Wrong Place, Wrong Time

15th of Ashan 723

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Almund is a thriving township with a dark side. With houses made from the wooden bodies of decommissioned ships, there are many opportunities here, coupled with many dangers.

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Wrong Place, Wrong Time




Wrong Place, Wrong Time
Ashan 15, 723

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Mel’drin wasn’t sure what to expect when he had claimed his freedom and ventured into the wider world, but it wasn’t Almund.

A sea of people flowed around him as he walked down the street, squinting his eyes against the low hanging sun. He could taste the salt in the air here. That was a hard thing to avoid on the island, he had found. All manner of people were out and about, enjoying the surprisingly pleasant weather.

Mel’drin, however, was not here for a nice stroll on the beach.

As It turned out, in order to survive as a free man, he would need money. He had managed to scrape by for now, on odd work and a bit of petty larceny, but finding something more stable would be necessary. That, or he would need to become a better thief. Not eager to swap one set of chains for another, he had done his best to avoid the latter. For now.

He kept his head low as a particularly large fellow pushed past him on the bustling street. Doing his best to blend in with the crowd, his mind reached out to the ephemeral snake that followed close by, “I reckon they could always use dockhands. Though, I aint eager for work like that.”

By his estimate, he had done enough back breaking labor for a whole lifetime.

Vespera’s long black body glided through the crowd, “True. Unfortunately, your education has prepared you for little else. We should rectify that. Although, I suppose you need money to get an education, yes? Hmm. How odd. Quite the chicken and the egg, yes?

Vespera continued her musings as Mel’drin turned down an alley. He had been pointed in the direction of a place called “The Kennels”, and was trying to make his way there. As he walked, the sound of the crowd dwindled behind him. He almost felt uncomfortable, not being able to hide amongst the crowd. His eyes darted around the dingy street, realizing that they were alone.

Heavy footsteps hit the cobblestone behind him. Glancing behind, he saw a large man stood at the entrance to this stretch of street. Blocking the way back, Mel’drin realized.

Quickening his pace, the Sev’ryn cursed under his breath. He should have known better than to step away from the crowd in a place like this.

The large man behind him let out a whistle, and two other men rounded the corner in front of Mel’drin. One had red hair, and the other wore a dark cloak.

Mel’drin was forced to a stop, surrounded. The large man, walking closer, spoke first, “Empty your pockets.” His deep voice reverberated in his giant rib cage.

Mel’drin slowly raised his hands as Vespera hissed from behind him, “This big one's got a knife.” Glancing down, the young man saw the other two thieves were unarmed.

Mel’drin spoke, “I ain’t got nothin’ for you, I'm afraid. I was tryna find some coin myself.” That wasn’t exactly true. Though he didn’t have much, he had taken enough from his stash to pay for food and a bed tonight.

Which is exactly why he needed it. He had no intention of sleeping in the street tonight. Looking between the two men he could see, he tried his best to come up with a plan. There was no way he could take on all three. Especially the one with a knife. His only chance was to run.

The redheaded thief in front stepped forward as Mel’drin reached for the power within him. Willing the fire in his soul to light, ether flowed up and out into a small mist around his head.

The thief grabbed the Sev’ryns collar, a snarl on his face, “He said empty your pockets, and he won’t be asking again.”

He moved as fast as he could. A whisper escaped him, a mantra to hone his focus. “Brilliance.”

He shoved the man that held his collar, and ducked. As he did so, the spark in soul hummed, and the ether above him burst into a blinding light, consumed all at once. The men around him stumbled back with a yelp, shielding their eyes.

Mel’drin turned toward the single large man and bolted past him. Partially blinded, the large man swung an empty arm out in a wide arc, slamming into Mel’drin. The mage stumbled, and slammed into a stack of wooden crates, causing many to fall and crash onto the cobblestone.

He recovered, scrambling to his feet. Just in time for a fist to slam into his abdomen, knocking the wind out of him.



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Kisaik sat astride Agatafral as the white-scaled pygmy drake flew through the air over Almund.
Almund was a good place for the Green Knights to find work. Always a poor unfortunate needing a hand up, or else a dastardly villain needing a knock down. This day, Kisaik felt was no different. And as the bright light flashed from the nearby alleyway, Agatafral quarked curiously.

"Yes, I think something is going on down there. I wonder what caused that light?" Kisaik said, as he turned his drake's flight direction in the way of that show of brilliance. "Shall we investigate?"

The drake said nothing, but did a diving roll as it flew into the alleyway with agility, and swooped down toward the brilliant show of light. A few fathoms away from the commotion, Kisaik could see what was transpiring. A few rough-hands were beating what looked like an ordinary citizen. While Kisaik was no judge of intent, he could see who the aggressors were by dint of their eagerness to pound him into the crates.

Kisaik urged Agatafral onward, and just as he reached range of the largest brute, he leapt off. Agatafral was sent on his way, up on a ledge to observe, but Kisaik was blinking into action, using his magic to teleport here or there as needed.

He shouted his challenge, his threat bolstered by the
Serpent's Hood
. Attack me if you dare, base villains! Leave that one alone, and try someone with actual mettle!"

The largest of the bruisers stared dumbly at the tunawa on his shoulder for a moment, and muttered, "It's that twig, Chip whatshisface."

"What manners, sir! I am...."

SWAT!

But Kisaik blinked away as the man's hand came down on his own shoulder, bruising it. He began reciting his full title, in his native tongue of Xanthean.

"Mädärä Kisaik Ciuruọrun sọ Kufuata" He blinked to the red-head's forehead, clinging there for a few moments, only to blink out as his fellow punched the red-head in the face. The fist made contact with bone, breaking the knuckles in his lower hand. Kisaik reappeared on the hand as it recoiled from the impact, and then it came forward to smack the wall, and hopefully crush the Tunawa under its force" Karo Kashe Däuä, Tìfmi Härumtä sọ anou Faewun Samuwar,"

He blinked just before the man could punch the wall, and he did so with full force, missing Kisaik easily. "Obavi sọ tẹlẹ, igbaradi sọ anou tabi ọludïbọ," The man's hand was now thoroughly hurting from the abuse he'd put it through, and he ran down the alleyways, fleeing.

The larger bruiser shouted after him. "Coward!" And began stomping on the ground, trying to hit the tunawa, but Kisaik was too fast at blinking, having perfected the technique over many long arcs "Saoire's chieja kẹmïkälï kukïrï, Kuzïngätïä Kore," Blink, "Akoko Nọọsi, qy’akot o'Creede, ar Yeztlik'o' Nïtọsï Ẹrẹkẹ."

The red haired thug was rubbing his face, where the other had hit him, and giving obvious thoughts to this fight. Here, his back was turned to Mel'drin, giving the former slave a good opportunity to finish the fight.

Meanwhile the Bruiser was losing his anger, redness flushing his face as he attempted in vain to squash the tunawa.
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Kisaik's full titles and name translate in Xanthean, roughly to: Sir Kisaik Dark Bark, Orange Knight of the Fairy Court, Hand killer, Warden of the First Tree, Saoire's Brave Story speaker, Freer of Flame, family of Creede, and Father of Sweet Stone

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Mel'drin was trying to catch his breath as a voice called out to his assailants. He whispered between gasps, "Hey! I got plenty of mettle, thank you very much," before wheezing loudly.

Looking up, the mages eyes widened to find a Tunawa appear on the shoulder of the man that had just gut punched him. The Sev'ryn felt a twinge of shame as he struggled to decipher his own mother tongue, Xanthea. It only came in bits and pieces as Kisaik said his name. His masters had discouraged the Sev'ryns native tongue, and so it slowly died out among Mel'drins family.

The thugs quickly turned on the small creature at his prompting. Mel'drin frantically searched for a weapon, and snatched up a broken slab of wood from the crates he had just been thrown into. Swiveling back to the scuffle, he watched in amazement for a moment as Kisaik teleported around the thugs and directed their own attacks to hurt themselves and each other.

Another mage? It had to be. What else would allow someone to do that. A paranoid voice inside urged him to reach for Attunement, and to scramble his frequency to avoid magical intrusion. Who knows what other things this Tunawa could do, after all, or what his intentions were.

He shook his head, thrusting the thoughts aside. This Kisaik had just saved his coin purse. The least he could do was focus and help. Besides, his savior had just made an opening for some pay back.

As the red haired man recovered from Kisaiks onslaught, Mel'drin gripped tightly to the wooden plank with both hands. Rushing the man with his back turned, Mel'drin swung the piece of wood at the back of his head. Hard.

There was a sickening KUNK as the wood hit skull, and he staggered, letting out a low groan. Mel'drin loomed over the man with fire in his eyes. With a solid kick to the back, the thief fell over, clutching his head on the ground. The idea of swiping the mans coins crossed Mel'drins mind, though he pushed the thought aside. There was sill one more to deal with. He settled for slamming his foot into the mans chest, for good measure. The thief laid still after that.

Unconcerned for the fallen red head, Mel'drin raced toward the larger brute who was currently trying to -- unsuccessfully -- squash the Tunawa. His eyes darkened as he reared back his make-shift weapon. All the anger he felt from being pummeled poured into this strike. Distracted by Kisaik as he was, the large man glanced over just in time to catch a wooden plank to the face.


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The big bruiser lifted his boot, and then unceremoniously stomped down on the poor tunawa that had dared challenge the gang. For a moment it seemed the tree-folk knight had met his end but if Mel'drin was paying careful attention, he'd note that the brute's foot was flat, flush with the cobbles of the ground. And then, of course Mel'drin's attack with the piece of lumber connected solidly, busting the brute's skull. Mel'drin had a moment to collect himself, as many of the others had already fled or been defeated by then, and were in the process of crawling away.

He'd hear a voice near his ear, as the tunawa had materialized right on his shoulder. "Well struck, my good man!" Kisaik put his hands on his hips as he stood astride the Sev'ryn.

"Now, where were we?" Kisaik tapped his chin. "Ah yes... I'm Kisaik as I said, but my tall folk friends call me Chip, if you like."

"You look quite strong, actually now I get a good look at you, but even the strong can be chanced upon and cornered."

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descended back onto a nearby awning, peering curiously down at the two. "Looks like there was a bit of a arcane discharge around here." Kisaik said, nodding to the sniffer drake. Then he turned to face Mel'drin, "You didn't see anything, did you? I rather worry if there's a hostile mage lying in wait..."

So having said this, Kisaik searched his immediate sphere, of about twenty feet, trying to suss out any potential hiding mages or illusioned traps. However he didn't find anything. He shrugged, "No matter I suppose! Do you require directions to safety, my good sir?"


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Mel'drin

It's always a shame to see a thread drop off, especially ones with such well written characters on both counts. Nonetheless, I understand things happen and just hope you can enjoy the rewards you have earned and find the time some day to return and have some more fun.

Your posts were really immersive and I liked the depth with which you wrote the thugs even though they were transient NPCs.

Nice writing and good posts. I hope to see you posting again some time.
  • Renown: 5
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    • Stealth: Blending with a Crowd
    • Detection: Looking for Danger
    • Meditation: Using Words to Focus
    • Transmutation: Brilliance
    • Deception: They Can't Block What They Don't See
    • Strength: Giving a Swing All You Got

Kisaik

It's always a shame to see a thread drop off, especially ones with such well written characters on both counts. Nonetheless, I understand things happen and just hope you can enjoy the rewards you have earned.

I found myself, as I so often do, with a slowly spreading smile as Kisiak teleported around the place mid sentence. I really love the way you write him and his character always shines through and cheers me up.

Thanks for a good thread! I look forward to finding out what gets added to his title next!
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  • Knowledges:
    • Combat: Blades: x2
    • Mount: x2
    • Athletics: x2

Winston's Catch of the Day is YOU!


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When standing at his full height, Winston towers a full 1 foot and one blueberry tall. A fact he will happily demonstrate before flicking said blue orb into the air with his nose and then eating it with a snappy grin.

His eyes are dark and sharp, ringed by dark brown fur upon the bright white fur that sets off across the rest of his face.

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Winston usually carries the following on his person:
  • Cassion's Locket hangs snugly around his neck.
  • Winston's Fairy Bell hangs from his tool-belt attached to his hip. It's 'ringer' is often bound by a small piece of cloth to prevent it giving away his position while in the wilderness.

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