Review Requests 2.2.6

[Seira Shiryu]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Keeping House is more than Household Chores
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Cooking: Novice (25/250, 9 knowledges), Detection: Competent (26/250, 11 knowledges), Logistics: Unskilled (0/250, 4 knowledges), Medicine: Expert (51/250 44 knowledges),

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill Knowledges

Cooking; Ingredient: Basil
Cooking; Ingredient: herb infused oil
Logistics: sometimes a skill in one area can be of use in another
Medicine; herb: uses of basil
Medicine; herb: fresh basil is best for herbal remedies because the oils that produce most of the medical benefits are delicate and weaken when the plant is dried
Medicine; herb: people who have blood that is slow to clot should not take basil because it slows clotting; it can also lower blood pressure so people who have dangerously low blood pressure shouldn't take it either
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Rakvald]

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[Tristan Venora]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Mistral's Jealousy
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: I'm writing about a consequence. Hannah is a Personal NPC.
Skills Used: Master Socialization, Expert Detection, Competent Art, Competent Cosmetology

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology: Cleaning your face with a toner
Art: Using stencils
Art: Painting on wood slices
Art: Don’t use the same sponge for different paints
Art: Using glitter to make your artwork shimmer
Art: Using varnish to set your image

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Rakvald]

Adult Forum Dream Thread review request

Warnings: Violence, language, organ removal, dismemberment.

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: When You Were Here Before...
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town, Docks
Notes/Warnings: This is the third in a series I am writing which follows Balthazar hunting the serial killer Riverboat John. It features Element NPCs Osmond and Hercule. The trio of detectives follow the lead they found by taking a witness's memory in the last thread which leads them to question people at the Four in Hand and then the docks. Not claiming full knowledge for this one.
Skills Used: Investigation (GM), Intelligence (GM), Detection (GM), Discipline (Master), Meditation (Master), Socialization (Master), Psychology (Expert), Bellinos (Adored)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None.
Loot: A suspicious suspect?!
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Rakvald]

Review Request

Thread Name: Between a Rock and a Hard Place
City/Area: Forbidden Spit, Etzos.
Notes/Warnings: dog bite.
Skills Used:

Novice: Fieldcraft, Resistance.
Competent: Detection, Meditation, Animal Husbandry, Intimidation.
Expert: Combat: Unarmed, Discipline, Medicine, Endurance, Strength, Hunting.
Master: Graft, Animal Training.


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Animal Training: Wrestling with a shadowhound to show it who's boss!
Animal Training: Learning the hard way that you're not the boss of the shadowhound.
Animal Training: Failing to assert dominance with a predator won't win them over.
Detection: Noticing that you're not quite alone.
Endurance: Enduring a dog bite.
Intimidation: Snarling to posture as a fearsome opponent.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: Healed by the end of the thread with Graft magic.
Renown: Well he joins the Forbidden Post... maybe?
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Not significant enough for graft advancement.

[Rakvald]

Review Request

Thread Name: A Matter of Palate
City/Area: Forbidden Post
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used:

Novice: Mining, Transmutation, Smithing, Appraisal, Intelligence, Ensorcelling.
Competent: Detection, Meditation.
Expert: Discipline.


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Intelligence: Keeping in the know about important personages, such as Lord Karnos Vuda.
Ensorcelling: Refined wells can be consumed for ether.
Transmutation: Denaturing a material in order to either identify or imprint it with Qualities.
Transmutation: Quality: The Opacity/darkness of onyx.
Transmutation: Quality: The Durability of Embersteel.
Transmutation: Alteration: Changing the qualities of lead.

Loot: nothing.
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, transmutation. he used it throughout the thread.

[Elisabeth Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Catching Up
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope - Just Balth and Elisa doing their thing. Balth uses his new boots (The Boots of Dasher) awarded here.

Balthazar

Skills Used:
Unarmed Combat (GM)
Detection (GM)
Blades (Expert)
Strength (Expert)
Endurance (Expert)
Athletics (Expert)
Discipline (Expert)
Teaching (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades x 3
Teaching x 2

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion

Elisabeth

Skills Used:
Unarmed Combat (Expert)
Detection (Master)
Blades (Master)
Strength (Expert)
Endurance (Master)
Athletics (Expert)
Discipline (Master)
Tactics (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Athletics - Preserving momentum from one move to the next
Blades x 3
Discipline x 1
Endurance - Holding on to the blade after your arm is paralyzed
Strength - x 1
Tactics - Sparring vs real combat differences and how tactics is applied

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: Yes

[Rakvald]

Review Request

Thread Name: Rakvald Steel-Eyes
City/Area: Forbidden Post, Etzos.
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used:

Novice: Appraisal, Smithing, Logistics, Transmutation.
Competent: Detection, Meditation.
Expert: Discipline, Endurance.


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Smithing: Preparing a harness for holding a metal plate armor.
Smithing: Casting metal.
Smithing: Heat treating a metal for hardness.
Transmutation: Quality: The transparency of glass.
Transmutation: Identify: a technique used to figure out the qualities of materials.
Transmutation: Flaws: Off-color tinting to a transparent quality.

Loot:

Purchased: a good set of tier 8 cobalt plate armor + good quality embersteel warhammer. Both should be available from within his current tier.
Crafted: A pair of basic quality embersteel lenses for his armored mask. Quality Imbued: Transparency. Flaw Imbued: Red-Orange Tinted transparency.

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Dunno
Wealth Points: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: He doesn't have enough knowledge at the start of this thread to level-up and is maxed out on novice xp.

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Princess of Fection
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: The book is a reward from here. It gives you a language of your choice at Conversational. I chose Vahanic.
Skills Used: GM Meditation (250x/80k), GM Detection (250x/118k), GM Endurance (250x/62k), GM Strength (250x/66k), Expert Linguistics (76x/26k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: The smell of caramel
Detection: Noticing that the fireplace is still warm
Linguistics: Vahanic: A gentle language with light accenting
Linguistics: Vahanic: Has largely phonemic spelling
Meditation: Being in a calm environment makes it easier to meditate
Strength: Shoveling snow

Loot: Conversational Vahanic
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no