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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Honest Faces & Common Colds
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: A dreaded, nonsensical, boring solo. And weird descriptions of paranoia
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine: Common herb uses
Medicine: Foods for common ailments
Medicine: Caring for common ailments
Research: Studying from texts
Acting: Trying to pretend not to be nervous
Stealth: Trying to sneak out of a library

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: NA
Renown: NA
Wealth Points: NA
Collaboration: NA
Magic Experience?: NA
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: 1.4 The Second Offer
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: conversation and set-up thread. Llyr is wearing Ring of Paradigm (no mutations).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Negotiation: Blind approval of whatever price the other party sets.
Negotiation: Purposefully placing yourself to seem like the disadvantaged party.
Negotiation: Build strong relationships to ensure mutually beneficial deals.
Negotiation: Understanding the Value in Opportunity.
Negotiation: Stating what's in it for them.
Business Management: Sharing plans with a prospective employee.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5 (helping out at the orphanage)
Wealth Points: Vhalar Wealth Thread.

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Last edited by Llyr Llywelyn on Wed Nov 20, 2019 4:12 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 108
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Minute Men
City/Area: Withersfield
Notes/Warnings: Meh
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe
[*]Endurance: Getting hit with armor on doesn't hurt nearly as much.
[*]Discipline: Teaching farmers discipline is a bit like herding cats.
[*]Leadership: Men get bolder with the slighest hint of success.
[*]Leadership: Leading men in a drill.
[*]Politics: Withersfield no longer pays the Sober taxes.
[*]Politics: Withersfield will probably get overrun by the Sober, and replaced by other serfs.
Loot/Losses: just most of what he bought from that blacksmith was left in withersfield.
Injuries/Overstepping: year old thread so who cares
Renown: +10-15 cuz Woe teaches the village of Withersfield self-confidence and prompts them to a poorly advised uprising 0_0
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Last edited by Woe on Wed Nov 20, 2019 4:50 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 132
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Love To Hate
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Blood, Violence, Gore, Language... of the Bad Sort

STABBY TIME!

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Skill Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Sliding On Knees Under Obstacles (or opponents)
Blades (Dagger): Small Size Makes It Easier to Move Quickly
Blades (Dagger): Crippling Stab to Joints
Dual Wielding: Dagger x Dagger
Endurance: All Pain is the Same; The Amount is All That Varies
Tactics - Capstone: Fighting Monstrous Opponents
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Common Speech | Thoughts | Ith'ession Speech | Speech of Others
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: 1.5 Distraction
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: 1 PC + 1 NPC = 1 Conversation! Oh, and Llyr is wearing his Ring of Paradigm (so no mutations showing).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Accepting another's warning.
Persuasion: Tone of voice can be very persuasive.
Persuasion: Charming persistence.
Rhetoric: Implications.
Rhetoric: Pivoting the subject to another.
Seduction: The art of innuendo.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Up to Reviewer.
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: House of Savagery
City/Area: Ne'haer Territories
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe
[*]Fieldcraft: A lean-to is a structure that can shield you from cold and weather.
[*]Fieldcraft: Building a fire with a branch, flint, and kindling.
[*]Intelligence: Toutouye: A mute savage boy, with a knack for survival.
[*]Linguistics: Common Sign: I can't talk.
[*]Linguistics: Common Sign: Pointing at things is a good way to give silent commands.
[*]Resistance: Fighting the cold as you travel the wilderness, covered in grime and damp clothing.
Loot/Losses: nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion
Renown: nah
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: 1.6 Embellishment
City/Area: Pillar of Society, Etzos
Notes/Warnings: NPC Meet-and-greet set-up thread. Llyr is wearing ring of paradigm (no mutations).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
[*] Etiquette: Wealthy women expect something other than a handshake when they hold out their hand in greeting.
[*] Etiquette: Appropriate small talk.
[*] Etiquette: Genuinely answering a new acquaintance's questions.
[*] Seduction: Eye contact to encourage a stranger's curiosity.
[*] Intelligence - Contact: Emeline Holt, daughter of a wealthy Etzori family, who spends her time in the Citadel.
[*] Business Management: Inviting a prospective associate to join an arranged meeting.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5 (conversing in public on the way to the bank, with the daughter of a wealthy family)
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Honing Lightning
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: No warnings.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Hone: Using Palenon as an Ether Source
Hone: Upgrading Hurts
Hone: Your Spark Doesn't Like Flaying
Hone: Alternate Ether Sources
Hone: Using Palenon as an Ether Source Takes Longer.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion, her discovery of Palenon as an alternate Ether Soure might warrant some Renown, but I'm not sure.
Wealth Points: None
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Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, Hone

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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: The Echo of Morandi
City/Area: Yurrova
Notes/Warnings: nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe
[*]Appraisal: Determining the balance and material of a weapon.
[*]Blades (Cane-Sword): Unsheathing the Sword from the case by twisting and pulling.
[*]Blades (Cane-Sword): Can detach from its case, and be concealed as a cane.
[*]Blades (Cane-Sword): The blade of the sword is narrow with a trangular cross section
[*]Blades (Cane-Sword): A hidden weapon.
[*]Blades (Cane-Sword): Can also be used as a bludgeon, either with the case or tucked into the case.
Loot/Losses: Grave Gold Cane-Sword(Masterwork+)
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's discretion
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: -14 wp deducted for the cane-sword. (10 wp for masterwork weapon x 1.35 = 13.5 rounded up to 14)
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Octopie
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Re: Review Request 2.2.2

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Thread Name: Excelsior viewtopic.php?f=326&t=20407
City/Area: Gwalos of Desnind
Notes/Warnings: This is the set up thread to my Maste's Maze quest
Requested Rewards:
Alchemy: Sparkle bomb
Alchemy: Using flint as “ignition”
Alchemy: Distilling salt from ocean water
Alchemy: Be careful with unstable reagents
Mining: Finding flint on a beach
Attunement: Frequency: Flint

Loot: A handful of flint shards
Two sparkle potions

Injuries/Overstepping: None... yet! You just wait for the Maze!
Renown: 0
Wealth Points: 0
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Octopie
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