Miracle Cure (Tei'serin)

Gennadiya talks with Tei'serin about rumors of a miracle herb.

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Kesindir
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Re: Miracle Cure (Tei'serin)

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Gennadiya Lyosha

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Overall a solidly written little piece. I was excited to see the interaction between Gennadiya and Tei'serin, but it didn't work out this time. All in all though, a good job! Enjoy your rewards.

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15

Loot & Renown

0

Injuries

None

Knowledge

No knowledge was requested. Feel free to send me a PM and we can work out what, if any, knowledges you can grab!

Tei'serin Nji'ryn

Overview

It's always sad to see a thread become abandoned for whatever reasons, but the way you picked it back up and ran was creative and well written. I thoroughly enjoyed the story, and the way you describe Tei'serin's actions really paints a picture of the steps she goes through and her mental process while she thinks. Enjoy your rewards!

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15

Loot & Renown

10 - for aiding and healing a sick man as well as for being sought out for your knowledge of herbs.

Injuries

None

Knowledge


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Linguistics: The core aspects of linguistics are syntax, phonetics, and semantics.
Linguistics: Syntax is the set of rules, principles, and processes that govern the structure of sentences in a given language; specifically word order and punctuation.
Linguistics: Every language has rules of syntax. They are the rules which underpin the life of the language, and as such, are extremely slow to change.
Linguistics: Phonetics is the study of the human ability to make and hear sounds which use the vocal organs of speech, especially for producing oral language.
Linguistics: A phoneme is the smallest unit in the sound system of a language.
Linguistics: Someone who studies phonetics is called a phonetician.
Linguistics: Phonology is the study of how languages treat the sounds that are produced as language
Linguistics: Semantics is the study of relationships between words and how we construct meaning; this means the meaning and interpretation of words, signs, and sentence structure.
Linguistics: a linguist is a person who studies linguistics
Medicine: Herbal creams and lotions are water based remedies that contain varying amounts of fat; lotions contain very little fat while creams require more.
Medicine: Herbal salves, balms, and ointments are oil based remedies. Little, or no water is used in making them. They can hold their shape outside the container but may “melt” on contact with body heat. The levels of wax, or lard used in making them determine how solid they are.
Medicine: how to make a poultice
Medicine: how to make an herbal infusion

Non Skill Knowledge

Tei'serin: is interested in learning more languages
Tei'serin: rarely gets a full trial to herself
Tei'serin: has a hard time doing something just for herself
Tar'isa: can recommend books about linguistics
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