man’s Accent.
Intimidation: A Posh Accent from The Citadel of Etzos.
Intimidation: Talking down to someone while completely naked.
Intimidation: Some people deserve to feel a little fear.
Disguise: Mimicking Local accents.
Acting: The importance of what type of voice used.
Deception: A bluff to distract attention.
Politics: Choosing allegiances in a city.
Politics: Loudly proclaimed opinions must be monitored.

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