[Hopetoun] Going clip-clippety clop on the stair

32nd of Ashan 721

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[Hopetoun] Going clip-clippety clop on the stair

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32nd Ashan, 721

When Vega had been a little girl, her father had sung a song with her.

It was one of those songs where there were two parts - he always took one, her the other. She recalled it, now, as she moved to meet and chat with Mavis, the mouse-cadouri.
I saw a mouse!
Where!?
There on the stair!
Where on the stair!?
Right there! A little mouse with..
clogs on?!
Well, I declare!
Going clip-clippety clop on the stair.
Right there.
To Vega, that song had been delightful and she had to admit to wondering whether Mavis had any clogs. Would that be one of those things which were rude to ask, she wondered. She thought maybe yes, but she wasn't entirely sure. Probably best not then, all things considered. "Wotcha, Mavis," she said, sitting down opposite the small woman. "It's well cold, innit?" Vega smiled and nodded. "You're wrapped up well."

That, Vega thought, was something of an understatement. Mavis had on so many layers and scarves and coats that she resembled the pom-pom on top of Vega's warm wooly hat. Considering that Vega's warm wooly hat was rainbow-striped and had ear flaps which tied under her chin, with a pom-pom on top of it, Vega figured she probably shouldn't be giving fashion advice to anyone. Even Mavis who resembled said pom-pom rather a lot. Though, in fairness, if she was going to give fashion advice to anyone, Mavis would be top of the list.

"So, jewelcraftin' is your thing, I understand," she said. Mavis nodded. "Yes. But also Alchemy, and I work to combine them, often." Vega raised an eyebrow. "Really? I hadn't thought about that. That's clever, that is," Mavis smiled."I've been thinking about your beacon a lot. I think that Professor Doran has the beacon itself covered, but I have two ideas which might help you. Maybe three." Vega smiled at the small mouse and nodded. "I'm well happy to hear them," she said. "Whatever you think."

"Well," said Mavis, and she pointed to a small cut-glass crystal. "I've seen what Professor Doran is doing and I think I can enhance it, make it brighter by virtue of being more focused light, if we use prisms to focus the light." Vega beamed. "That sounds great. Can you do that?" The small mouse nodded. "Yes, I've seen what Professor Doran is constructing, and I'm putting together a sort of hood for it. That will be a frame on which we put carefully cut prisms to focus it. I'll have Reggie make the frame for me, we work very well together."

Vega nodded at that, it made perfectly good sense that they did. "The nice thing about the hood," Mavis explained, "is that you'll be able to have levels of intensity for it. If you want a wide, broad bright light, then have the hood up, but you'll be able to use the prisms to give different effects." The difference each of these touches would make were huge as far as Vega was concerned, simply huge. She had thought that what they had planned was already good, but each one of these experts was adding such a lot to the overall thing.

"Also," Mavis said, "I've seen the effect Professor Doran is using on the glass, with the phosphorescent sand? I could make small glass jewels which glow in rainbow colours, to embed in the railing of the spiral staircase, and then have the same woven around the dome of Nella's Kitchen?" Vega blinked, delightedly. "Really?" Mavis smiled. "Yes, it's quite straightforward, really. Professor Doran did the work in terms of the phosphorescent sand and all I need to do is apply it slightly differently. " Vega shook her head, rather amazed at that.

"I had no idea. That will be beautiful, it will," Mavis smiled. "The beacon is for Xiur, I'm told?" Vega nodded. "Then, I'll make the roof of Nella's kitchen look like stars."

Damn this pregnancy, Vega thought as she blinked back the tears which had suddenly sprung into her eyes. "Really? Oh, Mavis, that would be well lovely. There's a thing. I wonder if you could help with it?" Vega had meant to keep this entirely secret, but this little mouse might just be able to add the touch of magic Vega needed and wanted.

"Nella, well, she were a very important lady. My husband's mother. An' we're expectin' our first child an' I want this to be jus' perfect, you know? She used to make the best jams an' pickles an' chutneys." Mavis nodded, a small hand reached out and touched Vega's. "Don't be too nice to me, Mavis, or I'll start cryin'. You're only small, an' you might drown." Mavis smiled, patted Vega's hand and then removed her physical contact. "What are you wanting to do?" Mavis asked, all business-like.

"I want to make the sign for it. An' it'll be a boy, sittin' on the crescent moon, an' there'll be a storybook, an' a hat, an' a chicken an' a string of pearls." Mavis beamed. "You want parts of it to be glowing, sparkling? Made to look beautiful? Oh, I can do that with you!" Vega nodded. "I'd like that a lot Mavis. But I'm goin' to be really specific an' I'm goin' to be well cantankerous if it isn't right." Mavis nodded. "Well, lets just get it right, and then you won't need to be."
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They got to work. Vega checked over the plans for the hood, with the prisms and so on - she was more than happy with that. Given the amount of work which Doran had done, she thought it would be a very effective addition. The glowing cut-glass crystals which would make a glittering rainbow on the railings of the stairs were next and Vega made notes on this. "I've got some of the railin's made, shall we go look?" The pair of them moved, then, making their way over to Vega and Arlo's camp. She moved into the tent she had put aside for this, and showed Mavis what they had. "If we can include them every 5 inches, that will work." Mavis said. She looked at Vega then and asked her. "I'm going to have to cut the glass anyhow. Would you like them crescent moon shaped?" Vega made a small noise and nodded her head. "That'd be right lovely, Mavis, thanks so much." Her voice was thick with emotion, and she had to clear her throat a few times.

"Now then," Mavis said - apparently not noticing Vega's extreme wussiness. If this carried on all the way through her pregnancy, she thought, she was going to end up with a very bad reputation. Weeping Vega, they'd call her. But only once. "Let's have a look at this sign." Vega had also started on that, and she had bits of the wood, carved and ready to be put together. Mavis looked at what she'd done so far and came up with an idea. Looking at Vega, she spoke again. "Why not have the woman sitting on the moon?" Mavis asked. "Maybe wearing the pearls and waving down to people the other end of the sign. If she's on the top left, she can be waving to people on the bottom right. A man, a woman, and a child waving back.? Can I just try and sketch out a rough design for that?"

Maybe, Vega thought, Mavis was actually an agent of Syroa who had been sent to kill her as vengeance for the Mummer's Ball. Still she nodded. "That sounds well lovely," she said quietly. "Could the wom..woman on the moon be wearin' some pearls, please? An' I'm goin' to put another man there. Older fella. With a pipe." Vega breathed in. "He'll be holdin' the baby, sittin' on his knee." She nodded and then she felt, of all things, her lip tremble. Vega looked at Mavis and shook her head. "I don't do emotions, not normally. But this baby, an' I don't know. I don't know what's got into me."

The small mouse looked at her and Vega saw that Mavis had an expression of kindness on her face. Normally, that would make Vega want to turn her into a flat mouse, but no, it just made her grateful. "A string of pearls for her, that would be great, an' maybe, you know what, Mavis? Lets see?" Vega looked at the "rough" design Mavis had "sketched" out.

"Oh," Vega said and then, she started to cry.

Thank all the Immortals Arlo wasn't here, Vega thought. He'd be thinking that she'd gone doolally. "It's beautiful, Mavis, it really is." She reached into her pocket and pulled out a hankie. "It's perfect, oh, look! Look, there's a chicken!" She sniffled. "Mrs Creede loved her chickens, you know. An' that looks jus' like Mr Creede, how did you know?" Mavis smiled. "The man with a pipe who lives here with you? I guessed." Vega smiled slightly. "Fair enough," she said. Mavis patted her arm again. "If you follow that design, those dimensions are right, I think, we'll check them. I'll make cut glass stars, and pearls and in the pond, I'll make a reflection where it's the people there, and the lady in the moon is with them." She motioned to where the diagram showed that and Vega gulped. In the reflection, she and Arlo and Jonas and the baby were there. But the baby wasn't waving - the baby was holding Nella's hand, because Nella was standing with them. "Oh, that's lovely, Mavis. Thank you so much." Mavis waved a single small hand. "Don't worry. You do the woodworking, and I'll do the glass cutting, alright?"

Vega nodded. "Then," Mavis added, "we'll make the ceiling of Nella's Kitchen and the roof of the beacon, glimmering and beautiful. What do you think?"

"I think," Vega said honestly. "That I'm goin' to wail like a newborn in a bit. Mavis, I well appreciate your kindness, thank you so much." She smiled at the small mouse woman. "But I've got to get out of here now, or I'm goin' to end up doin' myself a mischief. Thanks, really."

Mavis watched the red haired biqaj woman run out of the tent like there was a creature chasing her and the kind cadouri woman smiled, and got to work.
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Player Name: Vega

Points awarded: 10 xp
Magic xp: none

Knowledge:

Caregiving: Letting another witness your vulnerability.
Discipline: Leaving the tent before you do yourself a mischief.
Jewelcrafting: Designing a scene with jeweled components.
Jewelcrafting: Designing transparent parts of a mosaic to form a projection on a flat surface.
Jewelcrafting: Designing a sign.
Science: Prisms create rainbows when light passes through them.

Renown: 0
Loot: The Beacon portion is refined, and the sign to Nella's Kitchen is designed fully.
Injuries/Overstepping: Emotional outburst.
Wealth Points: N/A

Skill Review: All Skills used appropriately to PC's level
Notes: Hello,

The description of Mavis as a pom pom on top of a hat was very cute. Yet for as undescript as you could've gotten, you really brought Mavis to life with a lot of detail and personality for such a shy mouse. I love her.

Vega's emotions were well portrayed as well as her struggle dealing with the intensity of them. She does seem to let the cadouri get to her, being such nice people. I very much enjoy the projector type of sign that casts a projection on the ground, creating a different scene than exists on the sign itself. Nice work!


If you have any questions, comments, or concerns regarding this review, feel free to PM. Enjoy your rewards!
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