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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: At the Bottom of a Tankard
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence - Contact: Agneta Stormsdotter, former assistant to a powerful noblewoman
Intelligence - Agneta Stormsdotter: Knows the business workings of her former boss
Intelligence: Make sure to get names
Intelligence - Agneta Stormsdotter: Knows local politics well
Intelligence - Agneta Stormsdotter: Fancies her former boss
Storytelling: The Tale of Agneta Stormsdotter's Boss

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Frigid Arrival
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Abra has brand knowledge to get to Viden
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Empathy: By severing similar emotions from multiple people, a Nexus can be formed
Empathy: Knot or hem emotions in your own tangle to avoid being affected by a Nexus
Empathy: Having some expertise in weaving may be useful
Weaving: A simple knot is not very strong
Meditation: Multitasking empathy and talking
Discipline: Stick to the plan

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Probably not
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: empathy requested for discovering a new technique (Nexus)
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Escort to Syns
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Abra has brand knowledge to get to his home in Melrath
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Fall into a meditative state
Discipline: Be honest with superiors, it pays off
Discipline: It isn’t all about me
Discipline: Emotions left unchecked can be dangerous
Attunement: Note of a person
Attunement: Note of a bird

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Probably not
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Attunement for reading frequencies for the first time
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Rei'sari
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: [Starter Quest] Language Lessons Part 1
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Detection: the importance of being aware of one's surroundings
Endurance: trying to focus on learning while in considerable pain
Endurance: the pain of a blow to the head
Linguistics: Athart has a complex situation; two languages spoken in one city; Dehasin and Lorien
Linguistics: Dehasin and Lorien are examples of languages that are used primarily by the people of one city rather than having been originated in a wider area
Unarmed Combat; Brawling: anything goes...including sneaking up on someone and attacking them from behind

Non Skill Knowledges

Language: Dehasin
Dehasin: originated in Athart
Dehasin: a spoken language
Dehasin: spoken by the slaves in Athart
Dehasin: a difficult language to learn
Dehasin: is a rare language since it is primarily spoken only in one city by one group of people
Dehasin: alphabet
Dehasin: numbers
Dehasin: proper terms of address and personal pronouns
Dehasin: sentence structure
Dehasin: question words
Dehasin: conjugating verbs

Language: Haltunga
Haltunga: a spoken and written language
Haltunga: originated in Uthaldria
Haltunga: used by the Lotharro
Haltunga: alphabet
Haltunga: numbers
Haltunga: conjugating verbs
Haltunga: sentence structure
Haltunga: question words
Haltunga: proper terms of address and personal pronouns

Race: Lotharro
Lotharro: male only
Lotharro: giants
Lotharro: there is no such thing as a mixed blooded Lotharro
Lotharro: Lotharro men take women from other species, and when they do, most of the resulting children are Lotharro

NPC: Hathelrri
Hathelrri: is a Lotharro
Hathelrri: is Vyndar's friend
Hathelrri: works for Vyndar

NPC: Ryl'ryn
Ryl'ryn: is half Sev'ryn and half Avriel
Ryl'ryn: is skilled with languages

NPC: Vyndar Lavarnian
Vyndar Lavarnian: is an Avriel
Vyndar Lavarnian: a friend of her birth father's
Vyndar Lavarnian: Ari'sora's captor
Vyndar Lavarnian: wants to hear her life story played out on the glass flute; he wants the music to make him feel what she felt, and he wants it to be good
Vyndar Lavarnian: will not free Ari'sora until he gets what he wants

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: an aching head from when she was knocked out earlier that trial; it should fade within a few trials
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Rei'sari was formerly Ari'sora, but after getting a fresh start in life and a new appearance from Vega, she changed her name to Rei'sari.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Feral
City/Area: Yarlon, Bastards Grove
Notes/Warnings: Combat, Gross necro bear
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Attunement: Note - Starvation
Attunement: Checking if an enemy spotted a trap
Hone: Bestowment mutation draws runes on allies
Hone: Overloading the rune of sight to hurt an enemy
Shield (Tower Shield): Keeping an enemy from biting you
Shield (Tower Shield): Kicking at a shield to throw an enemy offf

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: In a later thread
Renown: Up to you
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, Hone and Attunement
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: A day without magic
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Note not being treated for dream credit, if that was any concern
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Reacting to shock
Discipline: Not thumping someone when you really want to.
Discipline: Dealing with boredom
Discipline: Understanding what you want, and why
Discipline: Avoid giving in to temptation.
Meditation: Spending an entire day without using magic

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: 3. Stasis
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Discipline: Doing something that frightens you can build character.
Endurance: Getting killed hurts.
Endurance: Having your body mangled by abrogative force.
Endurance: Rising from the dead.
Flying: Flying straight into a dangerous situation, using adrenaline to push oneself.
Strength: Holding onto a cross with all one's might.

Loot: -1 Ring of Reversal after death
Injuries/Overstepping: Body perfectly restored after death, but one last mutation afflicted his wings, turning them from white to crimson. He loses his Abrogation and necromancy spark, All pending on a PSF ticket. Plot was approved by Maltruism.
Renown: +15-20 for neutralizing the etherstorm, and preventing the spread of Aloplumia.
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

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Eldyn Morose
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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Feed to the Panthers
City/Area: Merk Pass/ Viden
Notes/Warnings: Animal death
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Wald
Endurance: Large claws
Strength: Strangling a Large cat
Strength: Holding onto a cat
Resistance: Large claws
Resistance: Cat blood
Resistance: Pardus Blood
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: Reviewer's choice
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The King in His Counting House...
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Nah


Hart
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Answering questions without really answering
Deception: Lies of omission
Deception: Not knowing the answer yourself
Detection: Surveying a room
Detection: Questioning someone's motives
Detection: Getting a bad vibe
Persuasion: Offering different options
Persuasion: Attempting to find a resolution
Endurance: Being tired and hungry

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
PC: Soren Kvistson
Soren Kvistson: Owns the Ox's Bellow Tavern
Location: Melrath
Location: Ox's Bellow Tavern, Raelia
Location: Raelia, Melrath's capital city
Raelia: Culture: The poor stay outside the city

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Medium, for being wanted, name being spread.
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)


Soren
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Cleaning so your employees don't have to
Business Management: Conducting an interview
Business Management: Putting bounties out on criminals
Business Management: Not allowing your business to be disrespected
Intelligence - Contact: Hart Eda'quoat, the thief who stole coffee
Intelligence - Hart Eda'quoat: Is a sailor
Intelligence - Hart Eda'quoat: Is from Rynmere
Intelligence - Hart Eda'quoat: Is poor
Intelligence - Hart Eda'quoat: Has a magic book

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Medium, for putting out a bounty.
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Price of a Man
City/Area: Merky Pass/ Viden
Notes/Warnings: Selling of a person
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Wald
Endurance: Cutting hand
Resistance: Cut on hand
Resistance: Ice water
Resistance: Ice cube pelting
Strength: Pulling chains on arm
Strength: Pulling chains on legs
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: A cut on the hand
Renown: Reviewer's choice
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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