Review Requests 2.2.6

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Oram Mednix
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Retiarii and other hard to pronounce warriors
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Mild violence. Old movie references. Decided to do a thread in conjunction with the Combat Festival in which some visiting martial artists from Korlasir exhibit some historical gladiatorial fighting styles.
Skills Used: Detection (Master), Athletics (Expert), Tactics (Competent), Linguistics (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Whips & Flails x 1
Blades x 1
Polearms x 1
Shield x 1
Tactics x 1
[Linguistics] Atvian is one of the most commonly spoken languages in the Eternal Empire.

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: No.
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Reviewing Hastati
Last edited by Oram Mednix on Thu Feb 03, 2022 6:26 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 110
Villains are powerless against story beats.
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Tristan Venora
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Adamantite and Tienite
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: The ingots were a gift from Kirei. Pig Boy modnoted a description of Tristan's new weapon; I incorporated that discription into the last post. I only requested 5 knowledges on purpose.
Skills Used: GM Etiquette (250x/91k), GM Alchemy (250x/92k), Master Socialization (151x/133k), Expert Detection (77x/38k), Expert Discipline (76x/25k), Competent Ranged (26x/11k)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat (Ranged): Pistol crossbows can be cocked without external devices
Detection: Traces of ether trailing through someone’s goggles
Ensorcelling: Welldust needs to be added to the molten metal
Ensorcelling: Enables you to transfer supernatural powers to natural objects
Etiquette: Don’t just touch things in a shop

Loot:
- A tienite pistol crossbow of masterwork+ quality
- 30 adamantite bolts

Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: Tristan provided the ingots; for that reason he shouldn't have to spend any WP.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Oram Mednix
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Everything’s coming up snowses
City/Area: (just outside) Scalvoris Town.
Notes/Warnings: This is a conclusion of a story of Oram’s participation in the Winter Festival started here.
Skills Used: Business Management, Socialization (both Competent). Hunting (GM), Athletics (Expert), Discipline, Detection, Fieldcraft (all Master).

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

[Business Management] A good trade benefits both parties.
[Caregiving] Recognizing when somebody is uncomfortably cold.
[Fieldcraft] Ice cleats.
[Hunting] (Fishing) Make sure your fishing hole is the right size.
[Logistics] Organizing and supervising festival events can take a lot of manpower, especially if the activities are potentially dangerous.
[Swimming] Ice swimming is dangerous, even for swimmers in good health.

Loot: A pair of strap-on ice cleats.
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer’s Discretion
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: No.

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: Darn
City/Area: Rharne, Eureka
Notes/Warnings:

Skills used: Needlecraft (nov), Fieldcraft (mast), Socialisation (comp), Detection (comp), Animal Husbandry (comp), Woodworking (comp), Discipline (comp)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Needlecraft: turning a hem
Needlecraft: tacking stitches
Needlecraft: darning a hole
Logistics: rationing out scarce supplies
Socialisation: paying attention to a lesson
Cooking: venison stew


Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: No
Magic: No
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Zana
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: ~~~~A Stitch in Time~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread.
Zana

Skills Used: Seduction (GM) Deception (Master) Investigation (Novice) Intelligence (Novice)

Knowledge:
Seduction x 4
Intelligence x 2
Investigation x 2

Renown: If applicable, yes please!!!

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: ~~~~Hail, I Bid You Welcome~~~~~~~
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread.
Zana

Skills Used: Seduction (GM) Deception (Master) Investigation (Novice) Intelligence (Novice)

Knowledge:
Deception x 5
Intelligence x 3

Renown: If applicable, yes please!!!

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

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Thread Name: The Great Smooglenuff Bonfire, Part 1
City/Area: Faldrass/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Calendar event. Aidan is a Personal NPC. Mrs. Adams and Marvin are Smooglenuff Manor NPCs.
Skills Used: GM Cosmetology (250x/88k), GM Socialization (250x/143k), Expert Logistics (76x/25k), Expert Leadership (76x/32k), Expert Cooking (76x/65k), Novice Writing (20x/19k), 0 Art

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Art: An extremely crude drawing of a bonfire
Cosmetology: A pirate and dragon inspired look
Leadership: It’s a good idea to thank your employees with more than just words sometimes
Logistics: Organizing a Cylus Dusk celebration
Logistics: A noticeboard makes organizing things easier
Socialization: It’s easier to persuade people if you offer to help

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Welcome to the Jungle
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scaloth Jungle
Notes/Warnings: Balthazar has been approved to have his paradigm removed. This thread is the second of a few to explore the task he was given by Vri following Vri's wedding. In this thread Balthazar takes the supplies he bought from the Spirit of Adventure and the crew Robin helped assemble into the Scaloth under the guide of Gaul Jundland. This thread follows them entering the Scaloth and their first day of hiking along water to get where they intended to be. There will be more threads to explore the further difficulty getting through the jungle and back. This is a requested resubmit of a thread that was previously submit for review which needed alterations.
Balthazar Skills Used: Defiance (Master), Investigation (GM), Detection (GM), Meditation (Master), Discipline (Master), Athletics (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Logistics (Expert), Socialization (Master), Fieldcraft (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Fieldcraft - Hang supplies from trees to protect them
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: Either -1 WP now for Gaul Jundland's services or I will deduct it at the end of the series.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: None.
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Claimed for review
word count: 205

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Clavam
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: While the Hounds are Away, the Sheep will Stray
City/Area: Etzos Forbidden Post/Spit
Notes/Warnings: Language, not much else.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Clavam
Intelligence: x 2
Leadership: Gauging the mood among your party.
Leadership: Considering the background and proclivities of your party, to better understand how to lead them.
Stealth: x 2
Skillplay
Novice: Intelligence, Leadership, Stealth
Competent: Tactics.

Loot: His own dossier from Bassett's Office.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Elisabeth Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.6

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Cylus Checklist
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: All npcs are approved and listed here and here. The update to Munny Farm has been approved, just not added to locations yet. This is Elisabeth's Zi'da 721 Wealth Thread.

Skills Used:
Leadership - Grandmaster
Socialization - Grandmaster
Logistics - Expert
Gardening - Competent
Discipline - Master
Teaching - Competent

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership x 2
Logistics x 2
Gardening x 1
Teaching x 1

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: No


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