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Practice with Plia

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Since he had begun to conduct more complex alchemical research, the son of Ziell had taken to regularly training at the Fitness Centre. After all those long breaks in the laboratory, he needed a distraction and some sort of balance. He needed to engage in more physical activities. Unlike some of his colleagues at the Academy of Viden, he was not content with merely doing mental work and spending all the time handling reagents or brooding over books. In order to be happy and content, he needed to hone both his mind and his body.

Sometimes, he trained alone, but most of the time, he participated in a group session or asked his assistant Plia or his friend Taelis, a fellow chemist, to join him. In his opinion, it was impossible to advance beyond a certain point if you trained alone all the time. You needed to get to know different fighting styles and different strategies; besides, certain moves were hard to practice when all you had was a training dummy – or a construct in the world of dreams that you had created. In his opinion, the latter was a pale shadow of the real thing.

He had just warmed up – in his opinion, doing so was essential, even when you were as accomplished a swordsman as he was – and had moved into the center of the training room that he had reserved for the afternoon in order to go through a few Menochoros exercises, mainly various side kicks – when the door was being opened, and the person that he had been waiting for walked in.

Plia Yishnai Velenar, a young woman of mixed Eidisi and Ellune descent, had changed considerably since he had first met her – she had been a student in one of his Letter classes. The young woman was still introverted, but she was not afraid of her own shadow anymore, and what more, she had turned out to be a decent swordswoman. They had moved beyond him teaching her various moves and were actually sparring now – which was what they would be doing that trial was well.

While Plia went through a few warming-up exercises of her own, he finished his Menochoros practice. He raised his right leg and kicked, straightening it in the process before he did the same with his left leg and ultimately switched to a series of quick open palm strikes that he executed while he moved to the left and right of his imaginary opponent – when practicing Menochoros, it was important to never stand still for long.

Doing such things came easier to him nowadays. While he would likely never be able to perform extraordinary acrobatics feats – he had very little interest in doing so, anyway - his most recent training had afforded him a hint of additional flexibility. It also made it easier for him to maintain his balance.

Finally, his assistant was ready as well. They retrieved their weapons from a stand that was near the door – they used longswords made of metal, but with blunt edges; Doran had no interest in seriously injuring his student – and moved into the center of the room once more in order to face each other. Doran inclined his head, and then he beckoned Plia to come closer. As she was the less experienced fighter of the two of them, he would give her the advantage of making the first attack.

He was quite curious as to which one she would go for.

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Plia eyed him for a few moments, as if she were thinking about the best way to attack, before she finally advanced. The young woman was not very fast, and she had no talent for more acrobatic moves either as he had concluded over the course of their time together, but she was strong, she possessed noticeably more endurance than her classmates, and she was determined. Sometimes, she was a little afraid or insecure, but she didn’t let those feelings get the better of her, at least not anymore. She did what she had to do regardless.

Plia’s first attack was a diagonal cut that was aimed at the Mortalborn’s torso. It was executed with a reasonable amount of control and precision. Unlike some less experienced swordswomen, the young woman didn’t swing her weapon wildly anymore. Furthermore, the struck with the edge of her blade rather than the flat side, extending her arms first and following with the rest of the body (leading with the body rather than the sword could result in an opening that one’s opponent would be able to exploit).

There was a look of utter concentration on her face.

When Plia attacked, Doran instantly stepped off to the side, out of the way of her sword, and forward again. Following that, he struck diagonally downwards, intercepting Plia’s attack. Simply depending yourself against an attack was never good enough though. Even in a sparring session such as this one, the Mortalborn adhered to certain principles. Their meeting was not only an opportunity for both of them to engage in one of their favourite activities; he also wanted his young assistant to learn, to improve – and prepare her for a real combat situation, although he hoped that it would never come to that.

In a real fight, your opponent would not simply give up and be discouraged because you had managed to defend yourself, at least not normally, but attack again and again, until they managed to overwhelm you – in which case death was a real possibility. For that reason, every defense needed to be followed by a counter attack. For that reason, the Mortalborn aimed at Plia’s upper body as soon as he had stopped her attack. He put comparatively little strength behind his attack though. He wanted to prepare her for the world outside of the safety of the Fitness Centre as well as the laboratory where they both worked, but, as he had already concluded before, he did not wish to cause actual harm.

A smile flickered across the Mortalborn’s face for the briefest of moments when Plia countered his attack. He was pleased to notice that she did exactly what he had once taught her to do during one of their previous meetings.
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Plia stepped forward and to the side, as he had previously done. Her hands were raised slightly to cover the part of her torso that he had been aiming at. Her counter-attack, what had been supposed to be a slightly circular, horizontal cut fell short. She did not give up though, but tried to make the best of her failed first attack and followed up with a thrust – which the Mortalborn immediately parried before he used the same attack against her.

He executed a thrust, extending his sword’s tip in a straight line towards her, making a quick step forward at the same time and proceeded to settle into a guard, waiting for her next action. They continued like that for a while, attacking and parrying. Doran held back slightly once more. If he had wanted to, he could have defeated her within a bit or less; this was not a duel though, but something that was meant to be enjoyable as well as a bit of a learning experience.

Besides, there were moments when he could see a hint of something, a hint of the swordswoman that Plia might become one trial … the swordswoman that might turn out to be a real challenge …

When he had parried her latest attack which was a diagonal cut, he inclined his head, thus signaling her that it was time to stop. She lowered her sword before she looked at him questioningly. She did not say anything though, but simply waited for him to speak once more.

“Sometimes, when your opponent and you are matched evenly as far as your skill with the blade is concerned, incorporating a few unarmed combat moves may give you an edge and ensure your victory”, he spoke in a calm and measured tone of voice and met her gaze. “I have recently begun to incorporate aspects of Menochoros into my sword fighting style.”

“You have made noticeable progress recently. Would you be interested in learning to do the same?”


When Plia nodded and asked him if he could show her an example, he made a few steps away from her. Considering that she had no experience when it came to unarmed combat yet, he considered it to be unwise to practice that particular move with her now.

Instead, he pretended to strike an invisible opponent with his blade before he executed a kick towards what would likely have been the lower part of their torso – and followed up with another strike before he turned to face the young woman once more and proceeded to explain,

“When people are confronted with a thrust, they often raise their arms instinctively which creates an opening for you to exploit. There are several ways to do so, but a kick is one of the simplest ones – and one of the most effective ones on top of it.”

“I can show you a few basic Menochoros move the next time we meet, but for now, would you like to join me in the cafeteria for a drink?”
he asked and raised an eyebrow. Some of his colleagues considered fraternizing with their students and employees to be wrong; he considered such an attitude to be laughable though, and besides, it would constitute an excellent opportunity for them to reflect on their practice session.

In his opinion, you could learn more if you didn’t simply fight, but talked about it afterwards.

When Plia smiled and said that she would love to, he returned the sword to its stand before he inclined his head slightly. Once she had exited the training room, he followed her.
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Experience: 10 no magic xp

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Blades x4
Unarmed Combat (Menochoros) x2

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Skill Usage: Appropriate to level

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Comments: I like good grind. This was one of that.

But in all seriousness, this was a well executed bit of action going on here. I felt like I could picture well enough what everyone was doing at any given moment, and the descripion of the maneuvers was very well put.

Of course, Doran being the good teacher at the end, turned it into a teaching moment when her swordplay failed against his own. Still, it's nice that he sees progress in her.

Good writing and enjoy the rewards.

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