[Ymiden] Some Good in This World

Eliza and Llyr discuss Wren within the sanctuary of Ymiden's domain.

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The fascination at Eliza’s professed identity as the daughter of an Immortal, of Ymiden himself, lingered in Llyr’s mind. It wasn’t merely the age, far beyond what he could ever hope to live himself, or the perspective she likely had on life as she suggested when she made mention of history, but simply the very concept of it caused Llyr to feel… awe. He liked the feeling, and he allowed for it to gather in the center of his chest where he often considered as the spot where his soul resided.

Yet the two of them weren’t there to talk about such matters. Not for the understanding of mortalborn, nor the discussion about souls and ghosts. They hadn’t met by their own volition, but rather brought together by the child dreamwalker who looked between them now.

He considered, silently, the shared explanation of why Wren was different. It made more sense why the boy had such talent within Emea. While he’d already felt kindly toward the boy, a profound compassion gathered in him while he listened to Eliza mention the death and rebirth of Wren. He nodded slowly in understanding and smiled slightly when the woman apologized for not explaining more. Llyr assured her, “That is alright. Thank you for sharing what you did. I am glad to hear he is mostly safe now, if not lost however.”

What happened next was a simple process for Llyr. While Eliza wasn’t to be an initiate of his, and he wouldn’t consider such an insult to someone of her age, the benefit of branding her was far too great to let the opportunity pass. The more options they had, the better they could handle any unexpected situations in the future. So, he caressed her and tucked her hair back, then kissed her on the lips.

Once the brand finished, he noticed the warmth on her cheeks. He smiled slightly, and a silvery-blue tinted his own cheeks when she teased him with a question. Llyr cleared his throat but before he could respond, Wren’s dismissive whine interrupted them. He dryly laughed at the boyish refusal and nodded to agree with Eliza’s insistence that Wren could brand however he wished.

Llyr stepped away to give the pair space, and he returned to his soldierly posture with shoulders back and chest out, hands folded behind him. He observed the brand between their palms and smiled when it appeared to have been successful.

“Rest assured, Miss Eliza, I will keep Wren safe,” he promised her. He hesitated and then said, “My name… it’s Llywelyn.”

“We will write to you on the scroll as soon as we arrive at my home,” he added. Llyr felt a touch at his belt, then reached to naturally allow the boy to take his hand. He felt a slight pull and supposed maybe they’d overstayed their welcome in Ymiden’s domain… or the boy simply knew something neither of them did. He said, “Let us exchange brands first, Wren.”

Their hands lit up, with the ease of familiarity to the process, and then Llyr lightly kissed the top of the boy’s forehead. Though it seemed as normal as any other, he felt a slight warble of energy that suggested it was otherwise. The brand hadn’t appeared anew like Eliza’s, but rather he recognized the transfer… the brand that settled on Wren’s forehead had the same signature as the brand that had once rested on Hazel’s forehead. He watched as it faded, then gently exhaled.

“Right then,” he looked at Eliza. He nodded and said, “Until next we see each other.”

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It was true. In a very real sense, Wren was lost. From the moment he'd been torn from Hart's side, he'd been in her safekeeping. In that sense, Wren still had a family who cared for him. Her, Sir Wolfert and his wife who'd also grown quite close to the boy. But even they didn't know what Eliza did about Wren's past. He and his lost twin had lived an existence, mostly confined to the dreamscape, consumed by torture maliciously doled out by the twins. It was impossible to explain to someone who hadn't been there to see it. Or why she believed those twins were no longer a threat. She'd prayed however that should the memories come creeping back in, they wouldn't do so in such a way that they'd consume Wren all over again.

And now, Eliza felt as confident as was possible for her, that Wren would remain in safe hands. The notion that she could look in whenever she pleased, went a long way towards her feeling that he really would be alright. It wasn't her opinion that mattered anyway. It was Wren who'd brought them all here to her father's domain, and Wren who'd decided. In either case the branding was done, each instance in it's own way quite intimate from Eliza's perspective. "Llywelyn," she said, smiling and giving a slight nod. "Well it's nice to meet you. I imagine our letters will seem less awkward, than had I continued to address you as Magpie." Although Wren, she thought, might continue to address his new friend in that way.

Assured that she'd be receiving a letter soon, she stood back then while Llewelyn and Wren exchanged brands of their own. She couldn't possibly guess whether there was anything different about the process, being that she was not part of the process. But if she'd been equipped to recognize that there was anything different or special about it, Eliza wouldn't have been surprised. Wren was both different and special in ways that she didn't fully understand. It was time for them to go, and it saddened her, even though she knew that it wasn't really goodbye. Sensing that, Wren reached out and took her hand again, while Eberhardt leaped from his shoulder to hers again.

"I'll see you later," he said. "Will you say it to Sir Wolfert too? And to Darwin and Smudge?" Eliza grinned in spite of it all and nodded. She would. "Darwin is a wolfhound, Smudge is the cat. They and Wren have become thick as thieves." Which hadn't been surprising where Darwin was concerned. But Smudge? That cat didn't like anyone but had taken to Wren straight away. "I'll tell them Wren," she promised, and then looked one last time to Wren's new keeper. "I know that you'll keep him safe," she said. "Thank you. And yes, soon."
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Eliza

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15/15 these points may not be used for domain magic.

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Combat: Bladed: Knives: A good hatpin will do in a pinch
Drawing: Chalk on furniture
Politics: History is written by the winners

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Dreamwalking: Others' dreams can reveal their nature
Dreamwalking: Ymiden's Domain
Dreamwalking: Being led in dreams by another dreamwalker
Dreamwalking - Branded By: Wren (NPC) (on hand).

Loot/losses

Eliza: +1 half-of-Echo Scroll (linked to Wren/Llyr) -1 Wren.

Wealth

n/a

Renown

n/a
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Points

15/15 these points may not be used for domain magic.

Knowledge

Skill Knowledge:
Etiquette: Meeting the daughter of an Immortal.
Etiquette: Trusting another with your real name.
Caregiving: The guardianship of a lost child.
Caregiving: Planning for temporary guardianship.
Caregiving: Accepting an unexpected ward.
Caregiving: Finding something fun to distract a child with.
Caregiving: Can be used in tandem with Logistics.
Logistics: Means of long distance communication.
Logistics: Arranged check-ins to update on a child's well-being.
Intelligence: Utilizing echo scrolls for long-distance communication.
Intelligence - Contact: Eliza Soule, a painter, dreamwalker, and mortalborn daughter of Ymiden.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Dreamwalking – Brand: Eliza Soule (on lips)
Dreamwalking – Brand (NPC): Wren (on forehead)
Dreamwalking: Things can occur differently in Immortal domains than in mortal dreamscapes.
Mortalborns: Can live very long, but look young still.
Immortals: Can have offspring with mortals.
Immortal: Ymiden
Mortalborn: Eliza Soule
Eliza Soule: Mortalborn daughter of Ymiden.
Eliza: A painter and artist.
Eliza: 236 arcs old!
NPC Wren: Died and reborn in Emea. Doesn't remember his past life.
NPC Wren: Is looking for Hart.
Personal: I will be caring for Wren until Hart is found.
Personal: I will keep Eliza Soule updated on Wren.
Dreamwalking - Branded By: Wren (NPC) (on hand).

Loot/losses

-1 half-of-Echo Scroll (linked to Eliza) +1 Wren.

Wealth

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Renown

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Comments: This was an interesting exploration of Eliza and Llywellyn's pasts, and how they might interwine now that Wren has been found. I hope and look forward to seeing more in this storyline.

I hadn't known much about Wren, Hart, and Eliza's story myself, admittedly, but found it easy to follow what was going on as soon as I got reading your narrative.

I wonder if Llyr will be able to find Hart, now that he's 'gone'. It'll make for more interesting stories, at least. I look forward to reading them.

Also I changed Eliza's claim of history to Politics, since history isn't a skill

Amazing writing the both of you.

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