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Studies in Transmutation, Part 1

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The son of Ziell awoke to the first rays of the early morning sun falling through the windows of his bedroom in the Obsidian Prism. For a moment, he simply lay there, under the silken covers, somewhat reluctant to get up and start the trial, before he let out a soft sigh and stood in order to put on the black and silver dressing gown that he had draped across the back of a chair the evening before. As he got dressed, he could not help but glance at the crimson marking on his chest, above where his heart was located, his witchmark that matched the lines on the back of his hands, one of his awakenings.

He traced its outline with the index finger of his right hand somewhat thoughtfully, furrowing his brow almost imperceptibly. It had been two cycles since he had received it, two cycles since his initiation and since Llyr had stepped into his life so unexpectedly. He had not gained any new mutations since then. He knew that he would eventually change more if he used his magic more and more extensively. It was inevitable (Not that he minded. He accepted his mutations; besides, his life had improved considerably since he had become a mage).

He couldn’t help but wonder when and how exactly he would change though. Would he realize that he was about to receive his next awakening, or would he just wake up one morning only to discover that something was different? He remembered what Balthazar and Llyr had told him about their own mutations, but was it the same for everyone? And could mutations be directed or were they completely random? He remembered that Llyr and he had theorized that he had gained some resistance to fire because he had drunk a hot drink shortly after he had been initiated, that night in Vhalar.

Would he gain mutations that were related to science next, or would he wake up with wings and insect-like appendages, like Llyr, one trial? Did mentor and initiate ever gain similar awakenings? Did their sparks have anything in common, apart from the fact that they were both Transmutation sparks? He had spent most of the time working on his newest research project pertaining to the use of racial blood in alchemy recently … it would make sense if that had some kind of effect …

He abruptly pulled his gaze away from his mutations as there was no point in thinking about that particular topic any further at the moment and opened the door in order to step his way into the hallway and make his way into the kitchen where his mortal cook, Elias, had already prepared breakfast for him. He could already smell the delicious, freshly brewed coffee from afar. He had to admit, he was looking forward to it. It made his mouth water slightly.

His spark had not only changed his skin, but also affected his food preferences (which surprised him slightly sometimes; he seemed to mutate more than most people – was it a side effect of his divine blood? That seemed to be the most logical explanation in his opinion as he didn’t think that there was anything unusual about the way that he used his magic; on the contrary, he had been exceptionally careful so far in order to avoid overstepping).

Perhaps, he thought, as he sat down at the table and waited for the mortal to serve him, he would continue his magical research that afternoon, when he returned from the Academy. He wanted to understand how exactly everything worked (just waiting for something to happen was not acceptable in his opinion); besides, there were a few spells that he had familiarized himself with yet (although he had been affected by one of them during his initiation).
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It was around the fifteenth break that the Mortalborn finally returned to the Obsidian Prism and made his way into a room that had previously been empty, but that he had had converted into a training room of sorts where he could meditate a bit or practice a few of his Menochoros moves (he didn’t always have time to head to the Fitness Centre for that).

Having changed into more comfortable clothes, dark pants and a simple shirt made of a soft material he sat down on the matted floor cross-legged, closed his eyes and took a few deep, steady breaths in order to clear his mind and focus. He had started to meditate before every training session. Meditation was an essential aspect of Menochoros, the unarmed combat style that he had decided to familiarize himself with; and it had turned out to be useful when it came to swordsmanship and magic on top of it.

Once upon a time, he had struggled to attain a state of calm and clarity – he had relied far too much on Thespian, one of the abilities that Sesser, the Blessing of Syroa, afforded him and barely managed without it. Recently, that had begun to change though. The process was still not entirely smooth, but he usually managed to focus in just a couple of bits.

He glanced at the simple padded training dummy that had been set up in the center of the room by his servants, furrowing his brow very lightly as he did so before he abruptly rolled up his sleeves.

He wanted to see if the lines on his hands began to spread when he used his magic, or if his skin changed in any other way, if this would be the time when he would experience his next awakening – or if the next spell or the one after that would bring about a change. It would likely have helped if there had been someone there that observed him while he cast. There were few people he trusted enough though – and that understood magic well enough. His servants and his assistants would likely just have stared.

He rose to his feet in one swift motion and extended a hand in the direction of the training dummy that was some distance away from him, only to pause again and furrow his brow once more as he wondered how exactly he was supposed to go about it. He had seen Llyr cast that particular spell exactly once, when he had hurled the ether missile at him in order to begin the initiation, and he did not remember all the details anymore as a consequence (he had been focusing on other things at the time; such as just trying to survive).

He conjured a small ball of ether, a small ball of shimmering, crackling energy and let it hover above his outstretched hand, above his palm for a few moments, studying it, almost marveling at it (even after all that time, magic had not lost that sense of novelty and wonder yet, and he was not sure if it ever would – it was so different from what he had done for the previous couple of centuries).

A few moments later, he pointed his hand at the training dummy only to pause and reconsider what he was about to do – and ultimately focus on the ball of ether once more in order to reshape it and elongate it, slowly and carefully, ever so carefully, so that it resembled an arrow of sorts, or maybe a javelin, made of pure, crackling, destructive energy.

The shape of the ether missile likely wouldn’t have any impact on its effectiveness; hurling what was more or less a shapeless blob around seemed a little anticlimactic to him though, especially since Transmutation was about manipulating ether, and about reshaping it.

It was a creative kind of magic, a magic of experimentation and exploration.

The effect was a little different from what he had expected. The ether missile did not leave a dent like a stone might, it did not tear a clean hole into the training dummy, and it did not pierce it like an arrow would. There was a little explosion, or maybe a series of tiny, tiny explosions, a strange, unfamiliar sound, before the ether missile began to …

… eat away at the training dummy?

He raised a dark eyebrow fractionally as part of the padding began to dissolve, as if it had been doused with acid before he abruptly came closer in order to be able to better watch it, and extended a hand towards it. A part of him wanted to touch the damaged padding and see if it felt any different now, but he didn’t dare to. An ether missile did not affect living matter, apart from where the initiation was concerned, from what he knew, but still …

He lowered his hand and made a step away again, still looking somewhat puzzled and furrowing his brow slightly before he abruptly sat down again and grabbed his journal that he had taken into the training room with him in order to write down what he had done and what he had observed. Llyr had told him to keep a journal, and he had found doing such exceptionally useful so far. He doubted that a lot of mages recorded every single one of their experiments and each step of their evolution, starting from their initiation.

His hands, he noticed, still looked the same. His body still looked and felt the same, and his mental state had not been affected - at least he didn’t think so. Apparently, this had not been extensive enough. Or maybe, he’d change overnight. He wasn’t trying to bring about his next awakenings – rushing things was counterproductive at best and disastrous at worst in his opinion, especially when it came to magic, to something that had such a profound impact on your body and soul – he was just trying to figure out how exactly everything worked - and why.

Either way, he’d have to ask someone to repair the training dummy, he decided with a hint of amusement as he looked up from his journal – and maybe use something else to practice his magic on the next time. Did they make targets for Transmuters to practice their ether missiles on, like they made them for archers? Targets that could withstand a few hits?

He’d never thought about that before.
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Points awarded: 10, can be used for Transmutation

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Transmutation (Ether Missile) x3
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Well, that was eerily familiar... wonder why? ;) All good in the hood, dude, nothing to critique. I enjoyed the comparison between Kas' more rough-hewn style and Doran's more scholarly methods. Gotta have them meet up some day.

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