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Unto The Breach II: Supply And Demand

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Unto The BreachThe Lie Of The Land
Supply And Demand
Arc 720, 41st of Ashan
Darius knew of Cally's, but he'd never stepped inside. Much like its founder, Faith Augustin, the venue had a famous reputation, but few Scalvorians had had the good fortune to get close enough to know what it was really like. On another trial, the seafarer wouldn't be the sort of clientele that would visit such a place.

But this was not that trial.

He was on a mission, and although he was still not sure how the jigsaw might fit together, he knew that one of the critical pieces was the upmarket restaurant. It was with that understanding of the critical nature of his visit that he had come to the restaurant, just one trial after securing funds and medical supplies from the Order of the Adunih. His clothing was not particularly fine, and he was sure he wasn't dressed in the manner that a regular patron might be, but the confidence that Faith had in him was evident in his calm and controlled expression.

Pushing open the door, he looked about, noting the fine cloths and the shiny cutlery, but the desk was unmanned. It was then that he saw movement nearby. He looked up to see a feminine figure from behind, and her red hair and slim build made him wonder for half a moment if Yeva had a job at the restaurant. She was fond of making food, he knew, so perhaps she had found work as a waitress and simply hadn't mentio--

"Why, hello there, handsome."

Darius suddenly realised that the woman had turned around and was looking at him, her husky voice escaping a pair of painted lips that had curved into a coquettish smile. This, he immediately knew, was not Yeva!

"Good trial to you," Darius barely managed to say without stammering, though his cheeks were already burning beneath his beard.

The sight of his blushing seemed to cause the woman's blue eyes to light up in a mixture of humour and delight. She wore a cross-lace bodice that clung tightly to her form, over a green-sleeved dress. Her lips were coloured with lip stain.

"I'm Trudi. Now...table for one?" the waitress asked, before leaning forward and dropping her voice to a whisper. "Or should we make that a table for two?"

A playful wink followed, and for a few trills, all Darius could think about was how pretty the woman was, and his mouth felt dry. His brow furrowed, the confidence he'd felt as he'd entered the building quickly eroding.

"Uh...I'm here for Faith," he said, sending a furtive glance back towards the dining room.

"Oh?" Trudi responded, her voice betraying her surprise. "Don't you know she's married?"

"No, not like that," Darius managed to swallow, despite the lump in his throat, and he wondered if somehow the waitress had heard of the time he'd swept Faith off her feet. "She sent me here."

It was Darius' turn to lean forward, then, his eyes focused in a way that he hoped Trudi might recognise the seriousness of the situation.

"I am not here to eat," he spoke quietly, "but I do want food. A lot of food. I came here to speak with someone from Isonomia."

Naming the faction seemed to have an effect, and Trudi's demeanour changed. The flirtatious grin faded, and her posture straightened.

"Isonomia, you say?" she asked, pursing her lips in thought as Darius nodded his head in response. "If you're after a lot of food, you'd best speak with Jo'get. Come with me."
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There was an unquestionable sway to Trudi's hips as she walked ahead of Darius, leading him through the restaurant, but the bearded blond couldn't tell if she was still trying to be coquettish, or if it was just her natural gait. Either way, it didn't matter, for he still silently scolded himself for staring, and he felt a blush as he guiltily looked around to see if anyone had caught him. None of the diners appeared to have noticed, but it was his late mother's gaze that he was most relieved to have escaped.

The waitress pushed at a door at the back of the restaurant, and it swung open without complaint. She looked over her shoulder to make sure that Darius was following, but he couldn't meet her eye, and simply trailed behind her in silence.

On the other side of the door was the kitchen, and Darius could feel heat of the oven fires wash over him. A young man, a crop of black hair atop his head, was chopping onions at a speed that seemed impressive to the seafarer. Darius was not known for his culinary skills, so seeing someone who used them to earn a living easily caught his attention. The black-haired man paused for a moment to look at the newcomer, casting pale green eyes upon the visitor, but, seeing that Trudi was with him, he said nothing and resumed his food preparation.

The swaying hips that Darius had to remind himself to ignore led him to the opposite side of the kitchen. A cooling room, where foods were stored to retain their freshness, provided a refreshing contrast to the ovens and their incessant heat. As the pair approached, a brunette woman stepped out of the cooling room, holding the freshest looking tomatoes Darius had ever seen. They were bright red and perfectly red, their skin reflecting the natural light that was peeking in through a nearby window.

"Jo'get, this man is here for Isonomia," Trudi offered by way of a simple introduction. "He says Faith sent him."

The brunette nodded, then thanked, Trudi, who took her leave, flashing Darius one last flirtatious grin as she turned.

"I'm Jo'get," the brunette began, placing the tomatoes upon a nearby bench as she began to remove each individual vegetable from the vine. "How can I help you?"

"Darius Baer," the bearded blond responded. "Faith Augustin sent me."

"Yes, Trudi mentioned that," Jo'get replied, leaving the seafarer in no doubt that he had just stated the obvious. "Why did she send you?"

"I have a letter," Darius replied.

He reached into a pocket and pulled out the parchment, which he held out to the chef. Jo'get left the tomatoes, then, setting them back down on the bench and wiping her hands with a cloth before she took hold of the letter, leaving Darius in an awkward silence as she read the missive.
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Although the pause in their conversation lasted only a handful of trills, it seemed to Darius as though almost an entire cycle went past before Jo'get returned the parchment to him.

It felt long, he realised, because it was so important. Faith's reputation was so strong that he expected Isonomia to want to help, but he didn't know what they were capable of. All he knew was that he wanted to collect a lot of food.

Jo'get quietly read the letter, occasionally mumbling some of the words under her breath, but when she handed it back, she did so with a firm nod.

"We can arrange what Faith needs," the brunette assured him, "but it will take some time. Feeding a besieged fortress is no small task, but we have two farms and can use some of the food they produce to help the people at Storm's Edge."

Darius heard his own relieved sigh as he returned the letter to his pocket.

"Thank you," he responded. "Faith has sent some money. She assures me there will be enough nels to enable you to provide what you can."

"Ensure Trudi receives the funds," the chef nodded, "and we'll take care of the supplies."

Darius thanked her again, and left the kitchen, nodding politely at the young man who was still chopping onions.

Back at the front of the restaurant, he heard a playful giggle, and saw that Trudi was talking to an older gentleman who was seated at one of the tables. Darius was tempted to sit down, too. There was no lack of hunger in his stomach, and Cally's was known to be a fine establishment. It would certainly offer something more interesting than one of his homemade stews!

But such luxuries would have to wait, he knew, and he turned to leave. As he neared the door, he heard footsteps behind him and turned to see the flirtatious waitress had followed him.

"Not leaving without saying goodbye, I hope?" Trudi teased, causing the seafarer to once again fail to hide a blush forming across his cheeks.

"I..."

"Listen, I know Faith is helping the situation at Storm's Edge," the young woman continued, patting the sailor on his chest. "She'll need more than just food."

Darius nodded, still trying to regain his composure.

"Aye," he managed. "She has asked for other materials as well."

"And you'll need somewhere to store them," she added. "Isonomia has space."

Darius heard another relieved sigh leave his lips, and he thanked the waitress before leaving, a slight bounce in his step.

The previous trial, he had struggled to find room for the medical supplies he had received from the Order of the Adunih. Now he had one less problem to solve, and could focus on finding a ship captain who would be willing to take the supplies to Storm's Edge.
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Darius:

Knowledge:
Skill:
Discipline: Resist the wandering eye.
Etiquette: Don't refuse a gift.
Leadership: Being someone else's representative can give you authority.
Logistics: More storage space means more space for storage!
Negotiation: Sometimes, money talks.
Negotiation: Getting two for the price of one.

Non-Skill:
Location: Cally's
NPC: Cally's: Trudi, Waitress
NPC: Cally's: Jo'get, Sous Chef

Loot: -
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries:
Renown: 5, for acting on Faith's behalf.
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 10
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Comments: First of all, I really like that you include links in your posts. That makes it so much easier to understand what is going on and take a closer look at things. I’ve actually begun to include links in some of my posts because I found it so useful. I hope you don’t mind!

With that being said, I find your writing style very pleasant and easy to read, and the narrative flowed well. I was amused when Darius entered Cally’s, saw a redhead and thought that Yeva had found work as a waitress – only for that woman to turn out to be Trudi!

You captured Trudi’s personality very well in my opinion, and the way that she flirted with him (and his embarrassment) were quite entertaining to read. And when Trudi kind of assumed that he had a date with Faith … oh my, I loved that scene!

I’m glad that Jo’get agreed to help. Darius has 0 Negotiation and 0 Persuasion, but considering that Faith who is incredibly famous is involved, he had a letter from her and money, and Faith owns Cally’s (or owned? I’m not sure if Cally’s still belongs to her), I’d say that this was appropriate to level.

I look forward to reading the next chapter in this series!

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