{Bayward} An Eye for Details [Mature]

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Zasalamir
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{Bayward} An Eye for Details

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He laughed at Jon's dismay to Hob spilling Jon's desire. It was hilarious to see him flustered as such, but his amusement faded once Jon explained his dealing with his past. To think that this man had been toiling away with such a grave past. Zasalamir knew fully well what drugs could do to a man, how it can brake them, control them, dilute and pollute their souls. It was one of the reasons why Zasalamir made the type of drugs he did. Addictive but wont kill you if you overdose, simply put you a temporary coma. Alas he took the man's face and pulled him in to kiss him. He understand the strength one would need in order to kick the vice.
"Who knew Jonathan Burr had such remarkable strength to turn away from such a euphoric vice, I'm impressed to say the least."
Saying this as he continued in the affection with Jon. When invited to Jonathan's home, he smiled and nodded, not needing words to express him wanting to go. It was killing two birds with one stone, getting to know Jon, and establishing a foot hold for his business. This was truly a grand opportunity for Zasalamir. He could potentially achieve his goals if things worked out well with Jon, which he wanted to. Knowing this Zasalamir would make sure to keep Jon out of danger and away from the drugs. He wouldn't forgive himself if that man relapsed because of him. He couldn't help but smile at the man, hoping this chance meeting would turn out for his good in the end.


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{Bayward} An Eye for Details

Here's your sarding thread review already.
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Jonathan Burr

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XP:
15 | These points cannot be used for magic.

Renown:
+5 Word gets around, especially where public indecency is involved.

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Skill Knowledge:
Seduction: Displaying one's beauty
Seduction: At ease with one's body
Seduction: Easing into a kiss
Seduction: Like what you see?
Seduction: Touch what you like
Seduction: Unable to keep your hands off someone.
Seduction: Entranced by understanding.
Seduction: Giving a first kiss
Discipline: Resisting the urge to use a connection
Discipline: Waiting until you're in private
Discipline: Resisting the urge to jump someone's bones
Teaching: Educating someone in Aberration
Teaching: Educating someone about mutations
Teaching: Educating someone about Transmutation

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Zasalamir

Points

XP:
15 | These points cannot be used for magic.

Renown:
+5 Word gets around, especially where public indecency is involved.

Goodies

N/A

Consequences

N/A

Knowledges

Skill Knowledge:
Seduction: Walking naked on the beach
Seduction: Telling your lovers what they need to hear
Seduction: Displaying one's body
Seduction: A first kiss
Discipline: Backtracking from a lip slip
Discipline: Watching what you say
Discipline: Not revealing your plans too early
Detection: Feeling out mages
Detection: Reading in to people's words
Detection: Paying attention to one's surroundings
Detection: A weight on a man's soul coming out in his voice
Meditation: Confidence in one's own body
Meditation: At peace with oneself
Meditation: Recognizing chaos in others
Meditation: Staying near the ocean

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First, I'm a bit of a conservative when it comes to what happens in a thread before I slap a [Mature] tag on it, and while this is ... mild, I'd still recommend whoever posted first making that change.

Otherwise, this is an unusual and interesting meeting on the beach. Stuff like this certainly doesn't happen every day, and I sort of giggled at your dialogue of shock and interest, touching and oogling. Haha.
Now that your review is complete,
don’t forget go back to your review post here and drop this image in!
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Be not afraid of greatness:
Some are born great, some achieve greatness,
And some have greatness thrust upon 'em.

- Malvolio | Shakespeare's Twelf Night (II, v, 156-159)
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