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It was a strange and beautiful experience for Zoro. He felt as if it were a moment where he was both outside of his body and simultaneously experiencing every second completely. His senses were working overtime and in his eyes all the lights were brighter, in his ears all the sound clearer. He had always been interested in his ancestors and thought of them fondly and strove to enhance the good name of the clan.

Looking at the ghosts and wisps as they stepped into this place, Zoro felt inordinately honoured that they had taken the time to come and stand and light the way for this small group. He held on to Joy and whispered comfortingly to her. “You never need to fear the dead, Joy. And while your Uncle Zeb is here with you, you need fear nothing at all.”

They moved and arrived at what seemed to be the Garden they had come from. It was a perfect replica and Zoro knew that there were named on the monument which were names of friends and family. But he did not look for them, because he knew they would be here. He saw Darius looking around and he wondered if there was, perhaps, an individual he sought. When Darius said one word; “Ma”; Zoro felt his heart go out to his companion. It was a personal and private moment so he did not speak but simply allowed Darius as much space as he could give. He prayed silently to Xiur, asking the Immortal to watch over Darius and his mother and to guide them both in hope in whatever journeys they now faced.

Then, the Immortals came. First Famula, then Qylios, next Ziell and finally Saoire. They performed some kind of ritual and it was both awe-inspiring and beautiful. Zoro was unashamed of the tears which slowly trickled down his cheeks as he watched; he had seen many things in the Forging, but this moment was unsurpassed for both power and majesty.

They resurrected Bao and Zoro’s face showed his pure delight at having his friend back. Joy, too, was given a new appearance in Bao’s old body and the Immortals spoke of gratitude to them. This seemed most odd to Zoro, for he wanted nothing more than to pour effusive thanks on to the Immortals here for allowing him to be in this moment and share this experience.

Famula then said that they were going to a feast and Zoro blushed from his pupils out to his toes as his stomach suddenly growled in hunger. Looking at Joy he gave a grin to the child. “It’s party time,” he said and stepped through.






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Darius

Overview

I found myself overwhelmed with emotion re-reading your posts in this thread. Your writing in this thread is exquisite and it portrays Darius in a way which is believable and beautifully written. Writing is a craft and this thread - and your writing in it - demonstrate that perfectly. Lovely writing, amazing role-play, I hope you enjoy your rewards - they're very well deserved.

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XP: 20
Renown: 15
Forged Points: 10

Loot

Famula's Favour: Having stood in her realm Famula grants you a small glowing ruby in the shape of a perfect tear - or drop of blood - it is a single-use item which will allow you to access one ability from her Blessing. Any ability from Favoured or Adored may be accessed. Once that is done, the necklace remains as a glowing ruby and imparts to you (and you only - even if someone else wears it) the ability to see and interact with all ghosts.

Qylio's Gratitude: For your part in saving her grand-daughter, Qylios grants you a bond. You three are now "Bound" as per Bond (Major) The Bond only functions within 3000 feet of the Exalted. The Bond no longer dissipates beyond this distance. Images, feeling, and words can be willed across the Bond. The higher the sender’s Discipline skill, the more detailed the messages that can be relayed. . There is no glowing band, but if you are within 3000 feet of each other - it works. It works if two of you or all three are together.

Darius' Gift: Some time later, Darius dreams again of this trial and what happened. He sees, clearly, that it is his mother standing on the hill top looking at him and he watches as she looks proudly at him. He sees that she blows him a kiss and, when he mouthed "thank you" to her, she replies to him, mouthing back "Well done, my son." Darius awakes from that dream and the ruby necklace glows brightly, a warmth emanating from it. Sitting on the table next to the bed where he sleeps is a small lantern, beautiful and intricate. Underneath it is a note. Written in exquisitely intricate gothic script, it reads. "To Darius Baer, bearer of souls and servant of the people, I grant you this lantern. In many events in your life, you will wish that your mother could be there with you, and see what you have achieved. Light this lantern, and know that she will be there with you, watching. You may catch a glimpse of her, as you did that night, but you will be able to do no more than that, as she has moved over and is at peace. Should you ever need to speak with her again, then seek out a Zuuda who will be able to help you. " There are four signatures on that note. One from each of the Immortals he saw this trial, but the writing matches Famula's.

Knowledge

Detection: Hearing ambient sounds
Detection: Noting differences in how places sound.
Detection: The sense associated with an Immortal realm
Detection: A familiar face in a most unexpected place.
Discipline: The sudden onset of memories
Discipline: Preparing for a difficult day
Discipline: Overwhelming emotions
Discipline: Watching a friend die
Etiquette: There are situations where no rules of etiquette apply, yet they have expectations on behaviour.
Etiquette: Understanding a sombre task
Socialisation: Working as a team



Zoro

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I love how Zoro sees the world and how he reacts to people. His answer to Joy was just wonderful and it brought a tear to my eyes, I have to say. His wide-eyed-wonderment is somehow juxtaposed with his resolute nature. Your writing is lovely and I hope that you enjoy these very deserved rewards!

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XP: 20
Renown: 15
Forged Points: 10

Loot

Famula's Favour: Having stood in her realm Famula grants you a small glowing ruby in the shape of a perfect tear - or drop of blood - it is a single-use item which will allow you to access one ability from her Blessing. Any ability from Favoured or Adored may be accessed. Once that is done, the necklace remains as a glowing ruby and imparts to you (and you only - even if someone else wears it) the ability to see and interact with all ghosts.

Qylio's Gratitude: For your part in saving her grand-daughter, Qylios grants you a bond. You three are now "Bound" as per Bond (Major) The Bond only functions within 3000 feet of the Exalted. The Bond no longer dissipates beyond this distance. Images, feeling, and words can be willed across the Bond. The higher the sender’s Discipline skill, the more detailed the messages that can be relayed. . There is no glowing band, but if you are within 3000 feet of each other - it works. It works if two of you or all three are together.

Zoro's Gift: Some time later, Zoro dreams again of this trial and what happened. He sees that - as he walks with Joy in his arms - he is surrounded by the ghosts of his family. When he awakes, he sees that, sitting on the table next to the bed where he sleeps is a small lantern, beautiful and intricate. Underneath it is a note. Written in exquisitely intricate gothic script, it reads. "To Zoro Astrian, bearer of souls and servant of the people, I grant you this lantern. When you sleep with this lantern lit you will dream of your ancestors ~ these dreams will be true discussions with them and they will be able to impart their wisdom to you. " There are four signatures on that note. One from each of the Immortals he saw this trial, but the writing matches Famula's. (note: this is like the Bellinos Ability "Genetic Memory" and will stretch back as long as Zoro knows of. The people will be lucid, there's no tricks to this, and he will remember the dreams perfectly).

Knowledge

Detection: Hearing ambient sounds
Detection: Noting differences in how places sound.
Detection: The sense associated with an Immortal realm
Discipline: The sudden onset of memories
Discipline: Preparing for a difficult day
Discipline: Overwhelming emotions
Discipline: Watching a friend die
Etiquette: There are situations where no rules of etiquette apply, yet they have expectations on behaviour.
Etiquette: Understanding a sombre task
Socialisation: Working as a team



Bao

Overview

Bao! My heart is broken - he's so brave, he really is. I love how you write Bao, it's so emotional and heartfelt and true. Your ability to convey deep emotion in these posts is amazing and I find myself entirely pulled along by it. Beautiful writing - enjoy your well-earned rewards!

Points Awarded: Please Check UCP

XP: 20
Renown: 20
Forged Points: 10

Loot

Famula's Favour: Having stood in her realm Famula grants you a small glowing ruby in the shape of a perfect tear - or drop of blood - it is a single-use item which will allow you to access one ability from her Blessing. Any ability from Favoured or Adored may be accessed. Once that is done, the necklace remains as a glowing ruby and imparts to you (and you only - even if someone else wears it) the ability to see and interact with all ghosts.

Qylio's Gratitude: For your part in saving her grand-daughter, Qylios grants you a bond. You three are now "Bound" as per Bond (Major) The Bond only functions within 3000 feet of the Exalted. The Bond no longer dissipates beyond this distance. Images, feeling, and words can be willed across the Bond. The higher the sender’s Discipline skill, the more detailed the messages that can be relayed. . There is no glowing band, but if you are within 3000 feet of each other - it works. It works if two of you or all three are together.

Bao's Gift: Some time later, Bao dreams again of this trial and what happened. When he awakes, he sees that, sitting on the table next to the bed where he sleeps is a small lantern, beautiful and intricate. Underneath it is a note. Written in exquisitely intricate gothic script, it reads. "To Bao Bao, true servant of the people, I grant you this lantern. It allows you to visit Zuudaria should you wish to speak with any one of us, or ask anything of us" There are four signatures on that note. One from each of the Immortals he saw this trial, but the writing matches Famula's.

Knowledge

Detection: Hearing ambient sounds
Detection: Noting differences in how places sound.
Detection: The sense associated with an Immortal realm
Discipline: The sudden onset of memories
Discipline: Preparing for a difficult day
Discipline: Overwhelming emotions
Endurance: Death.
Etiquette: There are situations where no rules of etiquette apply, yet they have expectations on behaviour.
Etiquette: Understanding a sombre task
Socialisation: Working as a team


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