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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: broken
City/Area: Quacia, Helice, Island of Koros
Notes/Warnings: n/a

Requested Rewards:

Kaelrik
Persuasion: Appealing to the humane side
Negotiation: The importance of knowing the value of services
Intimidation: Using Defiance and Lotharen traits to menacing effect
Psychology: Comparing past conduct with present to discern truth


Zarik
Caregiving: Getting a cup of water for someone who is injured.
Deception: Hiding a smile.
Deception: Can be used in tandem with Caregiving.
Deception: Withholding information until timing is convenient
Etiquette: Pulling up a chair for a chat.
Persuasion: The leverage of reuniting family.
Persuasion: Not being swayed by another’s anger.
Persuasion: Timing is everything.
Tactics: Revealing important information as if it is nothing.
Logistics: Tracking required supplies for a clinic.
Logistics: Some resources aren't accepted because of who it comes from.
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Kaelrik: Thought his brother was dead.
Kaelrik: Wants to see his brother again.
Kaelrik: Accepted six onyx nel as payment for his servitude under Alistair.
Kaelrik: Wishes to leave Quacia if his brother is alive.
Marcovera: Unknown Disease: infectious non-fatal rash that spreads barnacle-like blisters on the feet.
Personal: Talk to Alistair about possible resource exchange between Ashbrook and the Marcovera clinic.


Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a (well, no new injuries)
Renown: +5 for both; Zarik pausing in his talk with the clinic about resources to speak with Kaelrik instead.
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Please — consider me a dream.
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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: hooked
City/Area: Quacia, Helice, Island of Koros
Notes/Warnings: References to past slave abuse, drugged wine, inebriation, things get a little spicy - like very mild tho.

Requested Rewards:

Kaelrik
Storytelling: Recounting past events to create a story
Storytelling: Weaving an emotional tale
Philosophy: Fate vs. Reality
Philosophy: The Power of Hope


Zarik
Resistance: The stronger the dose, the harder it is to endure the side effects.
Resistance: Poppy-flower wine numbs pain and sedates.
Resistance: Method of intake: Drinking liquid.
Caregiving: Can be used in tandem with endurance.
Caregiving: Putting together an area so an injured person doesn’t have to get up.
Caregiving: Setting up a bed with pillows.
Caregiving: Cooking a warm, filling meal for an injured person.
Seduction: Compelled by sympathy.
Discipline: It's tough to act disciplined while intoxicated.
Intimidation: Purposefully crossing personal space boundaries.
Intimidation: Reminding someone of the limiting situation they are in.
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Kaelrik: met Alistair before he was a slave, in Ne'haer.
Kaelrik: was abused as a slave.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5 for both, the townies would have seen Zarik help injured Kaelrik from the clinic to the cottage across town.
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Learning to Dance
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance: Wind can carry you when you run
Defiance: Using the wind to sweep away projectiles
Endurance: The pains and aches of a long run
Running: Using defiance to gain speed
Running: Don’t stop suddenly
Shield (Buckler): Blocking a projectile reflexively

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Navyri
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: A Thief's Understanding
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A man gets choked to death.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Stealth: Strike During Moments of Vulnerability
Ranged Combat (Longbow): How to Knock an Arrow
Ranged Combat (Longbow): Dark/Enhanced Vision Helps Shooting
Unarmed Combat: Modified “Ezekial” Sleeve Choke
Tactics: Don’t Stop Till Their Heart Does
Tactics: Strike During Times of Vulnerability

Loot: 20 rare stone tiles
Injuries/Overstepping: Yes
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
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"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Waves and Whips
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance: Controlling a whip of flame
Defiance: Sensing when an element is reluctant
Endurance: Experiencing a burn
Polearm (Scythe): Fighting along with fire
Tactics: Remembering tactics seen in passing
Tactics: Herding enemies with fire

Edyn: Very bad at explaining things

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Defiance
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Cirrina
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Fortune Favors the Bold
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: I don't think so, awkward flirting maybe
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rak:
Negotiation: Getting a service for free.
Running: Fear can speed up your run.
Running: Try to avoid brambles and obstacles while running.
Discipline: Focusing on what matters.
Discipline: Getting a grip on one's fear.
Socialization: Introducing yourself to a stranger.
Investigation: Guessing that there's more to somebody than meets the eye.
Intelligence: Cirrina: Sexy fortune teller that has a secret.
Intelligence: Fortune tellers have ways of prying information out of people.
Meditation: Calming the heck down.

Cir:
Skill
Attunement: Understanding other peoples notes
Attunement: Using notes to create lies
Attunement: Each not has their own sound
Attunement: Knowing when you will overstep and stopping
Empathy: Feeling other threads
Empathy: Subtle works better than force
Seduction: Using body language
Seduction: Teasing
Seduction: Casual Flirtation
Deception: In fortune telling, honest works betters than true lies

Non
Rakvald: Easy to decieve
Rakvald: Has a son
Rakvald: Is a mage too
Rakvald: Is attracted to you

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: 5 for telling a bad fortune and 5 for Rak for getting his fortune told?
Wealth Points: Newp
Collaboration: Yup
Magic Experience?: Yes, for Cir.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: ~~~~ Fire Forged ~~~~~~~
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Arlo

Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Timing is everything
Combat: Sword: A quick warm up is better than no warm up at all
Combat: Sword: Gauging the difference between your speed and that of your opponent
Woodworking: Whittling wood to pass the time.
Woodworking: Sharpening a stick

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Maybe - fighting / acrobatics in public
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

Vega

Knowledge:
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Matching play to the rhythm of the world
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Using a metronome to catch a beat
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Focusing on one person's movement when you play
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Using a jaunty tune to speed someone up.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Slowing the tempo down in increments
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Playing while you have a fever helps to ignore the symptoms
Mortalborn Ability: Tempo: Slows someone up or slows them down
Mortalborn Ability: Tempo: Can not be used in increments.

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Maybe - playing the fiddle that well in public
Wealth Points:


Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: (White Forrest) Homested
City/Area: Viden The White Forrest
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Field Craft: Use poles of different sizes
Field Craft: Work early in the morning
Detection: Spotting a fresh hole
Construction: Make poles shorter
Meditation: Curve your excitement
Animal Husbandry: Let your animals know where you are going

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: V. With Regards
City/Area: Mistral Woods, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Strong Language and Violence

Let's get reeeeeeaddy to... ah, you know it. Enjoy!

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Abrogation: Backlash
Abrogation - Backlash: Redirects Force Back Towards an Attacker
Abrogation - Backlash: Powerful and Effective, But Draining
Endurance: Withstanding the Strain of Maintaining an Abrogation Shield
Poisons: Lightning’s Grasp
Shield (Round): Angling the Shield So an Incoming Blow is Redirected


Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: Medium Abrogation Overstepping (painful left arm, nausea, etc.)
Renown: Not yet
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: Nah
Magic Experience: Yes
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Common Speech | Thoughts | Ith'ession Speech | Speech of Others
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Nasod
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Just a dude kidnapping another dude
City/Area: Koros, Helice {Quacia}
Notes/Warnings: Nude Dosan
Requested Rewards:
Fridgar
Caregiving: Comforting your student when he's afraid.
Caregiving: Helping your student overcome his fear.
Caregiving: Assuring your student that a stranger won't harm him.
Caregiving: Praising your student after a job well done.
Caregiving: Offering your share of food to your pet.
Hunting: Some species of snake are arboreal.
Leadership: Guiding your follower through situations in which they're scared.
Leadership: Establishing a plan for you and your follower.
Leadership: Establishing a HQ with your follower.
Stealth: Prowling across sand.
Teaching: Demonstrating how to break open a coconut.
Teaching: Teaching the becoming technique 'Unleash'.
Teaching: Giving useful tips for killing a snake.
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Dosan: Had never left Quacia before he met you
Dosan: Afraid of trees
Dosan: Conquered his fear of trees with your aid
Dosan: Very fond of your Lotharro totem
Dosan: Made a Boa Constrictor totem
Dosan: Prioritizes weapons over clothes
Dosan: Glad to be in Helice with you
Dosan
Becoming: Unleash
Becoming{Unleash}: Requires far more ether than a normal shift in form
Becoming{Unleash}: Is useful in emergencies
Becoming{Unleash}: Cuts the time of transformation down significantly
Detection: Feeling a hostile presence
Detection: Instincts warn of Danger
Strength: Putting force into a bite
Strength: Killing a beast with a bite
Climbing: Climbing trees
Climbing: Sticky limbs make it easy
Psychology: Deeprooted fear is hard to overcome
Psychology: Not all trees want to eat you
Field Craft: Turning Snake fangs into Totems
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Fridgar: Showed me Trees aren't dangerous
Fridgar: Brought me to a whole new world
Fridgar: Introduced me to Coconuts
Fridgar: Is a wonderful mentor
Fridgar: Shown me how to shift as he does
Fridgar: Is kind to me
Fridgar: I love him no matter the form
Injuries/Overstepping: Dosan: Sore body from the rapid transformation
Renown: Dosan: Showing up to a new place Naked
Loot: Dosan - Boa Constrictor Totem
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (Yes - Dosan Learned new ability)
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㊮ "I'm nothing more than a snake. With cold skin and no emotions, as I slither around searching for prey with my tongue, swallowing down whoever & whatever looks tasty." ㊮
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