Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Vengeance
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Fight to the death
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades (Katana): Diagonal Slash
Resistance: Being affected by gas that makes you dizzy
Resistance: Being affected by nerve agent
Endurance: Getting singed by acid
Acrobatics: Dodging an attack from behind
Medicine: Stopping bleeding by applying pressure

Loot: Good quality dagger
Injuries/Overstepping: gash in right arm, short term side effects of some poisons
Renown: 10-15, fight to the death with someone who's preyed on and killed yaralon citizens outside of the duel system
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
word count: 97
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: A Weaver among Warriors
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Woe is retired
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Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
word count: 23
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Quality People
City/Area: Quacia, the Gleam
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
Bonesong: Fantasia
Transmutation: Quality: The Force of an Explosion
Transmutation: Quality: The Combustion of a Flame
Transmutation: Pathway
Transmutation: Pathways cannot travel between multiple conflicting materials in a line
Transmutation: Forging Qualities into a Pathway

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes - For Transmutation
word count: 69
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Do I Make You Proud, Kielik?
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Lucid Dream. Character development. Graphic horror and emotional trauma. Very uncomfortable imagery.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Nitahi: Corruptive Influence: Imparting a Corruption
Nitahi: Corruptive Infleunce: Designing Moderate Corruption: Infested Body Hallucinations
Nitahi: Corruptive Influence: Corruptions Last Into The Waking World
Intimidation: Scaring Someone Awake
Intimidation: Wearing An Insectile Visage
Meditation: Questioning A Dismal Reality


Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: 10-15, for giving someone a nasty Corruption they're going to remember for the rest of their life.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience?: Dreamwalking Thread
word count: 97
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: [Uthaldria] Guardian
City/Area: Western Heights (Uthaldria)
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Becoming: Totem Guardian: Capable of feeling.
Becoming: Totem Guardian: Needs to breath, not immortal.
Becoming: Totem Guardian: Can understand speech as well as communicate
Becoming: Totem Guardian: Can't use magic.
Becoming: Totem Guardian: You can't use Echo on your guardian.
Endurance: Spending the entire trial playing with your kid can be tiring.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None yet.
Renown: 5 - Slight. Entertaining the neighbour's child with master level magic maybe? idk.
Collaboration: Nope, all alone.
Magic Experience?: Fridgar learned a lot about becoming but didnt really push his limits, I'm not sure if that warrants magic XP.
word count: 118
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Magnetic Men
City/Area: Quacia, the Gleam
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
Transmutation: Quality: Magnetic Pull
Transmutation: One can match magnetic fields
Transmutation: Quality: The Smoothness of Stone
Transmutation: Pathway: Instilling effects along the Path
Unarmed Combat: Catching a foe by the bottom amidst a tackle

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes - For Transmutation
word count: 68
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: Nightmare of the Veil
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Lucid Dreaming in the Veil. Graphic horror and emotional trauma. Very uncomfortable imagery.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Nitahi: Stuff of Nightmares (Minor): Thrusting A Nightmare Beast Into a Dreamscape
Nitahi: Stuff of Nightmares (Minor): Puppeting A Nightmare Beast From The Veil
Nitahi: Corruptive Influence: Powerful Corruptions Limited In Number
Nitahi: Corruptive Influence: Remote Corruption Via Nightmare Beast
Dreamwalking: Stepping Into the Veil
Dreamwalking: Dreamscapes

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: 5-10 for giving someone a minor Corruption and a bad dream
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience?: Dreamwalking Thread
word count: 98
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: [Uthaldria] The hard truth
City/Area: Western Heights, Uthaldria.
Notes/Warnings: Strong language I guess.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Becoming: Totem Guardian: Cannot be adapted.
Becoming: Totem Guardian: Cannot assimilate other totems.
Becoming: Totem Guardian: You can summon the form you've currently taken.
Becoming: Totem Guardian: Extremely costly, you can only manage one at a time.
Becoming: Totem Guardian: A rigid ability that doesn't play well with other abilities.
Endurance: Pushing through the strain of overstepping to debate with your totem.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: A headache, heavy overstepping.
Renown: None, probably.
Collaboration: Nope.
Magic Experience?: Yep.
word count: 102
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: The Finest Clay
City/Area: Quacia, the plenty
Notes/Warnings: It's a memory thread, of Rakvald's initiation into graft. He's already been initiated, though. Just wanted to score some knowledge of initiation process.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Graft: The initiates meal grown from the flesh of a master.
Graft: During initiation, the meal must be retched up, and festers as it changes hands from master to apprentice.
Graft: Takes about five bits at novice level to manipulate one's own flesh.
Graft: Sometimes unintended effects turn into witchmarks.
Graft: The meal is actually the spark fracturing within the master, to plant a seed in the novice.
Discipline: Keeping your meal down through sheer willpower.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Witchmark in the form of a pig's snout on his right hand.
Renown: I dunno. This thread was a memory from a previous life, so maybe not.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes - Graft.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.9

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Thread Name: The Weab Dream Chronicles: Part 1
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Just a weird, probably confusing, asian-themed dream. Some references to prostitution and drugs, I think. I'll be chronicling the adventures of Shen Saga across multiple dreams, because y not. This one has a part two.
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
N/A

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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word count: 73
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