Love is a Battlefield (Part 2)

Seated on the shores of Lake Lovalus, Rharne serves as the home of the Lighting Knights, the Thunder Priestesses, and the Merchant's guild. This beautiful trade city is filled with a happy and contented people who rarely need an excuse to party.

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Love is a Battlefield (Part 2)

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Cylus 10, 719 - Continued from here

Qit'ria looked through the trees at the approaching swarm of undead. She was thankful it was Cylus, her panther fur let her blend into the dark perfectly, though she wasn't sure how much that helped against the walking corpses. She watched them move, noticing how they were clumsy and feeble, their bodies quite deteriorated. She could see that individually, they were weak. The trouble was that there were so many.

Her mind flashed to her family, Blackbird's giggling, Oonah's stern face, and Faith's soft voice. She was all that stood between them and this horde. She looked down at her wrist where the mark that Faith had given her used to be, when she'd called her sister to Rynmere. It was not there now, but Qit wished it was. For once in her life, she didn't want to fight alone. Oonah and Faith had gone above and beyond proving to her that they were family, true family to her. And she'd accepted it. But she was alone now.

And she was scared.

She let the horde close in just a bit more, not bothering to draw her weapons yet. She was not about to waste her javelins so early, she didn't know how many she would need. The first skeleton walked past her hiding spot, most of the skin on its face gone, and it making a strange gasping moan. Go time.

Qit's spike covered fist shot out of the dark, piercing through the thrall's skull. It crumpled instantly, and Qit'ria hopped over it. The rest of the thralls moved toward the noise. Qit'ria dashed over to a few more, leaping on the first one, her spiked fists leading the charge. She crashed it down into the dirt, spikes severing head from body, her tentacles grabbing two more nearby, and cracking their skulls together.

Faster.

She quickly rolled away, disappearing into the shadows of Cylus once more. Her eyes swept around the small copse that was serving as the bottleneck for her last stand. She dropped to all fours, and sprinted toward the closest group of undead, barreling through several of them, her spike shelled head goring a couple, her tentacles tossing others. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw a few undead on the far side of the copse getting in past her.

Her bear jaws crushed a thrall's head and then she reached into her domain bag, pulling out a javelin. A sprinting skip and she sent the missile flying through the trees, piercing three of the thralls into a trunk. She wanted to roar, but she remembered the arrow that had shot her down. There was at least one person in this horde that was intelligent. She needed to keep her presence from them hidden until she identified them.

Qit'ria saw several of the undead tripping and bumbling over roots and rocks and an idea came to mind. She slipped into the shadows again, fetching several of her water harpoons that she kept tied to a ropes, the gifts from Enrick. At least he'd done one thing right in their time together.


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Qit'ria sprinted to the back end of the copse, tied the ropes to edging trees. She then heaved the attached harpoons across the way, burying them into tree trunks. She had several of these, and her throws effectively weaved a wall of rope that one of these undead could not hope to pass. They simply lacked the intelligence. At the very least, it would buy her time if some stragglers got past her.

She sprinted back towards the growing throng, keeping two harpoons in hand, a long length of rope connecting them. One in each hand, she sent the first flying deep into the mass of skeletons, before quickly switching hands and throwing the second in the same direction but a bit further out. The rope between the two snagged on the first thrall and brought the javelins arcing around it and several other undead, wrapping them all up. Qit'ria was already hurdling toward the mass, leaping into it with her bulky form, leading with her armored spikes, crushing the bodies.

She somersaulted over the corpses, immediately running on all fours into the throng, attracting the immediate attention of the lot around her. She leapt from thrall to thrall, breaking skulls, spines, and chests as she went. Then she heard the whish of an arrow, and she immediately threw herself flat atop the thrall she'd just taken down. An arrow whizzed by her ear, and her panther eyes looked in the direction it came from. She saw the cloaked figure preparing another arrow.

Then the thrall beneath her bit hard into her bicep and she stifled the pained scream. The bow twanged, and Qit rolled back, pulling the thrall up with her. The air pierced the thrall's skull, coming to a stop a breath away from own eye. She snarled, tossing the thrall away. She moved in behind a tree, peering around the other side. The archer was loaded again, but didn't appear to be trying to make his way into the copse. He was smart, he could rain hell on her from a safe distance while the thralls wore her down.

The fight would eventually need to leave the woodland.

The undead were beginning to overrun her vantage point. She needed time to cull them down, and she needed a better form. Grabbing two more javelins, she juked her torso out the left side of the tree. The arrow flew toward her, just as she expected, having already started spinning back behind the tree and out the other side. She side arm slung a javelin out toward the archer, who was attempting to reload. He threw himself out of the way, and Qit'ria sprinted off. She disappeared behind a large brush, stopping not coming out the other side. She knew the location of where he'd dodged to, and from her hidden vantage, she hurled the javelin straight the woody growth. It flew straight at the archer, just barely missing him, his own arrow loosed in her direction. It flew in close, far closer than her own throw. But the archer backed up, retreating to a safer distance, trying to out range her.

Qit'ria quickly dispatched the nearest undead, before starting her transformation into the bumblebear. Once fully formed, she let out her challenging roar, inviting as many undead to her position as she could.

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The roar worked, undead beginning to turn toward her. On all fours, the grizzly sized bumble bear ran through them, not attempting to bite or claw them. She had the speed of a horse but massive, heavy body. Undead fell apart under her charge. At least her arm wound was gone, stored on her Ithecal form. That was two injured forms. Part of her knew she needed to be more careful, to conserve her forms. That thought was the part that knew Faith wanted her to make it out alive.

But her wild side said she needed to go more feral, to truly unleash. And her spark agreed. She could feel it clamoring at the bit. It was the only way to protect her family. She couldn't worry about herself right now. Protect her own, at all costs. There was nothing else in the world that resonated more truly. Qit'ria hemmed in the outer edges of the undead, when she heard a loud, feline roar from where the archer had been. The huntress swatted another thrall's skull from his body, looking out into the clearing.

There was an undead creature with the archer now. It was large, just as large as she was in her current form. She saw two long canines jutting out from its mouth. The archer was looking to drive her out with this Gaunt Scython. It roared in challenge again. And Qit'ria roared back, answering it. But she had a different plan in mind. She needed help in clearing out these other thralls, and this cat would be the one to do it. Qit'ria began barreling through the undead toward the Scython, roaring on the way. The large feline sprinted toward her as well, Qit see thing various blade shaped bones sticking out of its body at various points.

There were on a path for collision.

An instant before they collided, Qit'ria unleashed into another form, one far more suited for her plan of attack. The small, white house cat streaked beneath the Scython's body with mreow. Qit'ria was instantly sprinting away into the horde of undead as the Scython turned and began to chase. Qit'ria cut through the legs of the clumsy thralls, sprinting full out, zigzagging through them, while the Scython rampaged through them. Dozens were being cut down by the massive feline's pursuit. Qit'ria could hear the pounding of the half ton beast behind her. She turned sharply, diving beneath a brush, then cutting back again, running up a tree.

The gaunt crashed through the brush, screaming loudly, colliding with several thralls. Qit'ria would've smiled normally, her plan was working wonders. Qit continued climbing the tree, reaching the first branch she could. The Scython leapt up the tree to follow, its claws digging in deep, tearing out chunks of wood as it came. But it was slow, heavy. Qit scrambled up on the branch, heading out to the end of it, before looking back and waiting.

She took a moment to gaze upon the carnage below. So many undead had already fallen, and yet there were so many more. Still, Qit'ria was feeling confident in her plan so far. The Scython finally reached her branch, and stepped out onto it. Had it been a living Scython, it might've had the preservation of life instinct that warned against it as the branch cracked and creaked. It stepped out with its other leg, and Qit'ria turned, jumping off to the branch of a nearby tree. The Scython's branch snapped, and it fell hard to the ground below, crushing several thralls that had been milling about.

Qit'ria watched as the Scython began to rise, annoyed that it hadn't died.

Then the arrow slammed through her body, punching through both of her feline hips and pinning her to the tree. She let out a deafening, pained screech, and instinctively tried to pull away from the arrow, finding herself unable. The Scython was looking up, and began to climb up the tree she was pinned to, Qit's heart racing. She couldn't move her back legs at all, and she couldn't transform in this state. She needed to free herself.

She tapped into the vines bracelet on her paw, the gift from the Induk in Desnind. The vine reached out, her mind in control of it. She wrapped it around the arrow, and snapped the shaft close to her body. She then used the vine to grab onto the branch she stood on, and pulled her body along the shaft, sliding off, falling in a heap. The tree continued to shake as the Scython climbed, but Qit was freed. For the moment. Blood rushed out of her form, her mind blurred as she tried to come up with a plan.
Injury and Magic Use Ledger

Batpanther - One wing damaged
Ithecal - Bicep bitten
Tim the Cat - Crippled

1 Adapted Transformation
1 Standard Transformation
1 Unleash

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Tactics: Bottleneck large groups of enemies
Throwing (Javelin): 2 Spear rope throw
Trapmaking: Using multiple ropes to guide stupid undead
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Punching spikes through a skull
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Cutting off a head with spikes
Unarmed Combat (Inner Beast): Crush a skull with your jaws


Injuries: All as described in your spoiler, make sure your CS is updated

Notes:
Boy HOWDY, it's always fun seeing some en masse violence being perpetrated! Whether its Orcs or Stormtroopers or Nazis, seeing a buncha' mooks being laid to waste always tickles me. And you did it so well! The flow between various forms was well-handled, if brief in descriptions of the transformations, and the cunning constantly at work throughout all forms was consistent and thrilling. Oh, and using the Scython as an unwilling wrecking ball? *kisses fingertips*

One thing I did notice was you forgot to include the link to the previous story in your first post. Be careful not to miss little details like that. Also, adding a link to the NEXT is always helpful.

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