• Memory • A Hunting Trip Starts Before the Hunt (Graded)

This is a forum where you can put travel threads, wilderness threads not included in area forums and threads on the seas and oceans. Letter Threads have their own forum here, also.
User avatar
Kori'än
Approved Character
Posts: 96
Joined: Sun Jul 04, 2021 8:23 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Assistant Researcher
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Storybook
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Events

A Hunting Trip Starts Before the Hunt (Graded)

111th of Ymiden, 704
the Eastern Plains


"What are we hunting?" Kori'än beamed, swinging his bow back and forth as he skipped around his mother. The weather was pleasant, not too hot nor too cold, perfect for hunting. Not that he really would know, but his mom had said so, and so, it must be true. "A bear? A wolf? A boar?"

"A rabbit, if you're lucky!" Àida chuckled, placing a hand on Kori's shoulder to stop his skittish movements around her. "I'm taking you to learn the basics. You can't even shoot yet. So we will train that, and I'll show you how to track some animals, how does that sound?"

"Boring." Kori informed, looking up at his mom with a smile. "Shooting looks easy." Holding the bow up with his left hand, right fingers pulled the string back. The numbness on the tip of his fingers made him lose his grip, though, and the string was released before it was fully drawn. He frowned, looking down at his hands. "It feels weird."

"That's because you aren't used to it yet," His mom's voice wavered, and Kori looked up, tilting his head to the side as he tried to figure out why she was upset. Àida quickly smiled, though, walking behind him and gently laying her hands down his shoulders. "You'll build the necessary strength in your arm with time and figure out how to feel when the string is ready for release. Maybe we should just take things slow."

"But I want to hunt," he pouted, and his mom chuckled, ruffling his hair before returning her hand to his shoulder.

"Of course, you do. But patience is the virtue of the good hunter, so you should learn some." There was amusement in her voice, and Kori smiled as he rolled his eyes. "For now, try drawing the bow again." When he did so, forcing his fingers together to the point of turning his skin white, so he wouldn't let the string go without meaning to again, he felt his mother force his shoulders down. "You are very tense. Relax. Breath in, breath out, and let the tension run out of your body, so you can aim right."

Despite the annoyed huff he let out, Kori tried to do what she said. His arms still shook a little with how much force he was putting on his grip, but as his mother's hands weighed him down, little by little in the following bits, he felt his shoulders relax.

"Good," she praised, and Kori felt a hush of pride wash over him. "Now, stop gripping the string with such strength. You'll just tire yourself out."

"But I'll lose my grip again!"

"You won't. Just release your grip slowly until you feel like it'll escape, and then stop."

Kori sent a doubtful look over his shoulder, but took in a deep breath and did what his mom said, slowly releasing his grip. Just like he knew it would happen, however, he couldn't feel when the string was about to escape his fingertips, and the string was released once again.

Once again, he looked down at his hand in disappointment. "I told you," he whispered. "I can't do it."

"Yes, you can, amabimouse (Xanthea)," his mother said, firmly, turning him around to face her. "You've just started, these things take time. Just like everything. You need to have the patience to learn. Hunting is not just running around after your prey ― you need to know what kind of animal you're looking for, so you can identify their tracks, you need to know where to hit them to take them down, and what to expect if they see you. You're dealing with nature here. It is beautiful and kind, but also dangerous, and you should respect it. And respect yourself and your learning curve."

Kori shifted in place, eyes lowering, not being able to hold her gaze. She sounded almost... desperate. It was weird, and he didn't like it, not at all. "How long does it take to know everything, like you do?"

His mother's laughter was clear and loud, and her hands moved from his shoulders to his back, pulling him into a hug. "Oh, I do not know everything. Just the opposite. I still miss a lot of my shots, I'm better at catching prey with traps." Àida's hand gently combed through his hair. He leaned against her almost instinctively, seeking the comfort of the touch. "Alright. Enough resting. Let's try again."

Kori'än groaned, got in position again, pulling the string, trying to get used to how much strength he needed to pull the string with, instead of just feeling it.
Last edited by Kori'än on Mon Aug 30, 2021 11:04 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 807
User avatar
Kori'än
Approved Character
Posts: 96
Joined: Sun Jul 04, 2021 8:23 pm
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Assistant Researcher
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Storybook
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Milestones

Miscellaneous

Events

Re: A Hunting Trip Starts Before the Hunt

It took him the better part of a break ― along with many, many words of encouragement from his mom ― for him to finally manage to hold the string for long enough. At the end of it, his arms hurt, his feet hurt, his head hurt, and he was so annoyed that he didn't even want to hunt anymore, just lay down and sleep.

"You did good," his mom praised him, and, despite his annoyance, Kori smiled, letting himself go and plopping down on the ground. "Let's go hunting, then?"

"Nooo," Kori'än moaned, pouting and laying back on the forest floor, facing up. "Sleep."

His mother laughed, sitting down next to him and placing each hand to his side. Kori frowned, then his eyes widened as he realized what was happening, but it was already too late.

As his mother tickled him, his laugh echoed in the clearing. "Mom! Stop! No!" Each word was punctuated by a fit of uncontrollable laughter as he tried to squirm away from her, but she was stronger, keeping him in place. It was only when he was already breathless, barely able to form a word between giggles, that she stopped, and he quickly rolled away, dirtying his clothes and hair in the process, but getting away from her hands. "So mean!"

Her only answer was a chuckle. "Since you don't want to hunt, tell me ― what are the steps of survival in the wild?"

Kori hummed, looking back to the light blue sky. "First, food. Then, water. Then you have to build or find a shelter." He was distracted enough by all the tickling that he didn't even notice that she was back on track with his lessons.

"And?"

"And," he repeated, but staying quiet for a moment, eyes closing as he concentrated. "Food. Water. Shelter. Food. Water... Not getting hurt!"

"Protection, yes," she chuckled, and Kori whooped in victory, causing her chuckle to turn into a full laugh. He liked making her laugh. "So, let's start with the first step. To get food, first you need to find it. How do you start looking for it?"

"I don't know," he whispered, feeling strangely close to sleep.

"Come on, Kori," his mom gently coaxed him. "What do you think?"

Kori groaned again, not wanting to think anymore. But he still sighed, biting his lip. "Hmmm... Footprints?"

"That's the most obvious trace an animal has passed through a place, yes. But what else?" Kori pouted, but his mom's words were gentle, and he couldn't get mad at her. Still, he felt himself slipping. Pressing his fists against his eyes, he hummed again, trying to think of other traces animals could leave behind.

They stayed in silence for such a long time that he started to feel anxiety creep in, pushing the sleepiness away. He desperately tried to search for an answer, but he couldn't find anything he thought was right. His breathing sped up, and he wished his mom would stop doing that. He didn't know! Why couldn't she help him? "I don't know..." He swallowed, the nervousness creeping in and making it even harder to think. "I don't know!"

"It's alright, Kori," she whispered, voice soft, shifting closer to him and bringing his head to her lap. "It's alright. When animals pass through a place, they'll disturb the foliage around them, or leave droppings behind. You may find half-eaten meals as well ― bitten plants or other animals' carcasses. Just remember you have to look beyond the obvious to find what you're looking for." She gently tapped his forehead. "Now, why don't you sleep?"

As if he was only waiting for this permission, he adjusted himself on his mom's lap, before closing his eyes, the comfortable warmth of the sun lulling him into sleep.
word count: 650
User avatar
Doran
Peer Reviewer
Peer Reviewer
Posts: 3792
Joined: Sat Sep 03, 2016 3:43 am
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Alchemist
Renown: 1192
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 10

Re: A Hunting Trip Starts Before the Hunt

Image
Kori'än:

Knowledge:
Shortbow: Correct posture for shooting
Hunting: Planning is key to success
Hunting: Every animal has its soft spots
Hunting: A good hunter needs patience
Fieldcraft: Steps of Survival: Food, Water, Shelter, Protection
Hunting: Identifying signs of animal trails to start tracking

Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: -
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 10
- - -
Comments: First of all, I like how you (frequently) use post templates that fit the theme of the thread!

That being said, I’ve really enjoyed the memory threads with Kori and his mother so far. She is a well-realized NPC. She gives me the impression of being gentle and caring, but firm when she needs to be. I like how she told Kori that he needs to have the patience to learn – and I appreciate that you paid attention to her relatively low Ranged skill and had her tell her son that she still misses a lot of her shots!

I also found Kori’s excitement quite entertaining. You write a young Kori very well in my opinion. It makes sense that a young boy such as him is tired after practicing with the bow for a break. The scene where his mother tickled him made me grin. I loved that!

I hope to be reading more threads with Kori and his mother soon!

Enjoy your rewards!
word count: 227

Mutations

N/A

Blessings

N/A

Worn Items

Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
Post Reply Request an XP Review Claim Wealth Thread

Return to “Wilderness & Seas”