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[Zuudaria] Unholy War X: It's an unholy war..

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It was there, again, that oil-like substance. In the blood which was seeping through the skin samples. This plague was vile, Faith considered, and it must be beyond terrifying. Sharila had, at best, hours to live and Faith prayed for the woman that it was less than that. She had done everything she could to make them all comfortable, but frankly that was a nonsense in itself. All they faced was degrees of horrifyingly uncomfortable and in pain, and Faith knew it.

She was going to damn well cure this, she promised herself.

The substance had adhered to the skin, Faith saw. It was gnawing away at it, slowly corroding and making it beyond paper-thin. It was like it was an acid, she thought. But she'd tested the blood and it was no more acidic than any blood, so it couldn't be that. Yet, it was actively eating the skin. There was more to this, Faith knew, and so she carefully started to make the records which detailed what she was doing and when. Every detail was recorded, along with careful measurements and diagrams. Faith didn't draw for a living, or for pleasure, but accurate renditions of detail was vital to what she did. She was learning that the thing to do was to draw what she saw, not what she didn't see, or assumed she saw. Observe, replicate, repeat.


Rynmere Plague
5th Ymiden, 719.
2nd bell past dawn.
Subject: A6: Female, human, aged 20. Trial 3, final stages.
Sample: Skin, blood.


The strange substance in the blood continues and is evident in the skin samples which I have taken from all over the body. However, close visual inspection and inspection under the magnifier are clear. The skin is aged, and closely resembles the skin of a human in their 80s - specifically one who has been dead for at least 30 trials.

Elasticity is non-existent, and the thinness of the skin is taken to an extreme. The blood which has seeped out is lacking the oily substance.

Current Hypothesis
Whatever this substance in the blood is, it both degrades, and rots, the skin. As it does that, it is 'used up' and therefore, there is a much lessened or non-existent in the blood outside the skin. I need to go to the corpses, with the aim of finding out if this is happening internally, as I suspect. It would explain the final stage and the means of death.

To Do
Investigate the joints - why do they seize?
Track the development of the oily substance - I've seen it now on Trial 3 and Trial 1. Track in more detail.

And it was in that attention to detail for the purpose of drawing that Faith noticed something. Recently, she had been working on her Licentiate - she was in her final season and she had been examining the corpses of people who had died while healthy - and those who had died after a long and wasting illness. Her work was about the impact of disease on the whole body and Faith frowned deeply as she realised what she was seeing here.

First, to make absolutely sure (although she already was), she looked under the magnifier once more and she sighed. This was impossible, however it was happening. Quickly, she lowered her head and began to write.

That was the next thing to do, she knew. To go and start on one of the corpses in here. Faith lifted her eyes from the parchment and she sighed. She knew what she had to do, but she really didn't want to. This war was changing her, there was no doubt about it - it was altering her at a fundamental level and she did not like some of the ways in which she was changing.

But, she didn't have to like it, after all. She had to get on and do Famula's will. More than that, Faith knew, she had to do this because it was the right thing to do. Another person ~ even someone like Carter ~ would be much more of a broad-stroke kind of person, but Faith did not believe in that. She'd come across people who had been initiated into magic as experiments, and come to that, they were using mages here, to aid the war effort. Faith had no doubt that it would be easier to make something which targeted mages, or even which targeted necromancers with the aim of killing them.

She was not that person, nor would she ever be.

So. This was going to be something - as she'd said to Carter and Jess - that they did the long, slow and hard way. But the right way. Whatever it was that oily substance was, there seemed to be none of it in her blood and, as such, she knew that she needed to identify it. Maybe she could attach a cure to it, see what it was that it actually was. If she had just the first idea it would be a good thing. She needed more information there was no doubt. Faith's brow furrowed and then she smiled slightly and she whispered to herself.

"If only I knew someone in Rynmere at the moment. If I had a brain, I'd be dangerous to myself and others."

But first, she knew that time was of the essence. So, she made her way to the morgue. "I need to be told, the moment one of them dies." Faith said and breathed in as the Zuuda here with her nodded. "Famula forgive me, what have I become?" The Zuuda hadn't seemed concerned, not at all, yet Faith knew that it wasn't like her. But this was something which she had to do, and do as quickly and efficiently as she could. Because this more important than the six people here, it was more important than Rynmere. If Ellasin released this plague into the world, Faith knew, then it was entirely possible that hundreds of thousands, even millions of people, would die.

And it would be on her hands.

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As she made her way to the morgue, Faith stopped to pen a quick note to Hart. She had some ideas of things she needed to know, now, at least. With a bit of luck he might be able to give her some information. But, again, Faith wasn't waiting because she had too much to do in the timeframe, and she needed to do this whole thing as effectively as she could. So, letter to Hart, she moved into the morgue, ready to get to work. Faith had been a slave for all her childhood - she had slept and eaten in conditions which were not even vaguely fit for human habitation - smells usually did not bother her at all but, as she walked in here the stench hit her and Faith lifted a hand to her face, taking a step back. This was beyond anything she'd expected. Steeling herself, she stepped forward again and entered the room. First, she put some of the sharp-smelling salve under her nose and, as she did, Faith remembered the time that Jamal had given her to a member of the Iron Hand, Yanahalaq, who had been guarding a body Faith was working on. Rather than letting her get on, Yana had chosen to instruct Faith to stand still while the 'soldier' had put this stuff into Faith's eyes. The blessing of Vri wasn't needed for Faith to remember that clearly, that moment of standing and watching the woman who was putting this burning substance into her eyes.

Later, when Faith was trying to find out what had happened to Jamal, the same woman had come and threatened her and Faith had flipped. She'd threatened Yana with everyone she'd ever met and the woman had backed down. Because, Faith knew, she was a bully and trying to bully a slave. She was glad that she had stood up to Yana then, and now? "Now, I'd poke you in the eyes," she muttered with a smile. "Pull your pigtails like the child you are. Or I am. Ah well. I forgive you."

There were six bodies, and next to each one was a large bucket containing their final bout of vomiting and diarrhoea. She'd looked at the notes previously and so, she chose one of them and got to work.

Rynmere Plague
5th Ymiden, 719.
3rd bell past dawn.
Subject: A9: Female, human, aged 24. Dec'd.
Full autopsy.


There is no doubt - the entire digestive system has been completely rotted and liquefied internally. There is significant damage to the heart, but this might be at least partially due to the strain it has been put under. All organs are damaged beyond functioning or completely gone.

The remaining bits (minimal) of the digestive system and organs indicate that it is the blood which is attacking them. The nature of the remnants (see figure 25) indicate that the blood vessels ad heart were being corroded from the inside out.

There is none of the oil-like substance in the body itself, except in the remaining blood. However, please see note below.

Blood
Even considering the frankly explosive means of death and the inevitable blood loss due to the nature of it - the blood remaining is incredibly diluted. It is as though ...

She stopped writing.

"Faith... what is wrong with you?" She had been testing the oily substance on her blood, yes. She'd examined it, yes. But there was more to it than that. There was more to blood than that, and Faith collected up the samples and moved out to the small workshop / lab just off the main morgue. There, she carefully bottled up each sample and labelled them. Frowning, she put them in the centrifuge and began to work it, turning the handle so that the device spun. It was hard work, but it had to be done in order to separate out the blood and there, she knew, was possibly something vital.

Once the blood was separated, Faith could see that the oily substance was only in the red blood of both the alive and dead victims. Which meant that the yellow blood was immune. That made sense. But now? Now she needed to know what happened when it was introduced to her blood. Both parts. That was what she did next and Faith frowned as she saw that her blood continued to simply absorb the substance without impact. Why?

"Well, I guess I might be immune," she muttered and then frowned. Damnit, that even made sense. She could test that on the immune people who were coming tomorrow. She lifted her head as one of the volunteers came in and Faith sighed. "She died?" Nodding her head at the acknowledgement, Faith motioned. "Close up here for me, would you? I'm going to go and perform an immediate autopsy."

She had to do that, she knew, because in doing that she would have an invaluable comparison. However, she had to admit. Considering who they had here, and how long this was likely to take?

Well, she probably wouldn't be short of the opportunity to perform an autopsy within minutes of death.

Not short of the opportunity at all.

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There's an attention to detail here that I appreciate.

Be it the fact that one has to centrifuge blood to make sense of what's in it for specific tests, to the fact that she did it by hand, keeping in line with the general tech level. There's an interesting blend here, of both her abilities that make her special, and the setting itself, that blend to make something I didn't expect to read during this batch of reviews.

There's nothing I can fully complain about. It's a very solid addition to your ongoing plots, and highlights the amount of research Faith is putting herself through, no matter how degrading to her psyche.

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