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Ymiden's Dawn

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Ymiden 1, Arc 721

Doran had recently returned to Hopetoun; it would be his third stay in his former student Darius Baer’s settlement. He had never thought that he would find peace and comfort in a place that wasn’t covered by ice and snow nearly throughout the arc; Hopetoun had had a most surprising effect on him though. The son of Ziell who had tried to stay away from mortalkind for a certain part of his exceptionally long life had found companionship there, and hope, and even people that might become something like friends in the near future.

Vega Creede who he had first met in the waking world during the Mummer’s Ball in Rharne – before that, they had only seen each other in dreams – had invited him to a feast in Hopetoun, to give thanks for all that had been achieved in their community. It would take place at dusk, an appropriate time for a celebration of hope. Doran found himself looking forward to it, greatly so – he was looking forward to seeing everybody again – but there was something that he wanted to do before that.

He had risen a break before dawn, when the sky was still dark and covered with numerous stars, quietly eaten and drunk something, gotten dressed and draped a cloak across his shoulders before he left the camp, briefly informing one of the few settlers that were awake at such a time where he was going. The risk of bad things happening was next to non-existent – he would be just outside the settlement – but there was always the possibility that someone might have need of his skill as a doctor or as an alchemist.

He didn’t consider it right to just leave, no matter for how long.

Inhaling the clean morning air – he could smell a hint of saltiness due to the ocean being close – the Mortalborn left Hopetoun behind and made his way to the beach, looking left and right as he did so and taking note the changes that the landscape around him had undergone since his last stay. He had last been on Faldrass in the middle of Ashan, in spring. It was summer now, there were more plants, and the harvest season would begin in but a few seven-trials – from what he had heard, the farmers of Scalvoris usually harvested the crops that had been planted during Ashan before the middle of Ymiden.

He arrived at the beach just as the stars finally began to fade – he could see that hints of pink, red and orange had started to appear on the previously dark night sky. Since there was still time, he sat down on the warm orange sand cross-legged and removed an object from the domain bag that he usually carried at his belt when he was travelling outside of Viden; a rainbow-colored shell whose inner surface had been polished until it shimmered like some sort of miniature mirror.

He took a deep breath and then another one and another one, counting them – those breathing exercises helped him attain a state of calm and stabilize his mind, just as much as the sound of the waves that gently crashed against the shore – before he lowered his head in order to focus on the shell that he held in both hands. He focused on the way that it felt – smooth, and slightly cool to the touch – and on the colors, on that and on nothing but that until all the other things around him gradually began to fade into the background, the shell became a source of ceaseless wonder, and there were utter calm, and peace.

He sat there, still as a statue, meditating, holding onto that state of peace, as the sky gradually brightened, the sun slowly appeared from behind the horizon and dawn broke. It was only then that he put the shell away again and rose to his feet in order to move closer to the water in order to carry out the ritual that he had come to the beach for.
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From the Scalvoris calendar:

This trial marks the beginning of the summer season on Scalvoris. At dawn on the first trial, Scalvorians go and stand by a body of water and pour a cupful over their heads, symbolising rebirth and the dawn of a new time. It is considered a time for making big decisions, perhaps affecting change in one's life.
Last edited by Doran on Tue Jun 22, 2021 2:45 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 745

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The son of Ziell took his cloak off, carefully folded it and set it down on the ground. His boots and his socks followed suit; he placed them on top of his cloak. A moment later, he removed his shirt as well. Once upon a time, what had seemed to be a tattoo of a pair of demon wings had covered his back; he had renounced his ties to Syroa and Xiur had removed her mark though. Instead, there was the symbol of a flaming scar in the center of his chest now, the mark of Daia – Xiur’s own mark was still small and barely noticeable at this point.

He said a prayer to both of his new patron Immortals in order to thank them for the companionship and the hope that were part of his life now – before he pulled a metal cup out of his bag and set a foot into the water and then another one and finally bent down in order to fill the cup. He closed his eyes for a few moments and stood completely still, mindful of the importance of the ritual, before he lifted the cup, poured its contents over his head and subsequently turned his gaze towards the horizon, taking note of the fact that the pink, red and orange were starting to make way to a light shade of blue.

“Daia, I thank you for the companionship that I have found here, and in Viden”, he spoke, in a firm and deep tone of voice, with conviction. “Xiur, I thank you for your hope and your forgiveness and for giving me an opportunity to prove myself. Ymiden”, he added, because Daia’s brother was the Immortal of Rebirth and Forgiveness, and because it was his season now. “I thank you, for this dawn of a new time. I will help protect Idalos and try to uphold peace for as long as I live”, he promised before he finally turned away from the ocean.

Once upon a time, he had been convinced that the world was doomed, and that there was little more than hatred and suffering to be found in it – that kind of despair had eventually led to him trying to kill Xiur during the battle at Treid’s Tomb. He had realized that he had been wrong though and tried to make amends, and fight for Idalos – although fighting was probably not entirely the correct word, for violence should never be one's first choice if there were other options in his opinion. He had found forgiveness. For the first time, he thought that he might even be able to forgive himself, in time.

For a long time, he had judged his actions much more harshly than anybody else had judged them.

There would be no more Hero of Oscillus – that man would never make another appearance, ever again – no more misplaced hatred, no more arcane madness, and no more darkness. His Domain of Darkness would remain, but to him, it stood for the sky that was full of stars at night, for a thing of beauty and a source of comfort, rather than for fear, or for evil, or for any of the other stereotypes that people often tended to associate the darkness with. From now on, there would only be that which should have been all along. He would continue that which had begun during the Mummer’s Ball a few seasons prior.

He would serve Idalos, and he would create rather than try to destroy.

With that thought in mind, he finally stepped away from the water, his wet feet leaving dark spots in the sand as he walked, before he wrapped his cloak, a fine garment of silver and black, around his body. He sat down in the sand for a while, calm and relaxed, and let his thoughts wander, remembering the events that had taken place since he had left the frozen plains of Oscillus, since his deepest regret, and eventually the time before.

Eventually, he stood and put his shirt, his socks and his shoes on again (He struggled a bit to remove the sand from his soles.) and made his way back to the settlement though. He walked comparatively slowly at first, just like he had when he had left, observing his surroundings once more, enjoying them, letting them affect him. Eventually, he quickened his pace though. There were a few things that he wanted to do before the start of the feast. He entered Hopetoun again just as the last remnants of dawn disappeared, and the sun became fully visible. More of the settlers were awake now.
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Re: Ymiden's Dawn

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Doran:

Points Awarded: 10
Magic Applicable: No

Knowledges:
  • Detection: A hint of a salty smell in the air
  • Detection: How the sky changes color at sunrise
  • Meditation: Breath counting meditation helps stabilize the mind
  • Meditation: Using a physical focus to negate the outside world
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Notes: Just by this one shorter thread, you can see that Doran's seen and done a lot of things. Things he's proud of and others he's not. He really reflects on himself and sees his errors, which is why he's such a good character in my opinion. You describe his feelings without outright saying them, and we get a glimpse into his thoughts in this one. What he's grateful for, why, that's the kind of thing I love to see. Though shorter this was truly a reflective thread for Doran and I must say it's perfect for the calendar event. thanks for giving me a peaceful read, and as always if there's any questions or concerns my inbox is ever open.
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