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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Another Fine Mess
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Skill Knowledge: (15 Maximum)
Bladed Combat: Longsword: Step aside defense technique.
Bladed Combat: Longsword: Footwork during a charge
Bladed Combat: Forward lunge
Bladed Combat: Aiming for an eye with a thrust
Bladed Combat: Change techniques for fighting armoured foes.
Ranged Combat: Bow: Maximising speed when drawing
Ranged Combat: Bow: Consider the placement of your companions
Ranged Combat: Bow: Neck shots are usually effective.
Ranged Combat: Bow: Eye shots
Ranged Combat: Bow: Take time to aim, especially for the eye
Strength: Carrying a heavy deer
Strength: Working in extreme cold
Strength: Keep foothold in the snow


Loot: 2 x lightstones, 2 x sn'oh deer corpses
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Arlo
Skill Knowledge: (15 maximum)
Detection: Peripheral vision can be confounded by colour and light
Detection: Ice sculptures are hard to spot details in
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Compensating for a moving target
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Take time to aim, especially for the eye
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Reload techniques under pressure.
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Identifying vulnerabilities
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Consider the placement of your companion
Storytelling: Using your environment
Storytelling: Tell a story actively, whilst walking around a room
Storytelling: Making up a story on the spot
Storytelling: Can explain something impossible to explain
Storytelling: Add small details to entrance your audience

Loot:
2 x lightstones
2 x sno'oh deer corpses.

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Last edited by Arlo Creede on Fri Sep 22, 2017 6:54 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 251
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Niv
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Magic Found in Nature
City/Area: Ne'hear (willow woods)
Notes/Warnings: I'm just claiming this for Niv.
Skill Knowledge (8+1=9)
Climbing: Up a chair
Linguistics: Reread as many times as it takes to understand
Navigation: Ask for directions
Poisons: Maknahocan is a plant that poisons Ether.
Field craft: Spotting bad mushrooms
Field craft: Make a shelter to protect from rain
Medicine: Spotting signs of poison in non tunawa.
Mount: Flying high to avoid danger.
Animal husbandry: Calming an animal with gentle petting.

General Knowledge:
Featherpaw: A bad kitty
Inali: Left her home because she kept secrets.
Loot: 70 GN
Injuries/Overstepping: not that I know of, I figured since tunawa can't use magic and are immune to poison that their ether couldn't be poisoned. I'll let the reviewer decide if she has lasting effects.
Fame: Niv went on a dangerous mission to get a herb to cure people.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope
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Last edited by Niv on Wed Sep 20, 2017 1:45 pm, edited 3 times in total. word count: 164
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Thread Name: [NIDHOFFNIR][MATURE] LET US DRINK, LET US PUNCH
City/Area: Uthaldria, Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Loads of violence
Requested Rewards:

Fridgar

Knowledge: n/a
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: Victory in single combat +4
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Alistair

Knowledge: n/a
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: Victory in single combat +4
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Varthakh on Fri Sep 22, 2017 10:17 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 67
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Nauta F'mos Geey
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: THE ETZORI IRON HEEL SHAKES THE RUST OFF
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards: Only for me, Neronin and Nightshade. Gangui has not been on site lately and Finn has not been replying to PMs so he can post up a review later if he wants to.
Knowledge:
  • Nauta
  • Disguise: Authority figures can get in anywhere
  • Meditation: Block out distractions with your own clothes
  • Discipline: Use the standard routine
  • Intimidation: Forceful pressure
  • Flying: Short distance gliding
  • Leadership: Scare into competence
  • Tactics: Looking like you belong where you don't
  • Stealth: Blend with the dark
  • Neronin
  • Deception: Lying about the Payment
  • Deception: Pretending Loyalty
  • Discipline: Taking insults without remark
  • Nightshade has said she is only interested in the points, so if you see anything you'd want to give her as knowledge, feel free.
Loot: For Neronin, 30 gold nels stolen from the payment to Gangui. For me, as per spoiler in post.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Probably for Nightshade for her public appearances if you see anything
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: [Immortals Tongue] The Shrine of Fei
City/Area: Immortal's Tongue/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope

Faith


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Immortal History: There were seven Original Beings
Immortal History: The rumoured eighth Original Being "Delana"
Immortal History: "The Scientist" Fei
Immortal History: "The Conqueror" Anox
Immortal History: The Originals once fought strange creatures
Immortal History: Fei was a peaceful Original
Immortal History: Fei liked to study the world
Immortal History: There's no evidence that dragons were real
Immortal History: The Originals may have left something where they died.
Immortal History: The Originals existed before humans
Immortal History: The Originals created The Immortals
Research: Cave paintings are not always reliable

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Good Deed - Helping a Spirit cross over?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Tio


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Immortal History: There were seven Original Beings
Immortal History: The rumoured eighth Original Being "Delana"
Immortal History: "The Scientist" Fei
Immortal History: "The Conqueror" Anox
Immortal History: The Originals once fought strange creatures
Immortal History: Fei was a peaceful Original
Immortal History: Fei liked to study the world
Immortal History: There's no evidence that dragons were real
Immortal History: The Originals may have left something where they died.
Immortal History: The Originals existed before humans
Immortal History: The Originals created The Immortals
Research: Cave paintings are not always reliable

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A

Arlo


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Immortal History: There were seven Original Beings
Immortal History: The rumoured eighth Original Being "Delana"
Immortal History: "The Scientist" Fei
Immortal History: "The Conqueror" Anox
Immortal History: The Originals once fought strange creatures
Immortal History: Fei was a peaceful Original
Immortal History: Fei liked to study the world
Immortal History: There's no evidence that dragons were real
Immortal History: The Originals may have left something where they died.
Immortal History: The Originals existed before humans
Immortal History: The Originals created The Immortals
Research: Cave paintings are not always reliable

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Last edited by Arlo Creede on Fri Sep 22, 2017 1:39 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 354
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Hart
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Mushrooms and Thorns.
City/Area: Oakleigh, Eastern Settlement, Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: This is a job thread; Hart does odd jobs.
Requested Rewards:
SKILL KNOWLEDGE (6 total)--
1. Gardening: How to properly pick mushrooms
2. Medicine: Unidentified mushrooms could be poisonous
3. Medicine: Wear gloves to protect the skin from poison
4. Medicine: Don't touch your face with contaminated gloves
5. Navigation: Keeping track of where you are in inclement weather
6. Navigation: Follow known paths

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
NPC: Lyla Thorn
Eastern Settlement, Faction: The Masons of Welles, a merchant family
Eastern Settlement, Faction: The Luthers of Welles, a merchant family
Eastern Settlement, Faction: The Thorns of Oakleigh, a merchant family

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: I think positive fame, for good deeds done (helping Lyla, helping the first messenger).
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.

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Last edited by Hart on Fri Sep 22, 2017 2:06 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 140
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Victor Amielle
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Thread Name: Out of the Rain
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Job thread!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Swallowing your food before you speak
Etiquette:Fraternizing with your superiors is not always a good idea
Research: The advantages of publishing your research results
Research: Organizing research papers
Research: If something seems strange to you, investigate!
Linguistics: Ancient Language: Hard to learn


Alison Jeeve: Associate Professor at the Institute of Metaphysics
Alison Jeeve: A mage
Alison Jeeve: Has bad manners
Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Fame: no
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no

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Appearance

Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

Items

Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Pash Raj'oriq
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Oh, I do like to be beside the sea side
City/Area: The Muse, Scalvoris Town Harbor
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Pash Vy’Ryn
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Gardening: Window boxes and planters for growing food
Gardening: Growing herbs in a ship’s cabin
Gardening: Using a ship’s cabin roof as a gardening space
Gardening: Keep vegetables and fruits cool when storing them
Logistics: Places to grow vegetables on a sloop
Logistics: Creative storage techniques with local materials

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Scalvoris Materials: Green sand to keep things cool
Scalvoris Materials: Snowcrystals to keep things frozen
Faith: Knows what to do with chocolate
Faith: Promised to let you taste test new sweets
Faith: Doesn’t name her plants
Faith: Has cooked for U’Frek himself

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Faith
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Seafaring: Basic layout of a ship
Seafaring: Sail placement, ropes, and accessibility of space

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Pash: Names his plants

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Yes. Good deed or two? (Cake, gardening tips, LOL.)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Last edited by Pash Raj'oriq on Sat Sep 23, 2017 8:06 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 196
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Gratitude in the House of Glass
City/Area: The Glass Temple, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nope.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledges:
Discipline: Worship as selflessness
Meditation: Music as an inward path
Meditation: Using the setting to determine focus
Meditation: The process of gratitude
Lute: Music as an offering of worship
Lute: A meditative tool

Non-Skill Knowledges:
Location: Scalvoris: Glass Temple
Glass Temple: A Place to Worship all Immortals

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Yes, public performance.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: Butterflies and Hurricanes
City/Area: The Muse, Scalvoris Harbor
Notes/Warnings: Nope.

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Skill Knowledges:
Caregiving: Looking after the person who is hurt, and the person who loves them.
Caregiving: Physical reassurance
Persuasion: No time to negotiate in an emergency
Rhetoric: Clear, precise description of what is
Singing: Harmonizing with a baritone
Singing: Learning words, tone and inflection
Singing: Emotion behind words
Singing: Can be healing and soothing for the person hearing it, and the person doing it
Singing: Technical details

Other Knowledge:
Scalvoris Storms Saun 717

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Good deed: Volunteering time, Putting herself in danger to help others, helping others etc.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

Kali’rial
Skill Knowledges:
Sailing: Storms can be violent

Other Knowledge:
Scalvoris Storms Saun 717

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Concussion (over a trial of unconsciousness), faint scar from shrapnel near her navel
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

Pash Vy’Ryn
Skill Knowledges:
Endurance: Sailing through pain
Endurance: Using physical work to set aside emotional trauma
Medicine: Caring for a Concussion
Medicine: Internal injuries: Best not to move a patient
Medicine: The Raft as an alchemical waterproof bandage
Seafaring: How to jury rig a storm anchor
Seafaring: Heaving-to in a storm
Seafaring: How to raise the sails in a storm
Seafaring: Keeping your footing on deck
Singing: Defiance in a storm
Strength: Resisting the toss of a ship in rough waters

Elithem Ability Knowledge:
Elithem Ability: Words of Empowerment (Minor), as requested here.
Words of Empowerment (Minor): Songs of encouragement

Other Knowledge:
Faith: Has been pregnant
Faith: Lost a child
Faith: Has a good voice for singing
Scalvoris Storms Summer 717

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor cuts, scrapes, and some serious bruising from being knocked about during the storm. A trial or two of soreness.
Fame: Surviving the storm, transporting Kali to safety, etc.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
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Last edited by Pash Raj'oriq on Mon Sep 25, 2017 1:38 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 324
Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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