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The suns had returned, and like every Ashan, Kasoria indulged himself. He'd always done so. Finding reasons or just excuses to put himself outside for a few breaks at at time. He knew many did the same. Humans were not just creatures who were made to be most active in the waking hours, their bodies needed that light. He'd heard tales of peoples who never saw the suns, buried deep in the bones of the world, become waxen, pallid, hairless, degenerated parodies of humanity. Thirty trials of that left everyone in Etzos paler, gaunter, with eyes that seemed sunken not just from exhaustion but... fear. Some sort of buried, unspoken terror that maybe this time, they wouldn't come back. That it would be night and darkness save for fires and torches forever.

That never happened. Every Ashan, every culture and nation and city and people marked that miracle the same way. But there was always next year, so just in case this was the last time...

Make the most of it.

He was lounging on a bench in one of the gardens, one of three he used in the sprawling palace. Paranoia was not something spoken of often in Etzos; not being fucking predictable was. So he rotated between the three, changing every other day, so his routine would be that little harder to predict. As one who'd often been doing the predicting, he knew that often made the difference. Being here rather than there at the right time was often what saved a man (or damned him). But regardless of which, he still chose a spot smack in the rays of the suns above them. Relishing the heat and the warmth and the light.

He chuckled as he turned another page. Rather ironic for a man who spent so much of his life in the shadows, tunnels, mines, passages, the dark places of the world. Turned out he was no less human than most. Then he chased the idle thought from his mind, focusing on the latest chapter[/knowledge].

[googlefont=Dancing Script]Once a budding mage elevates himself to the level of a journeyman magician, he begins to dabble in the most famous aspect of Sovereign: the manipulation of matter itself. Which is not to say he has not been doing this beforehand; the difference is that now, with the finer level of control afforded to them through practice and discipline, more refined and specific casts can be made. Known as "Reach", this is the ability to grab and then move objects from feet away, by hardening the air around that object and then lifting them as one's actual hands would.


Kasoria's black eyes flickered over the top of the book. A couple of yards away from him, getting slowly hotter in the noon sun, was a ceramic water jug and a clay mug. His gaze narrowed as he remembered what had happened to a set just like it a couple of trials before.

Well, you were tired and you rushed. Besides, the maid was more than happy to clean it up.

Something distinctly Etzori groaned inside Kasoria and his eye twitched. Fates, was he really the kind of twat that had a maid now? Well, no, he wasn't. He was the kind of twat that protected twats that had maids. There was, he assured himself, a distinction.

Is this relevant? Crack on, old boy.

Some more astute readers may have noticed a similarity between Reach and the "Shackle" ability of Abrogation. While they both work through hardened air around an object, there are two crucial distinctions. Most obviously, Reach cannot be used on a living creature, whereas Shackle can. Just as importantly, Shackles cannot be moved by an abrogating mage. Shackles cast can be firm as iron but they stay exactly where they are. They cannot carry or lift or pull or push. Reach can do all of these things, though only within reason. Since Reach is a direct extension of the limb, when used it can only move what the physical muscle can. Thus we see that while Sovereign grants the mage impossible, wondrous control over the world around him, his limitations as a mortal are still present, and to be respected.


Kaosria resisted the urge to roll his eyes at that little titibit of fucking philosophy, instead putting the book down and swinging himself upright on the bench. The jug and cup were right in front of him. He closed his eyes as he breathed in, and when he breathed out-

There it was. Flighty and eager as ever.

Time to play. [/googlefont]
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It was not like before. He waited. He marshaled his ether and focused his Spark before he ever tried to deploy it. But he didn't speak. He trusted instead to his own body to mimic exactly what he wanted. After all, it was just what his hands would be doing anyway. Just... over there.

Go.

The air in front of Kasoria's raised hand shimmered as his Spark obeyed. He waited until he was sure it was flitting and surging around the jug before he curled his fingers inward... and blinked.

Fuck me.

He could feel it. Not texture, not the contours or the warmth of the clay after it had been sitting in the suns for an hour. But it was there. A pressure against his fingers and palm as he wrapped them around the jug with his magic. When he lifted it up, there was weight, too. Even the slight imbalance of an object that was filled with sloshing liquid and-

The jug was suspended in the air in front of him. He'd been so entranced with the sensation he'd barely realized that he'd accomplished his task. He raised his hand and three six feet away, the jug rose up with it. Stopped just as his hand did. He felt the tremor of excitement inside him shudder through into his Spark and it was suddenly agitated, as if wanting to fly again, somewhere else, drop-

No. Not this time.

He licked his lips and kept his focus. Turned his hand from palm sideways... to down... as if pouring water... and again, the jug obeyed him. More accurately, his Spark and the ether it channeled obeyed him. As if held by some invisible specter, the jug tipped forwards and a stream of water trickled into the cup. Kasoria beat down his wonder, if only for these moments. He needed to focus on the mundane, to allow the miraculous, as it were. It was just a jug, just a cup, just a simple action. He turned his hand back, and the jug was straight again. He lowered his hand, kept lowering it until it was on the ground again.

He let go. Snapped out his fingers and whispered the mental command. The pressure was gone. Nothing but air against his palm now. He lowered it and raised his other hand, each tedious gesture seeming to take far longer than it needed to. A fresh wave of ether flowed out of him, and when his right hand curled inward... he felt the cup against his palm. Not heat, no rough surface... as if he were gripping it through a cool, flat, formless layer of fabric. But it was there, and when he raised his hand, the cup followed suit.

Okay. Now the tricky part.

According to the book, what he was about to do wasn't Reach. It was something different, yet the same. Reach was an extension of what he was doing now. This was the foundation of Sovereign, as Phineas Carter had outlined in his usual meandering, poetic style. Reach was what it said it was: it allowed a mage to use tools and items like the ones he was manipulating now. It was a finer, more precise control. But this... what he was about to do, was Control itself.

Slowly, finger by finger, he released his grip... removed his Reach... but not his Control.

The cup stayed in the air. The air around it wasn't hardened like it had been before, but it was still under his Control. Kasoria had to read that chapter three times before he understood the idea. That while it might not have seemed it, back when he was shuffling around purses and blowing over chairs, the ability to control matter like this was in him from the moment Timur had finished initiating him on that roof in Rharne. The more he learned, the greater his power and familiarity with his Spark grew, the more control he would have. And that was what it was called in the book. Simple and obvious and completely accurate.

"Control..."

He breathed the word and commanded the cup to hover across the air towards him. He had to focus hard on that[/knowledge]. Without the solid, reassuring pressure of Reach in his hand, he had to depend solely on his Spark. Trust it to obey him and not get bored, basically. It tottered and shook as it moved. Sloshed around water and splashed on the stones... but it didn't drop. Didn't fall. His Control wavered, but did not desert him... and after a few long moments, enough for sweat to bead on his brow-

His had closed around the cup, as it came to a stop within his grasp. He chuckled and took a deep drink... before grimacing as he swallowed.

"Shite... shouldn't a' left that out all mornin'."
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There was one more thing he wanted to try. Something that piqued his interest not just as a mage or even a seeker of knowledge and (if he was honest) power, but his oldest passion. His most defining skill.

Never a dummy when you need one.

Kasoria walked to the tree like a man readying himself for a fight. Arms swinging lightly, shoulders rolling back and then forwards. The movement flowed up to his neck and he rolled his head from side to side, feeling bones crack and joints loosen. Only it wasn't a man or a sand-filled sack he was focusing on: it was a tree. He had no idea what kind, only it was tall and with a thick trunk half as wide as his torso.

Haven't done this in a while. Then again, not many trees in the Big Rock.

Reach wasn't just for manipulating tools or weapons or jugs of water. It was, in essence, an expansion of the mage's body. Kasoria remembered frowning a little when he'd read those words. Brawler and battler that he was, the first thing that crossed his mind had been, well, if you can extend a hand, can you do the same with-

He settled into a crouch, and balled his hands into fists. Summoned his Spark and it wasn't even tired yet. Growing and ravenous for activity, he suspected that he would overstep before the nameless, mindless ether-being inside him would. He took a breath, and as he exhaled... feeling the ether channel into his hands. The green light around him flared, brighter and sharper in the brilliant sunlight. But it never seemed to blind or distract him. Because it was him, he supposed. A witchmark, true, but a product of his own choices.

He licked his lips a moment. No gloves, no wraps... this could be beyond stupid. But there was no flesh to bruise, no bones to break, right? And even if there was, well... he could handle it.

Famous last words. Crack on, old man.

His boots shifted on the dirt. Ground into them as he prepared to twist his hip-

-upper body exploding out into a right cross-

Reach!

"Shite!"

Damned old fool nearly fell over. Nothing exploded out of him. No ether, no blast of power. Nothing hit the tree but a few drops of sweat from his fist. He stumbled forwards, momentum yanking him off balance and he tottered until his hand pressed against the bark. Muttering darkly to himself he stepped back... resumed the position. Setbacks were to be expected. Groused at, fine. But not ignored and never, ever seen as reason to quit. He'd drilled that into the delegates as they trained, as it had been beaten into him in the long marches of the past.

See it happen in your mind. Then make it happen out here. He inhaled again. Summoned his Spark without recrimination or annoyance. It came, bidden and oblivious to his annoyance. Body and mind. Fist and ether. Got to use them both, at once. Timing, old man. You know timing.

He breathed in. Steadied himself with the breath. Took a few more. Until his heartbeat was keeping time with it. Until his ether was pulsing in his knuckles, and when he lashed out again-

Reach!

CRACK

-the trunk trembled. Leaves and branches above it shook slightly. Kasoria frowned, some part of his mind marveling at the sensation. Not of pain, but again, of pressure. As if he'd punched his hand into something hard, and yet yielding. All the force of his punch - and it was no little thing - had smashed into bark and wood, but his body had suffered no damage. His ether had absorbed it all, and his Spark shrugged it off without a qualm. Encouraged, goaded, eyes smiling even if his mouth wasn't, he launched a left-

Reach!

-right-

Reach!

-left hook-

Reach!

CRACK-CRACK-CRACK

Three blows in as many seconds, each one launched by his mind and his ether... and the bark began to split. Kasoria bounced lightly on the balls of his feet and shook the sweat from his eyes. His hands lashed out again, left-right a blur so fast they seemed to land at the same moment, the same spot-

CRACK-CRACK

Three feet away from his fists, bark cracked, split, broke, and flew off the tree trunk. Exposing the lighter sapwood underneath it. Timing. That mattered. That made it work. Every punch came with a command to his Spark, that was pulsing, jumping, dancing between his limbs like a giddy child. Eager to be used in whatever manner let it escape into the world, it wasn't fussy as to the how. The same instant his arm shot forwards, the Spark obeyed and-

CRACK-CRACKCRACKCRACK

A cross and three pounding short jabs to the "ribs", smashed free a new length of bark. Now a patch the size of his torso had been torn from the trunk, leaving a white-yellow section of sapwood exposed instead. The Raggedy Man ignored the twinges in his arms and wound up for-

"Ahem?"

He heard the soft grinding of boots on dirt a trill before the polite cough. I]n the time it took to turn his head his Abrogation roared into life, erecting fields of Replicative energy around him. His mind snapped from thrilled and eager to that cold, clinical place where he killing was done, ready to dodge or lunge or-

"... ah."

The old man had a rake over his shoulder and a copper watering can in his other hand. A mustache drooped down past his lips and his weathered, nut-hard face was singularly unimpressed. For the briefest, most demented instant, Kasoria thought the very soul of his father had returned to haunt him.

"That is quite an old tree, you know."

Fates, right down to the whole not-really-a-question thing. Kasoria had to remind himself that the old man - his old man - is long gone and this crooked figure was not him. But he still shuffled a little when the man limped over and sighed, inspecting the damage.

"They have bags for that, I hear"

"I, ah... yeah, I'll go find one."

The gardener didn't show an ounce of fear or worry for the great and terrible Raggedy Man as he watched Kasoria leave. Picking up his book and cup and shoving them into a bag before taking his jug of water last of all. But he managed to quirk an eyebrow when the little man with black eyes raised it to him in a brief salute. He sighed and shook his head, muttering a brief beseeching to Moseke that she forgive the barbarian his vandalism.

Etzoris. In the Palace. Punching his trees. Wonders would never cease...








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Notes/Warnings: Second of Three, had to work a little harder to get he distinction between Reach and Control clear in my head, but overall... fun!


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I don't know why... or maybe I do, but this part made me laugh:
He'd heard tales of peoples who never saw the suns, buried deep in the bones of the world, become waxen, pallid, hairless, degenerated parodies of humanity.
*checks for hidden cameras*

Anyway, that segued well into a bit of reflection on Kasoria's brand of paranoid adaptation, changing up his routine so that it'd be that much harder to pin his activities down as a hardened criminal/assassin, although it seems to serve him well in security as well.

I like that you included some purple prose in the way the author writes about Sovereign :lol:. Magic books written by experts being few and far between, I don't suppose you'd find many cut-and-dry Magic for Dummy books that get to the point with humor and style. Or just straight up technical manuals. Magi tend to have egos to match their expertise, so it's natural they'd want to show off how well they can write.

The detail you poured into the actual practice of casting the magic was well written in my opinion, even if it just boiled down to: And then Kasoria smashed his invisible fists against some trees in the garden. Maybe that's just my lack of imagination showing. That said you added a lot of interest to what could've been a very dull grind.

I liked the part at the end where the Gardener is lamenting the barbarians punching trees.

Good writing.

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