Face of a Healer [Alivilda] (Graded)

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The cities and villages of Melrath are as varied and diverse as they come. The capital of Raelia is the the jewel of this western kingdom, playing host to a merchants, artisans, Aesir priests, as well as a cut throat political landscape dominated by the nobles of Raelia. To the south in the depths of the Myrkvior Forest lies Melrath's second largest, and oldest city, Fensalir. Here people have learned to live alongside spirits and the natural world by maintaining their loyalty to traditions laid down the first Melrathi. To the east lies the small fishing village of Noatun, and to the western mountains rests the Mer city of Verimeer, the brewing town of Alivilda and the alpine village Vormund.
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59 Zi’da 719 – Face of a Healer

Brent slept restlessly. His dreams were a tangled mess of faces and shifting features. Women who morphed from one appearance to the next. He was surrounded by a hundred women who looked like Freya before he finally woke up sweating.

What had he done? Was there even a chance that this strange shapeshifting woman would return? How was he going to explain it to the other villagers that he had let the Outlander go when he had her in his very house? What was Ted going to say? That he had been blinded by her beauty? Like the enchantments Mer used to ensnare their prey?

A shiver went down his back as he got out of bed, his sweat cold in the chilly room. He fumbled a bit in the dark as he got dressed. He had told ‘Freya’, the Yludih, to meet him at dawn. That meant she would only have yesterday afternoon and the night to flee from Alivilda, if she chose to do so. He put on a pair of slippers to take the chill off the cold floors and went downstairs.

It was just barely twilight as he began to prepare a simple breakfast and tend to the coals in the fireplace. But of course, since it was Zi’da it took longer for mornings to begin. The previous day was still completely surreal in his mind, and it was hard to imagine it wasn’t a dream along with his others. But after Yludih had left, he had gone to the Alivilda Aesir to ask if there were any villagers who had ailments that needed help. All Brent had said was that he had gotten word from a healer friend who might be able to help some of the people of Alivilda before continuing on her journeys. If he found himself questioned afterwards, he could point to his friend Ashling or say that his healer friend had got caught in bad weather. Still, he managed to create a list of people with common symptoms as well as where they lived.

The second favor he asked was of his brother Ted. Brent didn’t know if Yludih would accept it, but he asked Ted to carve a simple leaf out of wood and with a hole to put a string through it. A simple necklace. Maybe she would see it as it was, a means of identification, but Brent hoped she might accept the gift. The pendent was small, no longer than a finger and Brent found some twine to string it. It looked quite pretty, although Brent felt his insides churn when Ted mentioned he’d never heard a lady in such distress.

The morning light started to catch the sparkling snow and Brent fiddled with the pendent in his pocket. Any time now… He wasn’t sure if he was more anxious about the damage she could do if she didn’t show up, or the action he would be forced to take. What if she simply balked and was too afraid to come. And if that started another mob, then how was he any different from the rest of the traditional Melrathi? But he had still given her a choice, a chance to prove herself. And after today’s events, would she be free to go? Was it even possible to make such a firm judgement with only two encounters?

Other than his slippers, he was fully dressed and with his outdoor clothing waiting near the door. He tried to sit leisurely, but he was tense and anxious. He wondered how people like the Aesirs and Ragnari made such judgement calls. But even they, he recalled, made mistakes and with them the stakes were just as high or even higher.


OOC: At Tier 4, Brent can have 1 set of average jewelry (up to 3 necklaces), and would compensate Ted Forrester accordingly.
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It would be easy to leave.

Who would believe him? But the potential that someone could or that he would go back on his word kept Zih holed up in the hall. There weren't many placed else to go, and everyone gave her either distance or well-wishes after her previous days fainting spell. It let her blend, let her be inconspicuous if not remembered now that people had moved onto other happenings. But the Yludih's world was stuck on the trial prior, on every tiny thing she had done wrong, on her inability to fake the things she didn't-couldn't do. There were stories, stories of her kind who killed then took someone's face without batting an eye, those who did it to protect themselves the those who did not. Zih almost wished she could, that she could throw away the softer parts and be like her truest stone self but it was a useless thought that did not help the now. Yet still kept her awake, keeping warm in the hall, journal clutched to her throughout the night. When morning came, the soft smells of breakfast making her stomach churn uncomfortably.

Logically she knew she needed to eat, to sleep, to continue to function but she couldn't bring herself to do either. Just sit and try to figure a way out. If she fled home she could possibly make it but she had no supplies and he'd have the guard hunting her while she tried to flee Melrath. Her current location was too easy to find and it'd be at least trials before she exited the Melrath territory as a whole, if she even could. And if she did, how many might be hunted in the meantime? The Melrathi didn't need an extra excuse to lose their heads. Or an excuse to find any Yludih who were smart enough to mind their own business.

Instead she gathered her bag from the Inn she had never gone back to, her journal like a talisman, then walked back the way she had came. It was vaguely familiar, though she didn't get lost, she found herself carefully picking her way through the city. Normally she trusted her feet to get her where they needed to go but today she wasn't sure. And what if she was late because she got lost? He might tell someone before she could tell him she was coming. Though even under better circumstances, Zih doubted she'd ever feel anything less that the hum of bugs crawling under skin when she made to finally knock on the door. There was something distinctly unsettling about going into a home not your own, where they knew all it's secrets and you were a welcomed prisoner.

If he opened the door she would go in. If he didn't, she could leave. Maybe he wouldn't tell, maybe he thought it all a fearful dream. The Yludih found herself taking a step back, running was what she knew. It was always safer but it might not be this time, anymore than this face had been safer. Either way her lips were glued shut, eyes wide, and already she found her body ready to explode. Pins and needles from what could be instead of what was, as she entered the house. It could almost be familiar but it seemed more like something out of her nightmares, memories of the previous trial taunting her.

"...I..." The squeaked word had no others to help it, coming out as a more of sound than the beginnings of a sentence. With a slight tremble she met his gaze, noting he wore clothes similar to the day before but was unable to hold it for long, finding a place somewhere between his neck and chest instead. And though she hadn't voiced it, her entire body seemed to radiate a terrified question.

Now what?
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A wave of relief hit him when he heard the knock on the door, and Brent quickly jumped to his feet to open it. For a split second, he thought it might be a neighbor instead, but the familiar or mostly familiar face of Freya greeted him and he gestured for her to come inside. Even though part of him knew what she was, he still found himself captured by her beauty, from her tall slender figure to her soft delicate cheeks and lips. A small part of him considered searching out the original Freya, but he quickly dismissed the idea. It was complicated enough as it was, and he still had to get through the trial with some sort of assessment of this woman.

Brent was glad the woman had kept her word, and returned, even though she still squeaked out nervous words and trembled like a leaf. Speaking of…

“Um, Freya…” Brent spoke as he cleared his throat and shut the door behind her. It still felt strange to use the same name for her, but that was how she wanted it. “Before we head out, I, um, have this pendant for you.”

He reached into his pocket and held out the wooden engraved leaf with a simple twine string. “If you like it, I think it would look pretty on you.” He hoped that she would at least take it, but for now he wouldn’t make a point of making her wear it.

“I asked around and there are a few people in the village who are sick or could otherwise use your help.” He pulled out his list and on it were about half a dozen names and some scribbled notes as to where the individuals lived. “Unless you need anything here, we can head out?”

If Freya had any small request, Brent would do his best to accommodate it, but otherwise he put on his winter coat and boots and led the way outside. Checking to see that Freya wasn’t too far behind, he offered his left arm in a gentlemanly fashion if the woman wanted to hold onto him. If not, he would still lead the way along the snowy path with his loping gait, every other step uneven from his limp.

He didn’t speak much as they walked, since he had learned from the previous trial that Freya was not very good with questions or even small talk. It gave him more time to think and to watch her behaviour. The first house wasn’t very far, still within the village centre and the Aesir had told him that the patient was a four-year-old girl with a bad fever.

When Brent knocked on the door, he was greeted by a distraught mother and he quickly explained his appearance. “I’ve brought a healer who’s visiting the town. I was told that there was a girl named Sonia who is sick?”

The mother quickly ushered them in, and Brent gave a faint smile to Freya. He hoped she would know what to do and that she really was a healer like she had said she was.

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At the mention of a gift the Yludih froze even more, eyeing it like it was a weapon about to stab her. But there was nothing nefarious about it, if anything the thing that made her flinch back the hardest was the name he used. Cautiously she reached out for it then frowned, pulling her hand back. A question was on the tip of her tongue but she was almost afraid to ask it. Once more she reached out, not putting it on but turning it in her hands as if looking for the part that would hurt her. Looking at it she found she couldn't ask the question that sat in her mind but her faces new name, the one she had given it, fell out of her mouth softly.

"Q-qin." Then she abruptly turned away, still holding the necklace and shook her head in response to his question. Waiting for him to take the lead then taking comfort and focus in trying to map out everywhere he led her, even if he said nothing she could commit the sights to memory. And she was curious, ever so slightly at what he would have her do. If he was lying to her and about to lead her to an ambush or directly to jail, the thought alone was enough to make her walk stiffly on the ball of her feet like she could outrun whatever awaited. But she knew physicality was not her strong suit and it didn't make a difference when he only lead her to a basic looking house. And she couldn't stop herself from flinching anyway when the door opened.

It had been awhile since she had worked like this. Not wanting to make the same mistakes she had that lead to fleeing her home city but the woman's appearance tugged at her. Brents explanation bringing faded memories of her pretending to be sick for the soothing comfort of her mother or father, though she didn't trust him or the people she didn't want a child to be hurt. And she didn't understand why he was having her help, was it some sort of test? Gritting her teeth Zih followed in until they reached the little girl.

She was laid out in the house that was strangely cold, comprehension dawning on her quickly. Stumbling over she pressed a hand to the girls cheeks then reached under her armpits. Damp with sweat, and she frowned pulling off the cold cloth on the girls head and addressing the mother, necklace still clutched in her hand. "Ho-how long? The fever I m-mean. How did she g-get si-ill?"

Pulling her hands away she looked around for the sink but paused with the necklace in her hand, unsure of what to do with it before deciding it didn't matter. She set it to the side, speaking to Brent as she began to clean her hands then fill pots as if she owned the house, directing the mother to heat them and the house.

"P-put it on f-for me, I-I'm busy."

Her voice was as firm as it could be as she got her bag open, pulled out her herbs and flipped open her journal. Most of her knowledge had not been applied practically but she knew the cold hold wasn't helping, and neither would fever herbs if fever was new.
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“Qin,” he repeated softly. Although he was entirely sure, it sounded more like a name than some foreign word. As much as he might still think of her face as Freya, he felt relieved to have an alternate name to call her. There was already enough blurring of the lines and the distinct name would help keep the two separate in his mind.

When they arrived at the house, Qin got straight to work. Brent stayed along the sidelines, not wanting to get in the way. She seemed to work thoroughly, first diagnosing the girl and then starting to seek remedies. If Qin thought it was a test, then she was right. But hopefully it wasn’t only a test, and also a chance for Brent to see and understand who Qin really was.

The mother fretted about, sometimes standing in the way. At Qin’s question, she replied, “It started yesterday morning. And Sonia hardly even slept last night. I just, I don’t know what to do!”

When Qin moved to the sink, Brent hovered nearby. She seemed to have genuine knowledge on healing, although he knew so little to really assess it. When she asked for him to put it on, for a moment he was confused and then he realized she was referring to the necklace. While previously he would have regarded it an overstep to do such, with her permission he delicately picked up the strung pendant and looped it around her neck. With thick fingers he spent another moment tying the string so it wouldn’t come undone.

She was then flipping through her journal, and Brent decided to help the mother with the fire. He added a couple of logs and used the iron poker to move them to where they’d catch. The kettle of water he hung from the mantle so that it would be close enough to the flames to heat up.

He felt a little foolish not knowing what else to do, so he stayed near the foot of the bed in case Qin needed any help from him. If she was both willing and able to heal, who was he to stop her from doing good in the village? Part of him also wondered if there might eventually be someone else who recognized her as Freya. What then? He wondered what exactly she needed to change her face. Could it be as simple as a picture, or did she need something from a real person, like a hair?

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A wave of relief soothed her nerves at the mother's words though she flinched at bit when the necklace was put on, she'd nearly forgotten she'd ask him. Ordering him much like senior doctors ordered her around in Ne'haer, and she could feel his gaze on her often, wondering if her other face was better and wondering how deep this hole would continue to grow. But someone needed her help first, and she wanted to help, out of selfish desire and because she knew how bad suffering any illness hurt. The fever was strong but not around long, doubtful there was much damage or too much need for concern aside from how small the child was but Zih couldn't be sure and there was no one to ask. Quickly she grabbed a few herbs, then tapped a few words and glanced at the mother then the child. There was little she did in terms of soothing the worried mother, her bedside manner had never been a strong suit, and it was the farthest from her mind now.

"Fevers m-make it un-not-hard to s-sleep." Zih said, then waved them from the heart as she made to the water. "D-don't overheat her b-but freezing her wo-doesn't h-help either."

She put the fever few, lemon, and honey to sweeten it. Kids liked sweet things, she thought, at least she did. But if the child didn't? Well, either way the honey was helpful. The Yludih did not try to give it the girl, only her mother, gesturing for her to give it the child while she ripped out a page for the mother to make more if needed. As the mother did what she was told Zih paused suddenly, her hand pausing in it's motions.

"You-your daughter...does she h-have other sym-sym-idications of other sickness? I-I wrote d-down the tea and, um, s-some things to keep her cool. F-fevers make you s-s-sweat. She n-needs liquids, wa-ice is good."

Finished to wrote the last of what she'd said and left it on the table then frowned at Brent before gazing back to the woman and child, then finally the door. "I-if she gets worse, you-you need to get m-more help."

The Yludih was unsure of what was left to do now, the fever would either break by the end of the trial or next or get worse. If it was worse she wouldn't even know where to start but without anything left to say on the matter she was once more unsure, steadily inching towards the door to flee the suffocation of the strangers house. Or maybe subconsciously she wanted to flee. Zih had done what he asked, what else did he want? Her hands twisted against each other, wondering if the next step was jail, her heart beginning it's usual skitter as she swept the rest her things back into her bag then hovered near the door. Was it rude to leave? Would Brent stop her? Would he follow her? The Yludih bit her lip and tried to focus on something other than her thoughts.
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Even though Qin seemed to know what she was doing, it was clear that the mother found the stuttering disconcerting. The mother wrung her hands worriedly and Brent tried to calm her fears.

“Your daughter is going to get better, just listen closely and follow the healer’s advice.” He said and gave an encouraging smile with a pat on her shoulder. He hoped that he wasn’t giving false promises. Despite the strangeness of Qin, she seemed both meek but wanting to help others.

The mother didn’t really have any other symptoms to add and gently helped her young daughter with the tea concoction. She took the hand written notes gratefully and thanked them both. There was a certain degree of relief in the mother’s face even though no magical cure was offered. It had been guidance and a means for her to help her child. Hope was sometimes more potent than any sort of medicinal cure.

Brent could see that even though Qin had wanted to help the young girl, she was now anxious to leave the house. She made several glances towards the door and hovered near it after she had given her final advice. Brent limped over to the door and bid the mother a good day. He opened the door and gestured Qin to go through.

Once they were both outside, Brent spoke quietly to her.

“Thank you for what you did. I know you may think that I’m trying to hold you hostage…” He tried to think of the right words to say. He was holding her hostage. At least in terms of her secret. “As soon as I know I can trust you, I promise that you’ll be free to go.”

Taking her aside, he turned to face Qin directly and gently held both her hands. “I know you want to go now. But do you have it in your heart to help one more villager on this list?”

He soon led the way to the next patient. As with the first house visit, he tried to stay out of her way and watched her actions closely. He would also help as necessary, such as getting the fire going and boiling water. While she could have been pretending the entire time, knowing what role she needed to play, there seemed to be something genuine enough about her and she seemed well versed enough in medicine to confirm her assertion as a healer. By the end of the second visit, he believed that although she was strange in nature, she did not wish harm to those in Alivilda or probably Melrath as a whole.

Throughout the visits he formulated an idea to help her in Melrath, so she might not be recognized as someone else again. He wasn’t sure if it would work, but he felt it was time to make his offer.

“Qin, if you leave now and never return, I will keep your secret and I won’t have the authorities track you down. I would still… like to see you again. But not under threat, but by your choice.” He spoke slowly and paused frequently, hoping that it would help her understand without needing to repeat it too much.

“I’m not sure how you change your face, but if you’re worried about someone else recognizing your face or that you’re afraid of a mob if you appear like an Outlander…” Part of him felt conflicted helping an Outlander so directly like this, but she had only showed good actions even though they were littered with anxiety and fear.

“I could draw you a picture of someone new. Someone who looks Melrathi but isn’t a real person. That way no one else would see your face as someone familiar. I have some experience drawing faces. But I don’t know what you need to do what you do.”

It was now time to let her go and make the choice herself.

“If you would like to try, and take me up on the offer, then come to my place tomorrow and I’ll be sure that we have privacy.”

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Brent:

Knowledge:
Seduction: Giving jewelry as a gift
Socialization: Giving reassurance to someone who is worried
Socialization: Expressing genuine gratitude
Investigation: Determining whether someone's supposed profession matches their skills
Investigation: Being a judge of character
Investigation: Watching body language and actions to determine genuine intent
Investigation: Using a gift to track someone who may change appearance
Negotiation: Offering a favor after being given one
Persuasion: Using a favor to persuade someone to visit again

Loot: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 5, for helping people in the village.
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
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Knowledge:
Medicine x6
Navigation x2

Loot: A necklace with a wooden leaf pendent (average)
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 5, for helping people in the village.
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

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Comments: I quite enjoyed your first thread, so I was glad that I got the opportunity to review this thread here as well. I’m glad that Zih is a tiny bit more relaxed now and didn’t turn down Brent’s gift or run away from him. I also find it interesting that she seems to be somewhat more confident when she’s working as a healer and trying to help people.

Brent seems like a really good man. A lot of people would likely not have wanted any more contact with an Yludih or even betrayed her to the authorities. Brent on the other hand promised that he would keep her secret. I wonder if there will be a sequel where he’ll drew her a new face. I hope there will be one. I want to read more about the two of them!

Enjoy your rewards!

P.S.: It would be great if you could complete the date, Brent (you forgot the arc).

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