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13 Saun 717

"Are you alright?!" The alarm in Judah's voice triggered something inside Aeodan, but the younger twin suppressed the feeling. He was appreciative of Judah's concern, but would not admit that to himself. Not for the reasons for which he felt it. Instead, he just plowed ahead, shrugging.

"I suppose so. It was strange. One moment, I was in the mound by myself. The next, I was someone else, and there was another in there with me. I am sure it was a vision of some kind, I just don't know how or why. And since last night, I haven't had any recurrences." Aeodan's eyes landed on Judah's, and he could see the concern inscribed in them.

Judah was the one waiting this time, as Aeodan was late for their scheduled training session. The events of the trial before had left him worn out physically, and more curious than he'd ever been mentally. So he'd spent most of the night trying to recall every small detail of the fever vision about the LYCHL and the shaman. Almost every bit of the darkness was gone by the time he finished scribbling furiously every detail he could recall. And then, he realized, he was supposed to have met Judah at first light for another training session.

Aeodan was exhausted, but being in Judah's presence invigorated him. Still, he did not feel particularly keen on being thrown around that trial, and he knew that Judah could sense that in him.

"Well, I think this trial's lesson will be a bit easier on your physical body. This lesson focuses on control. Rather than learn the Tilao, here you are instructed to learn your opponent. If you know them, know their weaknesses. If you are just meeting them, observe them and learn their weaknesses. If you see a man limping, aim for the wounded leg. If you see a scar on a man's forearm, aim for that forearm. Once you have identified that weakness, you are in control."

Judah reached out and laid his large hand on Aeodan's leg. Fire tingled up his spine, but Aeodan held his composure. Quickly, Judah squeezed his thumb and middle fingers together, sending a blindingly agonizing pain through Aeodan's body. He yelped in pain.

"Hey!" He shoved Judah's hand away, and the soldier's trademark mischievous smile pulled at the corners of his lips. Aeodan just glared at him.

"I've seen the way your legs stiffen at too much time in one position. I see how you gingerly trade pressure between them when you first stand. You've done well to mask them, but I look for those things. Always know the weakness, and you're always in control."

Aeodan's face burned with rage. He sneered at Judah.

"And you think you need to know my weaknesses? You seek to control me?" Aeodan's words were acid. Judah, though, just shrugged.

"I seek to control every situation. Not because I think you're a threat, or that you'd want to hurt me at all... But because being in control means not having to ever worry. It's why, at any given time, I am far more likely to survive than those around me. I am ready and waiting for any random passerby to become an enemy. And I intend to survive." He shrugged, his candor lessening Aeodan's anger. Instead, it was replaced with embarrassment.

"I'm sorry." He muttered it, and Judah just chuckled.

"No need, Aeodan. I put pressure on your legs to show you that I'm always observing, even I don't think I'll need the information. Be constantly vigilant, and you'll never be out of control."

Aeodan gritted his teeth. Every sentence that Judah had uttered contained the word 'control'. Why in the nine hells was it so important?

"You keep saying control. Why is being in control so important?" Aeodan's tone was far more accusatory than he meant for it to be. Judah seemed not to notice.

"Because if you control an opponent, you don't have to kill him to defeat him. You can subdue him without a variable factor. If he is in control, you're forced to act out of desperation. That leads to death."

Aeodan could tell that Judah was speaking from personal experience, but chose not to push the subject. If he wanted to, Judah would offer the information willingly. Until then, Aeodan would just go along with his philosophy.

"I understand that. How does this control translate into what I've learned?" Aeodan asked, his mind ever seeking to make the connection between things. Judah smiled again, and something in Aeodan stirred.

"This session, we will build on what we learned last time. Last time, I taught you how to take an opponent from a position of opportunity to a position of defense. Now I'm going to show you how to turn that forced transition into a way for you to control your opponent."

With that, Judah stood. He held out an arm to help Aeodan to his feet, and then stood across from him.

"In the interest of not throwing you, shall we start from the ground position?" Judah showed Aeodan how to lay like he'd just been thrown. Gripping Aeodan's wrist, Judah applied pressure to his elbow joint, pushing it the wrong way.

"Ow!" Aeodan protested.

"This joint is an important one. A little pressure can go a long way here, and with the right application, you can force an opponent to submit to you... Or break his arm to remove the threat. Watch me as I do this, slowly."

Still gripping Aeodan's wrist, Judah wrapped one leg over his upper torso, and the other on the lower half. In between, Aeodan's arm was held firmly against Judah's body. When he leaned backwards, pressure was applied to both Aeodan's shoulder and his elbow at once. He instinctively tightened his arm muscles, which made the pressure hurt more. Almost immediately, Judah let go.

"I applied literally no strength to that hold. That joint lock is called an "armbar". After you throw an opponent over the shoulder, you can apply this joint lock immediately. You're already holding their wrist. Just wrap your legs like I have, and lie backwards. Natural force does all the work for you, and your opponent works against himself trying to escape."

He smiled and let Aeodan up, lifting him the last few inches.

"Try on me a few times before we go onto the next hold, okay?" He assumed the position and allowed Aeodan to learn how to do the armbar. With a few exceptions, Aeodan pick the move up quickly. Judah was very impressed, and Aeodan... Aeodan felt something too.
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Sweat and musk swirled together, an intoxicating cocktail in such close proximity. Lying on top of him, his lower body angled off of Aeodan's, Judah gripped Aeodan's wrist and elbow. Aeodan's breathing caught in his throat, and Judah looked at him.

"Am I putting too much pressure on your chest? Remember to breathe. You grow weaker when you don't breathe." Judah smiled as Aeodan consciously pumped his lungs full of air.

"Now, after a side-hip throw, you land in a position similar to this. While you could use your elbow to strike the face, or your knees to strike their ribs, you afford yourself another opportunity to force them to submit, or lose the ability to use a limb. Zin'mataa practitioners call this 'kih-murah', or 'bent arm'. With this technique, you use the strength of your form and the hesitation an opponent exhibits after they are thrown. It needs to be done quickly, and smoothly. If you can make the transition into the attack and lock in the hold, the opponent's shoulder is in jeopardy."

With confidence, Judah grabbed Aeodan's pants with his right hand. Where he grabbed, just above Aeodan's crotch, sent lightning through Aeodan's nerves. He restrained himself, though, as Judah continued through the hold. Judah's right knee came up and rested on Aeodan's stomach, and the young Burnett tried to use his left arm to push the soldier's knee from crushing his lungs. As he did so, though, he realized a trill too late that it's exactly what Judah had wanted. He released Aeodan's pants and grabbed his wrist, pinning it to the ground. Quickly, he snaked his left hand over Aeodan's face and under his arm, locking his hand around his own wrist. The right knee went back, and the left came up, angling Aeodan up and off the ground. Then, Judah applied pressure to his own wrist, bending Aeodan's arm backwards and straining the shoulder.

"Ahhh! That hurts! Stop!" Aeodan howled into Judah's armpit, and the sound muffled. Immediately, though, the pressure lessened. Judah released the hold and leaned back on his knees, towering over Aeodan.

"It's supposed to. You don't want to tickle your opponents." Judah smiled and poked Aeodan gently in the ribs, eliciting a giggle from the smaller boy. Aeodan wrapped his hands around his waist and rolled away.

"You're right, I don't! But you don't have to rip my arm off trying to show me how to rip someone's arm off." Aeodan rubbed his shoulder with his right hand, massaging the pain out.

"If I don't show you how it feels to be in it, you won't know if it feels right when you have an opponent in it. Aeodan, you have to understand... Zin'mataa is dangerous. Just because it isn't lethal does not mean it isn't effective. It's about disabling your opponent, and inhibiting a limb is the best way to do so."

Aeodan's glare dripped with implied sarcasm, and Judah only smiled again. He reached out and patted Aeodan's left shoulder, being sure to avoid jostling him too much.

"If you want, we can switch places. I will walk you through how to apply the hold." He waited until Aeodan nodded, slowly. Judah laid backwards and Aeodan assumed the position Judah had held only bits before.

And Aeodan wondered if Judah felt the same rush of excitement that he had when he was underneath the larger man. He puts his weight on Judah's chest, and the man's breathing didn't change in the slightest. Aeodan could feel Judah's hot breath on his neck, and he blushed fiercely.

"Now. With your right hand, grasp my belt. When you do so, I will instinctively try to remove your hand. This is a good thing. Try it."

Aeodan followed the instruction, grasping Judah's belt. The soft flesh of his hand brushed the hardness of Judah's stomach, as well as the hair that grew there. Something stirred in Aeodan's insides, and he blushed again. Judah was either too gracious to point it out, or too oblivious to notice. Either way, the split trill that it took Judah to grab at Aeodan's hand felt like an eternity of lust and embarrassment.

Finally, though, Judah grabbed at his hand. Aeodan reacted and grabbed his arm, pinning it to the ground like Judah had done to his.

"I remember this part. Now I switch my legs and wrap my other arm around you, yes?"

Judah smiled, and Aeodan reversed his legs, bringing his left knee up to Judah. This allowed him to take his left arm over Judah's head, and behind through the gap left between their arms. He locked his thin fingers around his fragile wrist, locking them together.

"Great. Now, pull your wrist with your other hand, and twist my arm. Gently." He chortled, and Aeodan applied pressure. After a few moments, Judah tapped his free hand against the ground, prompting Aeodan to let his arm go. A broad smile spread across his face, and Aeodan lied on top of him for a few more trills.

"Aeodan? We can stand up now." Judah's voice was full of mirth.

"Oh, right! My apologies." Aeodan scrambled to his feet, and he helped pull Judah to his as well. The two men stood there, staring at each other for a moment. There was a look of admiration in Judah's eyes, and Aeodan recognized it quickly. He smiled meekly as Judah brushed some dirt from himself.

"Well done, Aeodan. Truly. Take a bit or two and we'll practice the last hold." He put a heavy hand on Aeodan's shoulder, and the Burnett boy smiled coyly. Aeodan was appreciative for Judah's teachings... But there was something else there too.
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The two sat next to each other in the grass, the heat of the Saun suns beating down on them. Leaned back on his elbows languidly, Judah watched as Aeodan spoke feverishly. Judah had asked him about the Jourkadri more, trying to gauge more of his interests. Aeodan, to Judah, was an enigma. And the same could be said of the reverse.

"The thing is... It's impossible to know everything. If you consider the amount of time that Idalos has been around as a place... The number of languages that have risen and fallen in that time... The chances are, the languages we have recorded are likely the exception and not the rule. The sheer size of it all is... Overwhelming."

Aeodan sighed, and Judah chuckled. It drew Aeodan's gaze, and when their eyes met, fire spread in Aeodan's nerves. He smiled nervously. Judah, though, just leaned his tanned face back and allowed the sun to beat down on it. A deep breath of fresh air followed.

"But doesn't that just make the mystery all the more worth investigating? I've always been the type to wander into the dark to see if the ghost stories are true." Judah smiled, but he didn't see Aeodan's look of awe. The salt-of-the-earth soldier constantly surprised the Burnett boy with his humility and philosophical acceptance of things.

"And are they?" Aeodan's voice was soft, which prompted Judah to finally look at him.

"Sometimes." He smiled, sitting up to stare into Aeodan's eyes for a moment. "Ah. I think we should get to work. We don't want our muscles to tighten too much before we finish this sessions. Are you ready?"

Aeodan nodded, suddenly grateful for the excuse to move from that spot of eternity, pushing himself onto legs that were already beginning to ache. A subtle groan escaped his lips, and Judah caught it.

"Sore already? That's a weakness." He grinned, and Aeodan swung at his shoulder. He missed, and Judah caught his wrist, pulling him in quickly. As close as they were, Aeodan could smell the slightly sour scent of Judah's breath. It did not repulse him.

"Easy, tiger. It was a joke," came the smooth retort to Aeodan's violent outburst. Judah and Aeodan both smiled at each other before they disengaged.

"Now. You've learned how to incapacitate a foe by injuring their shoulder, and their elbow... But what about hindering their mobility as well? Many larger opponents are already going to be slower, so if you damage their locomotive limbs, they are bound to stay put. You control their movement radius, you control their ability range. So I'm going to teach you a very effective leg lock called the 'kneebar'. Similar concept to the armbar, except that it's going to happen much more quickly, and actually requires less effort to break the limb. Lie down."

It took Aeodan everything in his power not to imagine Judah saying that in a different context, but Aeodan followed the teacher's instructions. Lying down on his back, Judah placed his right leg in between Aeodan's. Aeodan's legs were bent so that the knees were facing up, and Judah wasted no time in quickly reaching down and pushing Aeodan's legs, spinning so that he was sitting atop Aeodan's hips and facing away from him. Aeodan was so surprised at the speed, he allowed Judah to reach down and grab his heel, and when the soldier fell to the left, he'd clenched his thighs around Aeodan's knee. Slight pressure was applied as Judah straightened slightly, and Aeodan was forced to submit.

"When a larger opponent comes at you, you're not able to do as many of the throws as you'd like. They'll overpower you, and you don't want them to do that. Instead, surprise them by meeting them head on. Low. They come in, you dive at their legs, hook behind the knees, slam them right then. The trill they are down, you assume the position I started in. From there, push the knee down and turn, sitting on their hips. Like a stone gargoyle, this is how you'll be positioned to grab the heel."

Judah waited for Aeodan to nod before he continued.

"This hold is an easy one to break, if you're not careful. From here, you can push against my thighs with your feet, and typically, you'll have more leverage with a whole leg than I do with just my body. So it's very important that you execute the lock quickly, and for the love of Ethelynda, cross your damn feet. Leaving your feet uncrossed... Here, I'll show you."

With that, Judah unlocked the hold his toes had on each other. The pressure on Aeodan's knee lessened considerably, and when Judah began to straighten up, it took far more motion for the pressure to build. Aeodan actually resisted the lock, pressing his left foot against Judah's rear and pushing. The soldier would have slid off if Aeodan had actually been trying to escape.

"Very good! So you see, the leverage on the knee is far greater if you lock your feet together, and it offers the opponent much less a chance of escape." Judah smiled and released Aeodan's leg. The sudden coolness of absence was felt along his thigh, and Aeodan realized he was yearning for Judah to reapply the hold. He shook the thought from his head.

"Any questions?" Judah's dark eyes fell on Aeodan.

"One. What happens if the opponent realizes my attack before I apply the pressure? Wouldn't that put me at a great disadvantage?" Aeodan's earnest look brought a smile to Judah's face.

"Don't let him realize it. Practice this hold until you can break his leg in trills flat. Control him." The knowing smile returned to Judah's face. "Your turn. We'll start from me approaching. As I get close enough, shoot low for my knees. Buckle them, lift and slam me. Use that to start your hold."

Judah came on quickly, and Aeodan ducked and swept his legs. The soldier offered only minimal resistance, such as an unsuspecting opponent would. As soon as they hit the ground, Aeodan placed his right leg in between Judah's bent knees, pressed down on his leg and spun. When he sat on Judah's hip, he hesitated. He felt something brush against his calf, and it was all the distraction Judah needed to buck Aeodan off of him.

"What happened? You had it!" Judah was exasperated.

"I... I lost focus." Aeodan admitted it meekly, and expected the cunning remark from Judah to chastise him. None came.

"I understand that. Here, with me... I am grateful to know that you did. In a real combat? Your head would have been mashed like this dinner's turnips. Do it again. And this time, save your fantasies for when the suns go down."

Aeodan glared at Judah, impressed by his observational skills but cowed by his flippant attitude. Judah approached again, this time more quickly. He resisted Aeodan's slam more too, though the Burnett boy did get him down. It took only a few trills, and Aeodan was in position, lying on his side with Judah's heel clutched in his hands and his knee firmly between Aeodan's thighs. Aeodan extended his position, and Judah tapped quickly, though not as quickly as Aeodan had.

"Very well done, Aeodan! You're a wonderful student." Judah's voice was all awe and warmth. Aeodan beamed at him as the two climbed to their feet.

"We will practice that for another break and call it a trial. Does that seem fair?" He asked Aeodan, and the younger man nodded with a smile.

"More than fair, Judah. Thank you." With that, they set to finishing their practice so that Aeodan may return to the estate proper for supper.
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Aeodan
Skill Knowledge:
➳ Endurance: Resisting joint locks
➳ Unarmed Combat (Zin'mataa): Joint locks after throws
➳ Unarmed Combat (Zin'mataa): How to apply an armbar
➳ Unarmed Combat (Zin'mataa): How to apply a 'kih-murah'
➳ Unarmed Combat (Zin'mataa): How to apply a kneebar
➳ Unarmed Combat (Zin'mataa): Controlling an opponent means dictating their capabilities

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➳ Judah: Philsophical
➳ Judah: Appreciates your attraction
➳ Judah: Relaxed and easy-going

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So, because I’ve read this once and I remember you mentioning in chat somewhere to me that you’ve been really trying to work on your dialogue skills, it was kind of fun to re-read this solo with that perspective in mind. The dialogue between Aeo and Judah is great, though I find Judah just a little more stiff in terms of sentence structure than your more natural Aeodan voice. Nothing major, though, and it’s an observation I can’t entirely put a specific quote to in order to support that, so don’t hate me. That said, I think what made the dialogue here more was reading between the lines and what went unspoken. Very nice interplay between training and … other thoughts.

If you see anything I’ve missed or have a question, please feel free to drop me a PM!
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