Review Request 2.2.3

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Soren Kvistson
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Knock Knock
City/Area: Raelia, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: This is Soren's Attunement Initiation thread
Skills Used:
Negotiation - Expert
Attunement - Unskilled

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Negotiation x5
Attunement x1

Loot:
1 - Attunement Spark
1 - Attunement Witchmark, the Puzzle Eyes

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (Yes, Attunement, Novice)
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Doran
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Emean Exploration, Part 2
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Lucid dream. Doran explores other people's dreams.
Skills Used: Master Strength (151x/44k), Expert Endurance (76x/36k), Competent Psychology (26x/31k), Competent Detection (26x/35k), Novice Stealth (5x/7k), 14 Dreamwalking, 0 Navigation

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth x4
Strength x1
Endurance x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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N/A

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N/A

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Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Vega
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: ~~~~ Preparing for War: Anyone Want Anything in Rharne? ~~~~~~~
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Mathias

Skills Used:
Ranged (Competent), Detection (Novice), Socialization (untrained), mount (untrained)/animal handling (untrained)

Knowledge Requested:
Ranged (Shortbow) x 4, Fletching x 2, Mount x 2

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Yes please
Wealth Points:


Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

Vega

Skills Used:
Ranged Combat: Master
Hunting: Master
Mount: Competent
Fiddle: Master

Knowledge Requested:
Fiddle x 4
Animal Husbandry x 2
Ranged Combat x 2

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope

Renown: yes please.
Wealth Points: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: ~~~~ Stone & Fire ~~~~~~~
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Varlum

Skills Used:
Leadership, Strength, Endurance

Knowledge Requested:
Leadership x 4, Strength x 2, Endurance x 2

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Yes please
Wealth Points:


Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

Vega

Skills Used:
Leadership (Competent), Strength (GM), Endurance (GM)

Knowledge Requested:
Leadership x 4
Strength x 2
Endurance x 2

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope

Renown: yes please.
Wealth Points: Nope

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Devin Studies Medicine, Part 2
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Bad behaviour. Devin also briefly thinks about drugs. Devin thinks his drawing is great, but it's actually extremely bad!
Skills Used: GM Deception (106x/74k), Expert Medicine (86x/35k), Competent Detection (26x/11k), Competent Discipline (26x/19k), Competent Endurance (26x/25k), 0 Drawing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine x5
Drawing x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Last edited by Devin on Thu Mar 05, 2020 3:03 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 79

Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Yrmellyn Cole
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested


Thread Name: Lookout from the Towers
City/Area: Rharne, Storm's Edge
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:


Mathias
Skills Used: Detection (novice), Endurance (untrained)
Request
Skill Knowledge
Detection x 4
Socialization x 2
Discipline x 4

Non Skill Knowledge:
Yrmellyn Cole, an artist

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: 5 for taking part in the preparations for war
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: None


Yrmellyn
Skills Used: Competent Attunement (75x) Expert Detection (76x) Competent Discipline (26x) Novice Endurance(0x,7k)
Request
Skill Knowledge
6 posts, collab -> 11 knowledges. As I need tier specific attunement knowledge pieces to count for level up I specified them.

Attunement:Dousing in vain
Attunement:Dousing for deviations from a reference frequency
Attunement:Dousing for frequencies of holes in the ground
Attunement:Dousing for frequencie of dislocations in the ground
Attunement:Dousing for frequencies of colour shifts in the ground
Attunement:Dousing for frequencies of teeth
Attunement:Dousing for frequencies of monster
Attunement:Dousing for the frequency of heat

Detection x 2
Endurance x 1


Non Skill Knowledge:
PC: Mathias Blackwood
The frequency of Mathias Blackwood

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: 5 for taking part in the preparations for war
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes, Attunement
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: All the knights' horses
City/Area: Rharne, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used:
Animal Husbandry (Novice), Mount (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Animal Husbandry: soothing a skittish horse
Animal Husbandry: tying horses into a string
Mount (Equine): groom before saddling
Mount (Equine): leading horses while riding
Mount (Equine): trusting your mount to pick her own path
Mount (Equine): ground-tying a pony

Non-skill Knowledge
Faction: Lightning Knights
Location: Mistral Woods
Location: Mistral Village
Location: Storm's Edge

Loot: N/A

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Coroth
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: -‡- Blood and Aged Wood -‡-
City/Area: Fensalir/Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Violence, killing a beast.
Skills Used: Flying( 24), Sword (2), spear ( 25), bow (34), strength ( 24), tactics ( 7), common (15), discipline (10), field craft (5),

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Field craft - Carving of sticks into spears a lesson to be remembered from childhood.
Linguistics:Common - Pronouncing words the right way becomes important
Hunting - learning the daily habits of the one you hunt.
Linguistics:Common - Still learning how to form sentences.
Flying- Don’t use wings for a moment and you can aim better.
Flying - Cant hurl a spear straightforward while in flight, wings in the way

Loot: Bear carcass
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: 0
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Magic Experience?: (No)
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Yrmellyn Cole
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

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Thread Name: Call for reinforcements #1 The Mission
City/Area: Rharne, Storm's Edge
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:


Yrmellyn

Skills Used:

Expert Detection (76x, 25k)
Competent Discipline (26x, 14k)
Expert Painting (FT) (51x,30k)
Competent Drawing (26x, 14k)
Novice Linguistics (26x, 9k)
Novice Writing (7x, 1k)
Competent Persuasion (26x,20k)

Skill Knowledge

Persuasion x 4
Linguistics x 2

Non Skill Knowledge:
The travel times in the Rharne region

Loot: If it's possible I'd like to gain a new language, Cursive (easy)

Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: 5 for taking on a demanding campaign?
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: None
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Rei'sari
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Re: Review Request 2.2.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Save the Books!
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This thread was in response to a calendar event in Scalvoris, and Pegasus gave a reward for it that is listed in a modnote in the final post.
Skills Used: Endurance; competent (26/250, 14 knowledges), Flying; competent (75/250, 19 knowledges), Strength; novice (25/250, 1 knowledge)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Endurance: aching muscles after heavy exertion
Flying: is harder when you are carrying additional weight
Strength: lifting weight while flying
Strength: balancing the weight of a heavy object makes it easier to bear
Strength: bend your knees when lifting something heavy
Strength: shoveling snow

Loot: a set of encyclopedias in thanks - a full set of 20 beautiful leather-bound, gilt-edged etc. She is also awarded 3 wealth points (see modnote from Pegasus at bottom of final post)
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore muscles and the like; the typical aches and pains that result from breaks of heavy labor. They will fade after a trial or so.
Renown: Possibly slight (5) for helping to get the snow off of the library roof.
Wealth Points: none aside from the 3 WP that Pegasus awarded for the thread.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Rei'sari was formerly Ari'sora, but after getting a fresh start in life and a new appearance from Vega, she changed her name to Rei'sari.
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