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9th of Ymiden 720

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Rorom
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Re: Taking Passengers to Immortal's Tongue





”Alright ye scurvies, settle down, she’s gonna tell us a story to pass the rest of the time!” Rorom said, calling the sailors who were about on break.

The rest of the crew ooh’d and awe’d at every point in her story. Many of them seemed to enjoy the idea of a pirate. Yet Rorom was a true blooded biqaj, and hated Pirates to his very core. They were dastardly and devilish creatures, who never earned their way through the world, but would only prey upon those who could support themselves. They got by on stolen fates, and this Scarlet Sparrow seemed much in the same vein.

Rorom had been born and raised in Bayward, near Ne’haer, and had to deal with their kind almost every trial of his youth. He owed his humble beginnings to their predations.

Still, he gave the story a chance. It leaned heavily into themes of greed and wealth and abundance, and a pirate lass that wasn’t satisfied with a limit to any of those things. It reminded Rorom of his own mark of Sombran, and how it’s presence in his life had led to such abundance. Had he earned it at all? Was he owing everything to Old Grey?

”Chrien’s Empty Belly…” Rorom whispered as he learned of the pirate lass’s eventual fate. Sunk by her own greed and wealth. Although it was certainly well deserved, the theme of having so much wealth that it sunk all of your prospects and could result in an ignominious end… It was enough to chill Rorom doubly, realizing that he was falling into that trap at Mirq’s bidding.

He decided then, that he would rid himself of this lot, and work backward toward a more austere existence. The kind where he’d enjoyed solitude and struggle. He missed it in some ways, afterall. He’d never had to worry about where his next meal would come from, nor how he’d pay for the latest repair to his ship, ever since acquiring Chamadarst’s mark.

The rest of the crew applauded Yeva’s storytelling skills, and hooted and hollered at the fate of the greedy pirate lass. Yet Rorom was troubled.

Then, the call came from the crow’s nest. ”Land Ho!” Immortal’s tongue was within spitting distance. Which meant they’d be sending along a longboat to bring their passengers aboard to shore.

”Well, lass, it seems it’s time for you to take your leave?” Rorom said, standing from his seat. He led her and a few other passengers to the deck, and then the longboat that hung from the side of the ship of the line. There, he went about gathering some barrels of his best pickled fish. These he placed within the longboat, for Yeva. ”Here lass, have some pickled fish fer the trip. No worries about payment now… Rorom is a generous captain.” he crossed himself twice, guarding against the evils of wealth and greed.

Then, they began to lower the longboat down to the water, once the passengers stepped into it. Rorom would help Yeva into the boat personally. The longboat would make a long trip into shore. After releasing the passengers, it would float back to the Gray Asylum, where it’d find berth and Rorom would sail back to Scalvoris, to consider the fate of his ship of the line. He had a lot of thinking to do, it seemed.

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Re: Taking Passengers to Immortal's Tongue

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Rorom:

Knowledge:
Seafaring x 4
Leadership x 2
Storytelling: x 5

Loot: -
Lost: -1 wp for the pickled fish.
Wealth: -
Injuries:
Renown: 5, for buying a masterwork ship.
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

Yeva:

Knowledge:
BAKING
A Novice Should Follow the Recipe Exactly
How to Make Simple Sugar Icing
Wait Until Sweets Are Cooled Before Icing

RUNNING
Being Tardy is a Great Motivator to Move Faster
Tie Your Shoes Before Racing Off

ENDURANCE
Pushing Through After a Poor Night's Sleep
Inexperienced Runners Will Feel Pain

LINGUISTICS
Translation in Real Time is a Challenging

STORYTELLING
Project Your Voice
Consider Your Audience's Engagement

Loot: Barrel of Pickled Fish, Cinnamon Rolls, some crumbs
Lost: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 10, for performing/storytelling to a large crew.
Magic XP: -
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15
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Comments: I liked how you summarized the events that led up to Rorom’s arrival in Scalvoris. He seems to have acquired a pretty impressive ship, and I appreciate that you described his new equipment. He must have been quite an impressive sight. Mirq had a point in my opinion when he talked about showing off your wealth!

Yeva’s first post instantly made me curious. I couldn’t help but wonder what wasn’t foamy, and then I found out that she was baking something. I like how determined she was to get the recipe to perfection, in spite of all the stuff that had already ended up in the compost bin.

Hopefully, she’ll at least get decent compost out of it!

You described her being overwhelmed quite well!

I found it interesting that Rorom seemed to suspect Yeva of being an Aukari. It makes sense though, considering that she has red hair.

I also thought that it was a good idea that Yeva offered Rorom and his companion cinnamon rolls. She has a point. It’s best to find out if they are good before leaving them for an Immortal. Being cursed over cinnamon rolls would probably suck, but for some reason, the idea amused me, nevertheless!

It’s good that Rorom loved the roll though!

I was surprised that Noille seemed to know some of Yeva’s family …

I really enjoyed Yeva’s story – and I liked that you also included her struggles when it comes to storytelling and translating a story in real time. That part of the thread was especially well-written in my opinion. All in all, it was quite an entertaining thread, and I loved the interaction between Yeva and Rorom. I wonder if there’ll be a thread about the actual visit to Cassion’s shrine though …

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