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Ink Burning Darker than Black
Nalin meet's Lavana
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Ink Burning Darker than Black
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Ink Burning Darker than Black
Name: Nalin Marit
Knowledge:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: To fall correctly.
Linguistics: Noticing Verbal Nuances and Queue's
Seduction: The sideways glance and smirk
Seduction: Taking off a layer at a time
Seduction: Eye contact can be quite invigorating
Socialization: Not taking bribes when they you aren't there for what they think you are there for.
Socialization: Being careful of your words.
Socialization: Sticking to the truth
Storytelling: Stories about yourself
Endurance: Baring the sickness well.
Non-Skill
Lavana: Asks a lot of questions
Lavana: Failed to give her name
Lavana: Assumed I was some sort of Assassin
Lavana: Threatened to kill me.
Lavana: Likes how I look
Lavana: Tried to pay me to not kill her
Lavana: Calls herself a bitch.
Lavana: Doesn't believe I'm from Scalv
Lavana: "Cool story brah"
Almund: Butcher's Shop
Loot: 100 gn for guilty feels (Remember to add this to your ledger.)Just remember to add 10 gn to your living expenses whenever you get around to posting your job thread for wages, for your npc sister, and you're good.
Injuries: A little sniffle for the next few days, from exposure. Stay warm and drink plenty of fluids and a hot soup here or there. Maybe some tea would be good.
Fame: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Points: 15
I enjoyed the interaction here. You played Nalin's language barrier very well. It's often interesting to see how characters can work their way around that sort of impediment to interaction in roleplay. The tension here in the situation was good as well, with Nalin fighting off the effects of Ink Bloom disease while trying to communicate his desperation and need. All while trying to seem as non-threatening as possible. Not an easy line to tread when you're fighting against time.
Name: Lavana Tharn
Knowledge:
Discipline; Staying Vigilant Of Danger
Discipline; Realizing when eyes are wandering
Leadership; Taking charge to help a sick or injured person.
Leadership; Taking responsibility for your actions, and trying to make things right.
Business Management; Trying to buy out a would be assassin.
Business Management; Not allowing a customer to die on the floor, on your shift.
Tactics; Using the counter as a barrier from possible danger.
Strength; Lifting a man off the floor
Endurance; Using oneself as support
Endurance; Walking while carrying an injured comrade
Non-skill lores
Nalin; Not an assassin
Nalin; Possibly a victim of a mugging
Nalin; Claims his injury is ink bloom
Nalin; Easy on the eyes
Nalin; Soft of body.
Nalin; Speaks broken common
Loot: -100 gn from ledger for guilty reasons
Injuries:
Fame: 5 renown for helping a stranger and giving them money out of your own pocket.
Magic XP: Nope
Points: 15
Lavana's suspicion of Nalin and mingling attraction really added to the tension in this thread. The way you played her suspicion of a character she's attracted to rang very true. She seems like a hard-nosed individual, which makes her softening up toward and act of charity to Nalin all the more poignant. I very much enjoyed reading this thread.
Knowledge:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: To fall correctly.
Linguistics: Noticing Verbal Nuances and Queue's
Seduction: The sideways glance and smirk
Seduction: Taking off a layer at a time
Seduction: Eye contact can be quite invigorating
Socialization: Not taking bribes when they you aren't there for what they think you are there for.
Socialization: Being careful of your words.
Socialization: Sticking to the truth
Storytelling: Stories about yourself
Endurance: Baring the sickness well.
Non-Skill
Lavana: Asks a lot of questions
Lavana: Failed to give her name
Lavana: Assumed I was some sort of Assassin
Lavana: Threatened to kill me.
Lavana: Likes how I look
Lavana: Tried to pay me to not kill her
Lavana: Calls herself a bitch.
Lavana: Doesn't believe I'm from Scalv
Lavana: "Cool story brah"
Almund: Butcher's Shop
Loot: 100 gn for guilty feels (Remember to add this to your ledger.)Just remember to add 10 gn to your living expenses whenever you get around to posting your job thread for wages, for your npc sister, and you're good.

Injuries: A little sniffle for the next few days, from exposure. Stay warm and drink plenty of fluids and a hot soup here or there. Maybe some tea would be good.
Fame: Nope
Magic XP: Nope
Points: 15
- - -
Comments:I enjoyed the interaction here. You played Nalin's language barrier very well. It's often interesting to see how characters can work their way around that sort of impediment to interaction in roleplay. The tension here in the situation was good as well, with Nalin fighting off the effects of Ink Bloom disease while trying to communicate his desperation and need. All while trying to seem as non-threatening as possible. Not an easy line to tread when you're fighting against time.
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Name: Lavana Tharn
Knowledge:
Discipline; Staying Vigilant Of Danger
Discipline; Realizing when eyes are wandering
Leadership; Taking charge to help a sick or injured person.
Leadership; Taking responsibility for your actions, and trying to make things right.
Business Management; Trying to buy out a would be assassin.
Business Management; Not allowing a customer to die on the floor, on your shift.
Tactics; Using the counter as a barrier from possible danger.
Strength; Lifting a man off the floor
Endurance; Using oneself as support
Endurance; Walking while carrying an injured comrade
Non-skill lores
Nalin; Not an assassin
Nalin; Possibly a victim of a mugging
Nalin; Claims his injury is ink bloom
Nalin; Easy on the eyes
Nalin; Soft of body.
Nalin; Speaks broken common
Loot: -100 gn from ledger for guilty reasons
Injuries:
Fame: 5 renown for helping a stranger and giving them money out of your own pocket.
Magic XP: Nope
Points: 15
- - -
Comments:Lavana's suspicion of Nalin and mingling attraction really added to the tension in this thread. The way you played her suspicion of a character she's attracted to rang very true. She seems like a hard-nosed individual, which makes her softening up toward and act of charity to Nalin all the more poignant. I very much enjoyed reading this thread.
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