A Linguistic Affair

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A Linguistic Affair

Ymiden 25, Arc 710

Almost three decades had passed since the Mortalborn had last visited the Academy of Viden that was renowned throughout Idalos, and almost three centuries had passed since he had begun his research. He had been both a teacher and a student at one point, but this time he was simply masquerading as a scholar who had travelled all the way from Ne’haer because he needed help with a scientific problem that he had come across and, perhaps, to eventually receive his diploma.

For the past couple of months he had in vain tried to create a potion that would increase a patient’s chance of survival by raising their blood pressure as well stimulating their cardiovascular system. He had experimented with various plants that he knew to have hypertensive properties, such as rosemary and hyssop, as well as some substances that were derived from animals, but found them to be lacking. He needed something different, something much more powerful and faster acting.

There was a second reason for his visit as well, although he kept that reason to himself for few would understand why he would mourn at the grave of a mage that had died two hundred and fifty arcs before.

The city had changed little since he had last been there, and the Atheneum still looked exactly the same, and thus it only took him very little time to find the books he was looking for, several thick, leather bound volumes that dealt with the principles of chemistry and alchemy. He pulled one of them out of the shelf very carefully for he did not want to damage the ancient paper and leafed through it, frowning only very lightly as he did so.

It was, as he had half expected and half feared, mostly written in the Ancient Language that he was not particularly familiar with. In the long run that would only be a small hindrance though. There were dictionaries and books on grammar that would help him make sense of the text that he needed. One didn’t need to be able to speak a language or even know how to pronounce those foreign words in order to be able to translate them.

With that thought in mind he went to another section of the library, past a sculpture of Ziell that seemed to be looking at him accusingly or perhaps simply watching him. Several bits later he finally took a seat at an empty table and placed a stack of books in front of him before he took of his fine dark coat and draped it across the back of his chair. It would take a while until he was finished, and he didn’t want to end up drenched in sweat.

Over the course of the next break he found himself growing increasingly frustrated. The dictionaries that he had found were inadequate for his purpose, small and often lacking the scientific vocabulary that he required. He understood that the Eidisi did not want to share their language with just anybody, but how could such a proud people produce such bad dictionaries?

He paused and rubbed his forehead as he could feel the beginnings of a headache before he sat up completely straight and picked his pen up again. He had decided that he would make a list of all the problematic words. Perhaps he would be able to find out what they meant if he translated the rest of the text first. He had never been a man that gave up easily.
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Inali had spent the majority of her day poring over multiple dictionaries and articles. Each one brought her closer to her goal of mastering Rakahi, though she was beginning to wonder how long the journey would take. Each day brought a new host of challenges: articles written by eminent scholars contradicted each other, dictionaries provided too much information, and worst of all, the nib of her ink pen was starting to fail. Inali peered down at the metal tip, sighing as she identified the culprit. The left tine was bent a few degrees forward, causing each movement of the pen to splatter ink droplets in a small area surrounding the desired pen stroke. The problem had worsened over the length of the day, and she knew that her latest set of notes on the morphology of ancient Rakahi would be unreadable in the morning.

Grimacing, Inali rubbed her eyes with the palms of her hands in an attempt to chase away the looming headache that threatened to overtake her. After a few trills of blessed darkness, she placed her hands on the table and flipped through her pages of notes from earlier in the day. There were enough annotations and questions written within them to warrant a visit to her linguistics professor tomorrow, which meant that she had done enough work to leave the library for the night.

Inali wasted no time in gathering her parchments and pens. They were tossed into her canvas bag unceremoniously before she grabbed the books that would need to be re-shelved. Only ten bits until she found her freedom in the bottom of a stein of ale. Grinning at the thought, she looped the strap of her bag over one arm and made her way to the reference section where the dictionaries were held. As she passed the natural history section, the Eidisi noticed the flicker of a lantern atop a desk in the distance. Her kin rarely studied in the desks at the reference section – there were too many people moving about and grabbing books. When she turned the corner, she noticed a tall human male, hunched slightly as his hand moved across the paper positioned in front of her. Half concealed by a long row of books, Inali watched him work. She could barely hold back a smirk at the ‘dictionaries’ he was using for a reference. The books contained less than a fifth of their tongue and it omitted critical words – pronouns, locations, and free morphemes. The remaining words contained a host of plurality morphemes, prefixes, and suffixes. While the human would no doubt find some of the words he was looking for, he would be flummoxed by the majority and driven to quit his endeavor within a few trials. That was how the system had been designed. He would return to his kin, cursing the Ancient Language, and they too would vow to never attempt to learn the tongue of the haughty Eidisi.

Inali waited for one more bit, intrigued at the way the blue eyed human held himself. His frustration was clear to her, but he did not slouch or push the books away in anger. He continued writing steadily, occasionally glancing back up to his reference material. Perhaps he was different. There was only one way to tell. Inali stepped out from behind the shelving and replaced her Ancient Language to Rakahi dictionaries on the shelves. Certain that he must have noticed her, she turned around and smiled at him. It was a half smirk, but not so cruel as most Eidisi. She respected that he was trying so hard, even if he was doomed to fail. She spoke to him in Common, uncaring that her mastery of the language was likely as bad as his knowledge of her mother language.

“Books not helping? What you wishing to knew?”

She paused, curious to hear his answer. More likely than not, he was a trader or merchant who was trying to make the best of his shore leave in the city. She had seen many of them here, desiring to better themselves after their taste for ale was sated. Still, he had the look of a learned man. He wrote with a slow, deliberate hand. If she could get close enough to his parchments, she had no doubt that they would be written in a cleaner script than most.
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From the position of certain words within the sentences as well as their frequency the Mortalborn deduced that they were likely pronouns or articles. He opened the biggest Ancient Language to Common dictionary that he had found, which was not saying much, and leafed through it, but to his dismay neither the dictionary nor the books on grammar that he consulted contained those words. He wondered if it had been negligence on the writer’s part, but after finding the next dictionary to be just as lacking, he concluded that it had been done on purpose. While there were without a doubt some languages without articles, he could not imagine a language that existed entirely without some form of pronouns.

He was still not deterred or discouraged though. While another man would likely have screamed and slammed the dictionary shut in frustration before he left the Academy and Viden itself forever, he persevered. Unlike most of the people that came to the Atheneum, he had nearly infinite time. He doubted that the Eidisi had considered the existence of a man like him when they had decided to make their language as inaccessible to strangers as possible.

Since a book on chemistry and alchemy was unlikely to be written in the first or second person, unless it was a chemist’s diary which this particular book didn’t seem to be, those words were likely third person pronouns, although whether they were singular or plural pronouns remained to be seen. Unless they were not pronouns after all, but an entirely different word class?

He furrowed his brow slightly as he considered that possibility, but eventually decided to stick with his initial assumption as it was still the most likely one in his opinion. They were simply to common in order to be anything but pronouns, and the always stood in the vicinity of words that he had identified as verbs and nouns after consulting his dictionary.

It was just as he copied the words in question into his notebook that she approached. Of course he had already noticed her some time prior to that, watching him curiously from behind a row of books.

She was tall, he observed, perhaps slightly taller than him, and he was considered tall among his people, but then Eidisi tended to be extraordinary in that regard. He noticed that she smiled at him, a gesture that he found to be somewhat unusual as most of the Eidisi he had met tended to be arrogant and cold. Not that he minded, he preferred such people to those that always showed their feelings openly, at least most of the time.

“No, they are not“, he replied and raised his head to meet her gaze. His voice was rather deep, and the tone of it was cool, but comparatively polite. He did not smile, but neither did he appear to be annoyed at the interruption. He merely regarded with some sort of vague curiosity and decided to reserve judgement for a later date. ”As you are without a doubt aware. Tell me, Eidisi, why is it that your people are so protective of their language?“

As he said that, he turned the book that he had been trying to translate around so that she could take a look. He did not mind that she spoke to him in broken Common. His grasp of her language was without a doubt much worse. In fact he doubted that he would be able to pronounce any but the simplest of words in the Ancient Tongue correctly.

”And tell me, is the second word in the third line a pronoun and the word next to it a chemical element? I came to Viden to get help with a scientific problem, but it seems as if such a thing is harder to achieve than I had initially thought. I am not the most familiar with your language, and good dictionaries are hard to come by, if they exist at all.”

Some would have spoken those words in anger, but the tone of the Mortalborn’s voice remained calm and very matter of fact. He saw no need to get emotional over such things.
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Once the Edisi had left, the Mortalborn turned back to his book. He had a somewhat clearer idea of how he could translate the text in front of him now, at least enough to find out the most important information without actually speaking the Ancient Language. The dictionary he had been working with so far didn’t only seem to be lacking pronouns, but also free morphemes and location names. The latter was not much of an issue as a book on chemistry and alchemy was unlikely to contain many of them. The free morphemes though posed a problem.

He decided to retrieve yet another dictionary from the shelf because of that, this one a Rakahi dictionary, a language that he was familiar with to some extent at least. In cross-referencing the two dictionaries as well as the books on grammar that he had found he managed to make sense of the text in front of him, not completely and far from perfectly – a proper linguist and speaker of the Ancient Language would likely find his attempt laughable - but enough to find out what it was about and gather the information that he needed in order to continue his research.

The substance that he needed in order to make a working potion could be found in the adrenal glands of the Lotharro. He had no idea how he would go about isolating it and procuring it in large enough quantities that it could be used in a potion yet though. Could it perhaps be taken from the dead or were there other races or animals that possessed traits that were similar to those of the Lotharro?

That, he decided as he closed the books and returned them to their shelves, would require further research.
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Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 3/5
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City: Viden
Language: Ancient Tongue
Language: Common Tongue
Language: Rakahi
Location: The Prime Atheneum

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Fame [/color]xxxxxx Devotion
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I definitely think I need to do something about language. I don't know who decided that the primary tongue of the eídisi was the Ancient Tongue but it certainly wasn't me. Many of them speak and/or understand it, but Viden is only about 20% eídisi... The primary language of Viden (and the eídisi is Common). Therefore I don't want to give you a knowledge specific to that aspect in this thread... because it's not accurate.

3/5 for the Collaboration, because although you tried to finish it, it still doesn't meet criteria for full Collab points, I'm afraid.

Inali, when you return, fling me a PM and I will give you your review.


As you can see, I have provided feedback and reasoning behind my review. If you have any questions, comments or criticism about your review, feel free to send me a PM and we can discuss it.
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